Laura S. Fox
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Chapter Fifty-One – Through The Mud, On Our Way To The Stars His heart felt like an inflated balloon inside his chest, which must be the case or otherwise, he had no explanation for why each step he took lifted him off the ground to the point that he mostly felt like he was floating. So, until now, he had known unknown love – and that had to cover every moment since… when had he really fallen for Matty? Rusty stopped for a moment to ponder over it. Had it been when they went out for ice cre
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Practice dummy for oral sex sounds like a nickname for Hudson that would make Otis giggle. Thank you for the comment, and I'm glad people enjoy the tender - and hot - moments between the main characters, since otherwise, the story is quite heavy on the dark side, this time around.
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You are on to something here... And yes, Otis suffered through an important part of his development, hence the way he talks in the present, the way he thinks, and even his overall appearance are also the result of that. However, through his character, I hold on to the hope that even the harshest conditions cannot quench the rise of a most beautiful flower.
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Oh, I'm sure Otis would love to be your little brother And Hudson's on the job... although, I might surprise you toward the end of it all... Also, that bit about the Mighty Thor... you're so killing me, lol...
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And those unknowns will be revealed as we move on, as I just believe it is important to create a character from all angles, instead of opting for too much info from the get-go. Thank you for all your comments @J.El! You're always here and humble me with your constant interest.
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His part will come back to haunt the pages as we're moving forward... and hopefully, the emerging love between the two main characters will balance the bad.
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And none of those shades would be grey... just pretty pink Later edit: the BDSM parts in this story will be mild - and I'm talking here about Hudson and Otis only.
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1- thanks 2 - I intend to do that little by little as Otis reveals himself as a character.
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Chapter Thirteen – The Straight and Narrow So far, things had worked out just as Jackie had described them to him. Maybe there wasn’t as much frisking involved as his unwitting partner in Jasper’s escape had liked, but Hudson could do very well without it. The memory of his earlier pursuits involving Otis still lingered, and despite freshening up for his job, he could swear the sweet taste of his neighbor was still there on his tongue. “This is so boring,” Jackie said, working a kink
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Chapter Fifty – Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King Matty waited patiently until Jamie let go. Their eyes met again, and he was only half-surprised by the openly appreciative smile Jamie gave him. “I see. Wow,” Jamie said. “You’ll have to spell it out for me,” Matty said. “You’re in love with him.” “Because I didn’t respond to your kiss?” Jamie laughed. He appeared so confident, so easy to like. “I could make you, you know.” “I have no doubt.” “Good.
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Chapter Twelve – Restraint Hudson watched as Otis unhooked the leash from the wall with delicate moves. Heaven help him, he wished he’d never be forced to let his beautiful neighbor out of his sight for long, and that was a new feeling for him. He’d known he liked men ever since his teenage years and had his fair share of notches on his belt, so how come everything about this new guy felt so different? Life’s ambitions must have gotten in the way of a genuine relationship more often than no
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Chapter Forty-Nine – Thank You For The Heartache “Rusty.” Someone was calling his name. It was incredibly annoying. He turned on his other side, but a punch in the shoulder convinced him that he wouldn’t get away even if he growled and pretended to be ready to bite. “What?” “It’s almost noon. Get up. And don’t get all depressed on me,” August scolded him. He ran one hand over his face. He needed a shave. Shower. Get out of the house. And face the world. Huzzah. For
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Chapter Eleven – Blind Spot Hudson could say that he had expected this to happen, as he entered Watkins’s office and was asked to close the door after him. Jackie was there already, with the look of a kicked dog on his face, and stole a glance at him, one filled with pleas of being let off the hook as the master looked elsewhere for another victim. Unlike him, Hudson held his back straight and nodded at Watkins, who sat behind his desk, his fingers steepled in front of him, while his cold e
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Chapter Forty-Eight – Nothing But A Crush Was that the most difficult part of being heartbroken? Matty couldn’t wrap his head around the information written in the textbook in front of his eyes, as all his thoughts continued to crawl back to Rusty, no matter how stubbornly he tried to rein them in. Only several days ago, he had felt so happy and full of hope, and now he was going through the exact opposite. No wonder he had never been in love until now. It sucked, and it went against everyt
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Chapter Ten – Until You Become Nothing But A Dot He liked the smell of sex, but not as much as the man lying in his arms, completely abandoned and gone to the world. Hudson brushed his hand through the silky strands of Otis’s hair over and over, hating the moment when he would have to wake up his precious charge and send him back to his place with a pat on his delicious rump. He would have to do it anyway. How often had he thought with his dick in his life? Not that many times. But now was
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Chapter Forty-Seven – That Guy The door to his bedroom opened. It had to be August again, coming to check on him. For another hour, he could pretend he was still asleep. As much as he insisted on remaining on the sofa downstairs, August had insisted back that he needed to rest and being here inside his old room gave him at least a semblance of safety. The bed dipped by his side and a hand landed on his shoulder. It wasn’t August, so he forced himself to shake off the fragmented slumber
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Chapter Nine – Into the Light of Another The camera had long been forgotten, as Hudson pressed his lips firmly against the soft ones opening for him like a delicate flower. How could some people walk through the world without any of its darkness marring the most beautiful part of them? Yes, he wasn’t mincing words; he meant every one of them as he praised Otis, and it wasn’t only his physical appearance that made him so. Otis’s beauty shone from the inside and it spilled out of him through
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Chapter Forty-Six – The Falling “You know,” August said as they walked back to his house after having dinner with Maddox’s parents and a few of his siblings, “I had no idea you’ve kept so much from me. Your childhood was a hoot.” “Ah, well, some things I’d like to forget myself,” Rusty replied. “The problem is Maddox’s mom will never let me do that. She’s like an encyclopedia of all the stupid stuff her kids have ever done in their lives. My honest suspicion is that she wants to use th
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Well, if you're late, you're in good company, lol, since so am I! Your lil' story was funny... But remember, even the best have to start somewhere. One day, you'll be the James Bond of tracking hot men!
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He-he, thank you very much! Both for forgiving me and for your praise. Hudson will only get in deeper, and Otis the same!
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Otis will definitely have to see the relationship for what it is... without giving spoilers, I believe that it will happen gradually and naturally.
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Yes, Dan, you noticed correctly! They are both in for new experiences, even if Hudson is well versed in sleeping with men. There will be growth for both of them!
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Poor Jackie! Being tossed like that all over the place... But I'm glad to hear that Hudson's leash is long enough for him to play with Otis!
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He-he-he... it must be so!
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Now that is a good bet, sir!
