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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Chapter Two – Research Is the Mother of Learning That was the fifth in two days, Otis dutifully wrote in his notepad. Of course, there could be more since he wasn’t there all the time to spy on his neighbor. Also, standing in the hallway and always pretending to be busy with inspecting the light fixtures for signs that they needed changing – although that wasn’t something that fell within his responsibilities – was highly impractical. There was, as well, the matter of doing all this researc
  2. Thank you! It will be different in many ways from other stories I've written, but I hope people will like it. The evolution between the two characters might also stray (some) from my usual MO.
  3. Thank you for checking out my story! Yes, this one will be quite different from the Sunny Hill saga, in tone as well as characters. But, just as all of mine, it will have a happy end
  4. Could it be you also want Hudson, @J.El? How naughty...
  5. Wow, wow, wow, what does this mean? You don't even know Hudson yet, @Joie J. I'm afraid not many guys will be able to handle him once they get to know him well... nah, just kidding, he's a marshmallow inside - the outside, however...
  6. Yes, that was what I thought, too. Now they're no longer stranger, and while their first encounter in masks and all was very short-lived, this time they had the time to process what was going on. As that song goes... "it's in his kiss"!
  7. The cat's out of the bag and now makes rounds all over the house! No one can catch him! Don't underestimate Matty; he's a guy who thinks fast on his feet. Connor must have had his fair share of salad, lol, no truer words have ever been spoken. I wonder if he didn't fear about hurting Mother Earth by eating her fruits.
  8. Hunger Games reference? Based!
  9. Oh, I would like a finale the equivalent of a Big Bang with dances and music! I can picture them in my head! As for S.H.I.T., they will continue their weirdness!
  10. Ah, now you see hope? Were there moments when you didn't? Just kidding. Yes, I planned the salad reference carefully, in wait for all the puns that will follow... just how my mind works!
  11. Rusty is deserving, I believe, of being the star of a play, lol! Now it's a game of cloak and daggers... I mean swords... I mean The Mighty Thor!
  12. Thank you for all the support, Gary! It's much appreciated!
  13. Ha-ha, you found a way to piss off everyone by claiming them both!
  14. One hour later than you - UTC + 2, or is it + 3 - it should be EET - all these abbreviations are confusing. I think the most correct is GMT +3 because it's summer.
  15. @J.El likes all the boys! Rumor has it he even thinks Connor is salvageable!
  16. That's awesome! And that means we're close timewise - just one hour apart!
  17. oh, gawd... But yeah, I guess they are trained to be polite!
  18. Aww, don't hate me, but it will be more of a 'you're as ugly as you feel' more like. I've just updated the story with the cover I made for this new series, so you'll get a glimpse of Otis, or at least the part of his face he allows people to see. And believe in your Prince Charming! He might not come to you on a white horse, but I bet he'll be someone special!
  19. The glass menagerie will appear, and I don't want to foreshadow, but it's meant to be sort of a Chekhov's gun, storywise. Nobody will shoot at the poor figurines, though. Just saying. Thank you for your comment!
  20. I certainly hope so! And I'm so glad to see you here, in the comments!
  21. At this point, I'm afraid I'm revealing very little. But I think that the more you get to know the characters, the more you'll have a clearer image of them
  22. Thank you for the vote of confidence!
  23. Is this dating advice?
  24. I usually opt for the show don't tell technique in describing the character, which is why I won't put a label on him. However, what lead to the shaping of his character in this manner will become more and more clear as the story moves forward and details of his past are revealed. And no spoilers, but you know me by now, and I love reading all your thoughts on the story, as well as any speculations on what may happen next
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