Krista

Yo-yo. Krista

Happy Birthday!!! Have a good one, Krista

Hey, Grand part two Viv. I bawled when Tracey talked about the Snowman activity with his mother. I cry easy, but shew. You have created a town and place that I' really like reading about so I can't wait for the continuation. Also, I thought the ending was fitting. It didn't seem pushed to me at all, maybe because I don't look at characters at being Gay until they're out in the story. Right now, all I see is two guys, who suffer similarly falling asleep and feeling comfortable. Now, we know that Casey is curious and shows hints of attraction towards Tracey, but it's all hidden from Tracey. What I'm saying is, when is two men comforting one another seen as strictly gay affection? I know something has to happen to confirm or contradict what has happened at the end of this part, but right now as is all I see is Casey's attraction and two people who are more alike than they first thought comfirting each other. Again, good complete story Viv. Krista

Recluse. Krista

Asia. Krista

Knoppix Krista

Veterinarian Krista

Yearly. Krista

Oh.. um.. hmmm... *wink* *wink* I've never been drunk. Krista

Lol.. I don't. Beer is nasty. Do you own... home made arts and crafts from your childhood? Krista

Depends on how drunk I am really... lol. I'm kidding.. hmm... I like the Freak Out all one. Only "special occassions" should be reserved to the slow dances.. lol. Let's see... Seeing the future or getting a second chance with your past? Krista

lol.. I sure do... don't forget meddlesome. The person below me is an insomniac. Krista

Reticulated Python. Krista

Yearning Krista

Hilarious Krista

Sinful. Krista

Lust Krista

Lost - Faith Hill. It's an addicting song.. Krista

Hey, Sometimes, the story idea you had isn't supported by what is going to continue it. Maybe you don't have the research or your ideas completely in order. Then you get discouraged and you never go back to it. I think working on two or three of your favorites, outlining them. Even forcing a first or second chapter out of your system could give you the confidence to go back and work on those chapters. Also, focusing on characters or the "world" your characters are in takes away from the struggles of the idea you may have. That could also help you with your plot problems. Characters also drive a story for me, if I don't like the characters or they're not enough to keep me going then I don't until they do. Just taking yourself away from the story idea could also help. Krista

Hey, Lol. I don't know, we'll have to wait and see. It's a huge step for me to take on 20 or so page of a second part. I'm working on the Fall Anthology some now, planning it out and starting the writing. Anyway, I'll think "happy thoughts" about a part two.. lol. Krista

Leopard Krista

Castle Krista

Hey, Thanks for reading and commenting. I did leave this story open for a continuation, I wasn't intending to do that, but out of all the shorts I've done, these characters would be the ones I'd want to keep writing about. So I'll make a point to attempt a second part inbetween the ending of a serial and starting work on one I have on hold. Krista

Hey, Thanks for reading! I never would've thought my characters would've been that developed.. lol. I guess Third Peson Perspective opens character development up a lot more easier as they now have their own thoughts. Anyway, I'm glad you read my story and commented on it. Krista

Hey, oOo.. another good guess. You both made my day. Thanks, Krista