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The clinking of cutlery and plates mixed with chatter and scraping of chairs against the floor as the remaining six contestants took their seats in the dining room for their morning meal. Even though not all of them were hungry, they decided to sit and have a meal together, knowing that every day their group was getting smaller. “It feels so empty now that it’s only the six of us,” Tiffany was the first to state the obvious. “I miss all of them, even Gloria.” “Even Gloria!” Marcus coul
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That's awesome to hear! It's also unlike anything I've ever written before, so I'm glad it hit the mark.
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Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
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Thank you @Summerabbacatfor reading and being so invested in the story! You've made a lot of good observations, but no matter how much I'd like to discuss them, I don't want to spoil anything. I will say one thing tho - the finals will be a 4-way battle!
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! You're right tho, it is still too early to predict a winner. Who knows what could happen in the next few days?
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A knock on the door surprised Clementine as she stood in front of a mirror in her bedroom, putting on her morning face cream. Curious, she walked over and turned the knob. “Hey, Clementine, can I come in for a second?” Kelly stood at the door. “Of course. What’s on your mind?” “Ugh, a lot,” the singer shook her head, an irritated look on her face. “Look, I’m not going to beat around the bush.” “I appreciate that.” “You did great yesterday, but um… it wasn’t so great for
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Thank you so much @Summerabbacat for your wonderful and insightful comments! I'm glad you're finding the story entertaining and even emotional at times. The "line of coke" comment really had me laughing because that wasn't something I even considered when writing that scene. See you in the next chapter!
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Thanks! We shall see if their little affair complicates things...
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Ooh that surname does go well with Kelly's name, but at least our girl has an actual talent, annoying as she may be. And I'm glad you like Tiffany, she's been a lot of fun to write.
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It's funny you should mention Agatha Christie and her murder mysteries, but that's all I'll say for now. I don't want to spoil anything. And you have a good point, it is kind of similar, although of course much more light-hearted and without grisly murders - no matter how much one might want that.
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Sounds like Samson is not the only one annoyed by Kelly. 😄 And yes, donating to animal causes is a great suggestion! Once again, thank you for reading and commenting.
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Thank you for the great comment! It's definitely high praise if you consider my story entertaining enough to watch, so thank you! I'm also not a big TV fan (especially not of reality shows), but I got inspired by a certain variety show on Youtube, plus I wanted to write some more about my characters from Charttoppers.
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“If our previous game challenged your sense of taste, the next one will test your sense of touch.” After the disappointing results of the ice cream challenge, Nicholas Stone was announcing the third round for the day. “It’s a game we like to call ‘Cheek to Cheek’.” “I hope it’s not the cheek I think it is,” Rico said. “I hope it is,” Samson replied with a smirk. “In pairs, you’ll sit next to each other and get blindfolded. Then, we’ll put a mystery item between you. You must guess
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With two contestants already gone, the Playground Mansion was slowly starting to feel empty. As the eight remaining celebrities sat in the dining room having breakfast, every now and then someone would glance over at the two empty seats. No one seemed to be ready to go home yet. “Does anyone have any idea what we’re going to be doing today?” Rico asked, still in high spirits after yesterday’s win. “No, I wish they’d give us hints! I can’t stand this suspense,” Tiffany complained. “And
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Oooh burn! Is that what Jamie Cnahdhebdjskdj told our Queen? The bastard! Thank you for reading!
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Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write.
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The second morning in the Playground Mansion found everyone feeling eager to start the new day and find out what games they’ll be playing next. After breakfast, the contestants made their way to the lounge, hoping Nicholas would show up to update them on what they’ll be doing that day. However, when the host arrived, it became clear they might have been a little too eager. “Today’s round of games will begin later in the afternoon. But first, we’re preparing an extravagant pool party for all
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The outdoors playground area was abuzz with excitement as the contestants gathered for their first round of games. The crew had already set everything up for the games, although it was all still under covers. Several cameras were already placed all around, recording every moment. Dressed in sporty outfits, everyone wanted to do their best to win, as no one was ready to go home on day one. Eric and Rico, both wearing their official jerseys, bounced a basketball between them, while Tiffany wa
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There was excitement and anticipation in the air as hundreds of people gathered in front of a large, golden gate leading to an opulent mansion, waiting for the doors to finally open. They were all here for one thing - lucky invitees eager to see their favorite celebrities in the flesh, at least for a moment before they are whisked away to the grand villa to participate in the much talked about new variety show. “What’s happening? Where is everyone?” a young, thin guy in an oversized basketb
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Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to The Playground - the biggest and wildest competition featuring your favorite stars. Over the next seven days, ten celebrities will be living in our Playground Mansion and competing in a variety of games. But they better hold nothing back, because there can only be one winner! Each round, one person will be eliminated from the show until we crown the Playground King or Queen!
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Thank you again! So glad you enjoyed this one too. Jeremy is definitely a beloved character, he's very precious 🥰
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Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was one of my first stories, and if I did it now, I would've definitely changed some stuff, but it is what it is.
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I'm definitely glad I read this story! It ended on a good note, with a lot of introspection and acceptance by the cast. It feels like a complete story, but it also has a somewhat open ending that leaves you wanting more - which is the best kind of ending imo. I think I knew on some level that we weren't going to get answers to who trapped them in the game and why, and I'm fine with that. Yes, I would've liked to get answers to those questions (who wouldn't?), but I totally agree with your reasoning that it would've detracted from the main focus of the story. (Plus this way I can have my own theories and I can delude myself that they're correct.) And of course, that can always be covered in a potential sequel or prequel.
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This was a great chapter, it was really interesting to see everyone's thoughts and how they grieve and deal with loss in different ways. On to the final chapter, I'm curious to see how you wrap this up.
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And that's what I like about the story. They're not being forced to fight by the devs or even monsters themselves, so everything the players do is on them. So they have to live with knowing that. And of course, those who don't do content but just sit around in the safe zone all day don't get to have screen time. Reading about them definitely wouldn't make for a very fun story. XD
