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I mean you're not wrong 😄
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It was the morning of the grand finals, the last day at the Playground Mansion. With only four contestants remaining, the grand residence felt emptier than ever. Still, the tradition of having their meals together went uninterrupted, as all four celebrities came to the kitchen at the same time to have their breakfast. Even though seeing Eric was the last thing he wanted, Samson decided to show up anyway. He couldn’t stop thinking about Eric’s confession from the night before, how the athlet
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Soon after having lunch the next day, the five remaining contestants found themselves down in the gaming room – but not by choice. They were all told to gather down there, as the new round of games was about to start. Much like the last time they competed there, the room was arranged so that the center space was cleared out, while the camera crew was all set up against the far wall, ready to begin shooting. Unlike the last time, the center area contained five beanbags, one for each contestant.
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I'm glad I managed to hit the right level of fun and bitchiness! Thank you so much for reading!
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Thank you @Summerabbacat for the awesome feedback, as always! I'm happy to hear you found the missions fun, I certainly had a lot of fun writing this chapter. As for what fate awaits Kelly, you'll just have to wait and see! No plans for a standalone story of Samson and Troy, but who knows, maybe we'll see them together again in some capacity.
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The clinking of cutlery and plates mixed with chatter and scraping of chairs against the floor as the remaining six contestants took their seats in the dining room for their morning meal. Even though not all of them were hungry, they decided to sit and have a meal together, knowing that every day their group was getting smaller. “It feels so empty now that it’s only the six of us,” Tiffany was the first to state the obvious. “I miss all of them, even Gloria.” “Even Gloria!” Marcus coul
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That's awesome to hear! It's also unlike anything I've ever written before, so I'm glad it hit the mark.
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Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
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Thank you @Summerabbacatfor reading and being so invested in the story! You've made a lot of good observations, but no matter how much I'd like to discuss them, I don't want to spoil anything. I will say one thing tho - the finals will be a 4-way battle!
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! You're right tho, it is still too early to predict a winner. Who knows what could happen in the next few days?
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A knock on the door surprised Clementine as she stood in front of a mirror in her bedroom, putting on her morning face cream. Curious, she walked over and turned the knob. “Hey, Clementine, can I come in for a second?” Kelly stood at the door. “Of course. What’s on your mind?” “Ugh, a lot,” the singer shook her head, an irritated look on her face. “Look, I’m not going to beat around the bush.” “I appreciate that.” “You did great yesterday, but um… it wasn’t so great for
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Thank you so much @Summerabbacat for your wonderful and insightful comments! I'm glad you're finding the story entertaining and even emotional at times. The "line of coke" comment really had me laughing because that wasn't something I even considered when writing that scene. See you in the next chapter!
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Thanks! We shall see if their little affair complicates things...
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Ooh that surname does go well with Kelly's name, but at least our girl has an actual talent, annoying as she may be. And I'm glad you like Tiffany, she's been a lot of fun to write.
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It's funny you should mention Agatha Christie and her murder mysteries, but that's all I'll say for now. I don't want to spoil anything. And you have a good point, it is kind of similar, although of course much more light-hearted and without grisly murders - no matter how much one might want that.
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Sounds like Samson is not the only one annoyed by Kelly. 😄 And yes, donating to animal causes is a great suggestion! Once again, thank you for reading and commenting.
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Thank you for the great comment! It's definitely high praise if you consider my story entertaining enough to watch, so thank you! I'm also not a big TV fan (especially not of reality shows), but I got inspired by a certain variety show on Youtube, plus I wanted to write some more about my characters from Charttoppers.
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“If our previous game challenged your sense of taste, the next one will test your sense of touch.” After the disappointing results of the ice cream challenge, Nicholas Stone was announcing the third round for the day. “It’s a game we like to call ‘Cheek to Cheek’.” “I hope it’s not the cheek I think it is,” Rico said. “I hope it is,” Samson replied with a smirk. “In pairs, you’ll sit next to each other and get blindfolded. Then, we’ll put a mystery item between you. You must guess
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With two contestants already gone, the Playground Mansion was slowly starting to feel empty. As the eight remaining celebrities sat in the dining room having breakfast, every now and then someone would glance over at the two empty seats. No one seemed to be ready to go home yet. “Does anyone have any idea what we’re going to be doing today?” Rico asked, still in high spirits after yesterday’s win. “No, I wish they’d give us hints! I can’t stand this suspense,” Tiffany complained. “And
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Oooh burn! Is that what Jamie Cnahdhebdjskdj told our Queen? The bastard! Thank you for reading!
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Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write.
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The second morning in the Playground Mansion found everyone feeling eager to start the new day and find out what games they’ll be playing next. After breakfast, the contestants made their way to the lounge, hoping Nicholas would show up to update them on what they’ll be doing that day. However, when the host arrived, it became clear they might have been a little too eager. “Today’s round of games will begin later in the afternoon. But first, we’re preparing an extravagant pool party for all
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The outdoors playground area was abuzz with excitement as the contestants gathered for their first round of games. The crew had already set everything up for the games, although it was all still under covers. Several cameras were already placed all around, recording every moment. Dressed in sporty outfits, everyone wanted to do their best to win, as no one was ready to go home on day one. Eric and Rico, both wearing their official jerseys, bounced a basketball between them, while Tiffany wa
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There was excitement and anticipation in the air as hundreds of people gathered in front of a large, golden gate leading to an opulent mansion, waiting for the doors to finally open. They were all here for one thing - lucky invitees eager to see their favorite celebrities in the flesh, at least for a moment before they are whisked away to the grand villa to participate in the much talked about new variety show. “What’s happening? Where is everyone?” a young, thin guy in an oversized basketb
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