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Now this was a fun chapter! You really wrote the fight scenes well, and I liked seeing all the different mechanics the enemies had. Looking forward to more of this.
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Step Forward, Stride Onward
ObicanDecko commented on Nightlit's story chapter in Step Forward, Stride Onward
Good to see what other characters are doing! Digging the new friendship/alliance between Stephan, Armon and Jer, I think it will be good for all 3 of them. Also, I love pet builds in games, so I definitely recognize myself in Armon. It's just fun having an animal companion fight by your side. (Tho I'm not a big fan of summoners like the Necro in Diablo. I prefer just one or two pets than a whole army.) -
Tbh this was confusing for me too. They started out this story as friends and suddenly they no longer are, and I'm not quite sure why? I understand your explanation, but it seems to happen so out of the blue in the story. On another note, I'm a fan of Wake and the whole big scary brooding guy thing he's got going on. A shame that the game deprives them of the pleasure of kissing!
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How many players are there in the game overall, and how big is the world exactly? Could it be that there are some players who started the game in another part of the world, completely separate from this group? I like the build planning aspect of it, although I gotta say all of the game mechanics are a bit confusing and difficult to follow even for someone who is a gamer. I guess it's different just reading about something and actually playing. The part about no arousal/erections is def concerning. If the game can do that, what else can it do to their bodies/minds?
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Chapter 35: The Danish Gambit – Part II
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 35: The Danish Gambit – Part II
Omg finally! I needed this story back in my life. -
Lots of action in this chapter, which I always like! I still wonder where the story is heading, will there be some bosses/monsters from the game the players will have to face, or will other players actually be the main villains. Guess I'll have to wait and see...
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No underwear! There's gonna be a lot of peepees exposed! 😄 I have to admit, they completely lost me when they started discussing the layout of the hallways and rooms at the lodge, but I don't think that will matter in the grand scheme of things anyway. It was very interesting to hear them discuss the possibilities of how and why they ended up in the game. I think it's definitely not an accident, but a deliberate (and very unethical) experiment - either to test some new VR technology, or a psychological test... Or both. I wonder what Asa thinks Luke is doing. Fighting goblins?
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Unpleasant and Unexpected
ObicanDecko commented on Nightlit's story chapter in Unpleasant and Unexpected
I've never played MMOs since I'm not a fan of multi-player games in general, but as a gamer this is still right up my alley. So far, it's kind of giving me Lord of the Flies vibe, with a group of people finding themselves stranded in a strange environment and creating a new society. Looking forward to see where you're taking this. -
Terry's dream is obviously important, either as a premonition of what will happen, or a more general warning that he will be in some sort of danger. Also, Cynthia is my new favorite character all because of this quote: "Popularity is no excuse. I can't abide all of these worn out and unoriginal phrases people use." So true!
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Whew, that Karen sure is passive aggressive! Colin has competition for the most annoying cinema worker. Both Terry and Cynthia seem to be having fun playing detectives, I can't wait to see what else they uncover. I don't even wanna come up with any theories just yet, I'm just enjoying everything being slowly revealed bit by bit.
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Loving the mystery so far! At this point it could be anything - like Terry said, we don't have enough information yet. Also, Maurice turned out to be surprisingly useful. I was ready to write him off and coldly suggest that Terry should have had him removed from the cinema, but I guees good on him for having more patience than me. 😛
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I really enjoy your writing! This was another great chapter, I especially liked the interactions with all the cinema visitors, like the three old ladies and Maurice. And now there's also the matter of the strange entity that began making itself known. Looking forward to learning more about it!
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I don't think I've read any of your stories yet, but I'm enjoying this one so far. I was already intrigued by the summary and the chapter titles being tarot references. Looking forward to continuing with chapter 2 and beyond! Terry seems like a very perceptive person, I'm very curious about his powers - as well as Cynthia's, since she's supposed to be a psychic.
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Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you still remember (see what I did there)! 😜 I've been kinda wanting to do a Brandon story, but I haven't had the time. Hopefully in the future...
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Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
Yes a new chapter! Dani is finally starting to become more decisive and not let people push him around. He knows his worth now. Also he's right that Ciprian is probably more dangerous than Deadnus. I wouldn't be surprised if Ciprian was willing to sacrifice even his own family members for the sake of getting his way. The mysteries of what happened to Dahlia and who killed Vinicius remain unsolved, and I'm so eager to see what actually happened there! If only Dani's dreams weren't so cryptic and vague -
Comment/poem of the year!
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Ooh that's interesting! I watch SciShow from time to time, but I never thought they'd make a video about Esthor. 😛Thanks!
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Chapter 32: The Immortal’s War
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 32: The Immortal’s War
Well that took a turn. I wonder if there is actually a child and if it's someone we've already met? Demetrius is right, tho, Dani has to step up and act like the most powerful Special he is. He's been playing a damsel in distress for too long, letting everyone boss him around. As always, I'm eager for more! -
Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
As others have said, I think the Princess thought that Dani resembles Dahlia, whoever she actually was. I think she was someone who meant a lot to Vinicius, so he may have wanted to make Dani look like her to keep her memory alive. So they're moving Dani to Maratoni's compound. If the Protection League goes to search for him there again, and Maratoni gets terribly hurt, oh well 🙂 I'm still not fully convinced Deadnus was behind the assassination attempt. The prophecy did say someone would betray Dani, and I bet whoever it is had something to do with him being shot. Anyway, another great chapter! Looking forward to more. -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
I'm pretty sure there will be more than two sides for Dani to choose instead of just the government and the monarchy. I think Dani's decision will ultimately be affected by the truth about who killed Vinicius, because just as Vincent is driven by desire to avenge his family's deaths, Dani wants to avenge his mentor's death. Good to have you and the story back! Happy new year! 😃 -
Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
Ok how is he going to get out of this one? 😆 Really enjoying this story, I've basically binge-read all of it in two days. My latest theory (which is probably completely off) is that Vinicius gave Dani the power of rebirth, not just for Dani himself but also so that he could turn other vampires back into humans, maybe as a way to keep both sides in check in case of another war. Anyway, I literally don't trust anyone except Dani, Graham and Melinda. Next chapter when? Tomorrow? Works for me! -
Chapter 15: The Five Specials
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Five Specials
Like mentor, like student. I didn't expect anything else from Demetrius. Also I just had a weird thought, what if Vinicius faked his own death? It's probably highly unlikely, but still... -
Chapter 14: There Is No Rebirth
ObicanDecko commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 14: There Is No Rebirth
Sorry for not commenting sooner, but I was binge reading the story because I'm enjoying it so much! It's really hard to put down. I am really loving the world you've created, a very unique take on vampires! Plus, who doesn't like a good mysterious prophecy? (I have a feeling Trusting will be on Dani's side, while Angelo or Laura will betray him.) Anyway, on to read more! -
I think a wrestling competition with 12 contestants would be awesome! Maybe like a sequel to To The Stars. 🤩
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I was aiming for bittersweet - I hope I managed to soften the blow with the epilogue and make the ending not so sad.
