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ObicanDecko

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  1. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 2

    Seems like Toby will be there to comfort Liam, or actually they will comfort each other. Hopefully it's what they both need.
  2. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 1

    Sad, but beautiful. I'm loving this story already, the way you described their thoughts and feelings is amazing.
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    Arrival

    thank you
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    Discovery

    Thanks for the kind words, I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!
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    Chapter 6*

    Interesting story so far, very engaging characters. I wonder how long until Landon's past is revealed to the family? Also, I wonder if Jake will have a storyline of his own?
  6. (Adam) “I’m Hiri, this is my home. Please,” she opened the door and motioned for me to go in after her. My curiosity prevailed and I followed, feeling excited more than afraid. I knew I was supposed to feel scared, but I just didn’t. She must’ve done something to me, I don’t know what, but I don’t think it was anything evil, just something… strange and powerful. As I entered her hut, everything was pretty much as I expected, just way more cozy and curious. Shelves were covered in
  7. ObicanDecko

    Confidence

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    Confidence

    So you're still stalking them? Thank you, your comments always inspire me to write more!
  9. ObicanDecko

    Confidence

    maybe your comments will bring him bad luck, who knows...
  10. ObicanDecko

    Confidence

    I couldn't agree more. I know I wish I had a mentor of sorts or a youth center where I could've gone when I was younger. Alas, living in a homophobic country, such things are still not a reality here.
  11. ObicanDecko

    Confidence

    Who knows...? (Even I'm not sure at this point)
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    Confidence

    I'm glad you like Tim! Hmm maybe I'll take that suggestion for a future chapter
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    Confidence

    The past few days have been a dream come true for Cody. Ever since Trick and he officially became a couple, life just seemed so much better. He had the will and strength to do anything, it was like nothing could bring him down. Even though Trick was still back home for the holidays, they managed to see each other almost every day, either going out or staying at one of their homes, just hanging out and kissing… a lot! The meeting with Cody’s family went great, just like he expected it to. Co
  14. ObicanDecko

    Crazy Day

    Noooooo! Why couldn't you have them work as dog groomers or something, not firefighters where they get injured after 2 chapters! Ok rant over, but Payton has to be fine!
  15. Thanks, I appreciate it very much! Hopefully not too smoothly 'cause that would be boring
  16. I may have been binge reading your stories for the past few days because they are all so good! This one is no exception, although it's not a typical love story. Your characters are always so interesting. Luckily, I have a lot more to go!
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    The Test

    Nice, I love Fire Valley as well! You are really going all out with updates this week!
  18. What can I say, we definitely disagree on this one. I don't think the cases you mentioned are comparable. And as you said "It may be unforgivable to you but that doesn’t mean it is to everyone." We have different levels of tolerance and that's ok.
  19. That's interesting, I didn't know that's how it originaly ended. There you go, sometimes you should trust your first instincts But seriously, the fact we're discussing this so much is only a testament to your great writing and engaging characters, even if I disagree with the outcome.
  20. So you're planning the wedding already! I have a feeling Trick's mom is gonna have a long heart-to-heart talk with Cody's mom, just to be on the safe side.
  21. Lol I already booked a flight to UK to give Kay a piece of my mind! It feels like he didn't learn anything or grow emotionally: he remained fragile and depressed, unable to move on with his life because of a failed relationship; he saw no other choice but to forgive the cheater and get back with him. Can't help but wonder: what would've happened if he didn't find out about Jake that night? Would Jake's lies continue through the entire college? I will say this, though: if the story ended with ch.6, it would've been perfect.
  22. Ok, so... that happened. Maybe I better not comment further because I'm not sure how I feel just yet.
  23. ObicanDecko

    The Test

    Awesome chapter, tho I had to go back to the first one because I forgot what the story was about I hope Caleb continues being happy with Matt and Jon and maybe finds a love interest soon...
  24. Nice chapter, I'm glad Kaleb came to his senses and made up with Davis! And (at the risk of sounding like @droughtquake) I'll be honest, I have no clue who Wesley is, I just remember Nan dancing with him
  25. I was just curious, thanks for the response! You're doing a great job with all of the characters!
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