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Me too.

Gnomie alert! RUN!!!

The best part of this site's format allowing reader comments is having readers like you. The things you pick up on often make me go "whaaaaht?" Your insights make me realize that even though I may not realize it as I'm writing, subconsciously I'm subtly connecting the dots. (Occasionally you trip me up and I dm Gnomie in a panic... lol. It warrants a trip to the editing store) Trevor gets addressed shortly. The fire elemental... not until the next story. (I gotta leave a few loose ends!) I love readers like you. I also hate readers like you. You keep me on my toes, don't miss a trick and find a few things that send me into edit panic mode. Don't ever stop. Caleb's issues in this story is the segue into the next. Which I need to get working on as soon as this finishes posting. Right now my brain cells can't handle it. Thank you Mags!❤

But we love him anyways!

I swear I'm getting my chapters mixed up at this point. Last chapter I was commenting on their appearance not realizing the details were in this chapter. Too many balls up in the air!

Elijah overheard Tyler mumbling in his dream and assumed he was saying Boston. Go back and read it again. This time use your reading glasses.

It's keeping track of those threads.... oy very! Thank you. And thanks for being one of my followers since the beginning.

This chapter went through some pretty intense rewriting before being sent off to editing. The last chapters are in the process of going from super-rough draft to something I can send over for editing. The hardest part of writing this story for me was the fact that I wrote it so quickly, a lot of major issues were missed or skimmed over. Especially the last 10 chapters. I may have to add a chapter or two to properly resolve the things that have to be addressed. I'm trying to figure it out now. The bones are there, I just gotta add the meat. Lol

Navigating their relationships is going to be like walking a tightrope with no safety net. Right now we have no idea what the twins have gone through and what they're thinking as far as having mates is concerned. They need to break through the communication barrier and figure it out so Ashton and Austin can get the help they need. Sebastian was spot on in having the foresight to bring in therapists. All four of them are going to need it.

You oughtta try keeping up with the notifications. Every time I refresh there's at least 20 more. Lol.

From my understanding most guys are leery of teeth near certain body parts. Ooof... Mama's reaction: Then:

She's an expert at gaming the system.

Plenty of time to cook. Sunday to Wednesday is a the longer stretch. (Whatcha making?)

Stuart was reacting to the overall situation. He saw it as an injustice. In real life there will always be a Stuart somewhere in the mix. I try to bring some believability to my secondary characters when I can. People (and shifters) often jump to conclusions and are reactive rather than proactive. I see it everyday. The only ones who would really know if Kage was a descendant of the Guardian's would be Cassiel or the king. SO, I imagine you might be on the right track with E and T's future plans.

The twins aren't feral, but they have been isolated from other shifters for a long time. Considering they lost their entire teenage years, I'd be worried if I was Elijah and Tyler. They missed an important social development stage of their lives. It's going to take patience from E and T to help them reintegrate back into pack life, which they know only the basics. It'll be interesting to see how it plays out.

I enjoy sitting back watching the mad dash.

Shouldn't you be editing right now?

I see you made it first to page 2.

Tyler is the perfect character for a little comedy relief. He makes it way too easy.

Caleb has issues that are complicated. Good job at being first on the chapter reaction. Someone had to step up!

This is what she does so well.