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  1. kbois

    Chapter 15

    It remains to be seen how well the cover up worked.
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    Chapter 15

    Butt stink pills crack me up too! I still see the look on Brad's face when Sandi reamed him out..lol. "Grimalkin" was one of those fun finds. You have a good weekend too!
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    Chapter 15

    Two chapters are on my inbox. You'll have them soon. I've come to think of Ralph Loren as Loe's alter ego.
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    Chapter 15

    Evil can most certainly be wrapped up in a beautiful exterior as evidenced by Huntington. I don't think he's capable of turning off his predatory instincts. San Francisco is going to be nail biting for our boys. 'Nuff said.
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    Chapter 15

    I don't mind.
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    Chapter 15

    Well, I don't believe in God. Nor do I believe in being perfect, but neither do I like mistakes or incorrect spellings. It's a writer's due diligence to make sure their work is as close to perfect as it can be at least from a grammatical point of view. Content wise, it's all subjective. We all have our quirks... one of mine is wanting to post when I think the chapter is ready. It's savvy readers like yourself that makes me strive to be a better writer.
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    Chapter 15

    You're not going to convince me to schedule it. 🤣🤣
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    Chapter 15

    Nope... chapter was written on a laptop. Edited on a laptop. Edited and beta-ed on laptops (pretty sure), re-edited on a laptop and given two final read throughs on a laptop. This is why I don't schedule postings! I always find something as I do my final scan of each chapter. Even then things get missed. Oh well.
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    Chapter 15

    Nervousness might be warranted. But you'll have to wait until Wed.
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    Chapter 15

    I did take a little artistic license as I've never been there. They aren't there to sightsee anyway.
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    Chapter 15

    I'm sure the boss has schematics and employee info on the office. Let's just get there. Lol.
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    Chapter 15

    Dammit! Two editors and a beta and everyone missed it..... fixing now!
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    Chapter 15

    Kage isn't going to waltz in during the day. It's established that Huntington stays late most nights alone. Sure the building has security, but realistically they aren't probably not stationed outside his office. He has controlled access for regular people and only those with the right fingerprints and optics can get beyond the first reception area. A shadow can enter stealthily by a variety of access points. Should be an interesting next chapter.
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    Chapter 15

    Thanks. The San Francisco chapters were hard to write for a variety of reasons. I've never been there so I had to do a lot of Googling. Trying to create the right mix of tension and anxiety while balancing these two coming to grips with how much they mean to each other was like trying to write while doing flips on a balance beam. I'm happy with how it panned out. Fingers crossed for the next couple of chapters.
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    Chapter 15

    Your concerns about the demo will be addressed. As far as how much time they have together
  16. kbois

    Chapter 15

    Don't let her fool you. She's one of THOSE morning people. Remember this from last chapter comments? : She's the white one.
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    Chapter 15

    I hope you're right this time.
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    Chapter 15

    You know I'm not commenting on what will happen. As for the sex, I'll make an exception.. of course Elijah and/or Kage is gonna get some! Now... back to your corner.
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    Chapter 15

    Mmmmmmm is right.
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    Chapter 15

    My Korner Krew never lets me down.
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    Chapter 15

    And just like that *snaps fingers* Chris is back in the game.
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    Chapter 15

    San Francisco. The city by the Bay. Renown for its fog, the Golden Gate Bridge, Fisherman’s Wharf, Alcatraz, Chinatown, cable cars, steep hills, and for many, the Gay Capital of the World, or at least the US. As far as big cities went, it was Elijah’s favorite. Then again, he hadn’t really traveled all that much. “Have you been to San Francisco before?” he asked as he watched Kage navigate the steep hills. “Once, a while ago. Have you?” “Yeah. My parents liked to come once
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    Chapter 14

    Part of it will be for our jackets and sweatshirts. Florida does not have coat closets in most older homes. I've always had one. It will also give me extra space to store some smaller kitchen appliances that I don't have room for as the kitchen is smaller than what I had. (The closet will be right before the kitchen). I went from 1800sq ft to 1100sq ft. Big difference when it comes to storage space.
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    Chapter 14

    Y'all need to I'll get to posting when I get to it. I've gotta be up early-ish anyway. I'm finally getting my closet built in my living room. Hopefully it'll get started before 9.
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    Chapter 14

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