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  1. kbois

    Chapter 15

    Sebastian had to take a strong stance right out of the gate. Heads, other random body parts definitely need to roll!
  2. kbois

    Chapter 15

    I like your point of view. A little more to come on the council shifters backgrounds soon.
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    Chapter 15

    You are absolutely right! The threat of exposure is dangerous and has to end.
  4. kbois

    Chapter 15

    Ben can see what type of shifter someone is, he can't tell if they're lying or not.
  5. kbois

    Chapter 1

    Reilly and Kellan truly are BFFs. Reilly can't shift. Keep reading!
  6. kbois

    Chapter 15

    You might be on to something!
  7. kbois

    Prologue

    Hi FanLit! It's great to see you... glad to have you on board. Have fun catching up!
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    Chapter 15

    Either that, or you'll all be sent to the Principal's office. I'll pass the buck and make @Mrsgnomie the principal. 🤣🤣
  9. kbois

    Chapter 15

    He's relying on the other shifters. Just because you can't smell a fart, doesn't mean someone didn't let one loose! 🙄😒😋
  10. kbois

    Chapter 15

    I think I need to find a room with 5 corners.
  11. kbois

    Chapter 15

    I would've been rushing my boys to the hospital!
  12. kbois

    Chapter 15

    All good points. But what's true and what's misdirection? Hehehehe!
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    Chapter 15

    At least we know that Sebastian and crew will come out all teeth and claws, snarling, growling and ready to fight to the death.
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    Chapter 15

    Remember in school when the teachers always had to separate the troublemakers? I know of at least four that need to be sent to separate corners. 🤣🤣 (Kudos to you for working out in the morning. I can't manage until after work)
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    Chapter 15

    Biggest question is: What nuggets of information that the diabolical author threw out there are genuine, and what's merely bait to throw the reader off track?
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    Chapter 15

    My current editing situation:
  17. kbois

    Chapter 15

    Pushy Sebastian reminds me a bit of my Lucifer character. They both can be pretty bold. It's always the quiet ones who get away with shit. It's going to take some time, which they don't really have to sort out who's who.
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    Chapter 15

    Chusi is still an unknown. Good/bad? You'll find out eventually!
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    Chapter 15

    I like pushy Sebastian. There's more important stuff going on, so food got pushed to the side. Sorry! As for the rest.... 🤐
  20. kbois

    Chapter 15

    Mmmmmmmm, debatable 🤣🤣
  21. kbois

    Chapter 15

    They're like little kids waiting for Christmas.
  22. kbois

    Chapter 15

    As soon as Sebastian opened the door it was apparent that the other two couples had also made good use of their limited time alone with each other. All six wolves were content for the moment, and hopefully would behave during the upcoming meeting. Needing to get down to business, Sebastian addressed Ben first. “So tell us what you saw, Ben.” He knew Ben was used to fading into the background and observing. This afternoon’s lunch had been no different. “Councilman Albert’s wolf
  23. kbois

    Chapter 14

    Calm down. I'm working on it.
  24. kbois

    Chapter 14

    The reason I often have to rewrite something is because my smarty-pants readers point something out or pose a question that I realize has to be addressed later on. Y'all keep me on my toes. That and @Mrsgnomiesometimes gets carried away with her red pen. 😆
  25. I hope you get to see your first snowfall next year. There's something special about the first snowfall of the season, or seeing it for the first time. The way it sounds as it crunches under your feet. The hush that surrounds you when you go outside at night, flakes drifting down. The way the cold air nips at your face. That's what I like to remember. I can do without the back-breaking shoveling, scraping snow and ice off the car, blow drying the dog because there's ice balls stuck to its fur, missing gloves, boots that are still wet inside and discovering after two hours outside shoveling that there's no hot chocolate!😆 These days I prefer scraping sand from my flip flops!
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