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When I wrote it that line just flowed naturally. The character speaks... I listen. Enya (btw I had to a 'find and replace' because I spelled it Anya lol) is still a bit of a stranger to me. She's slowly revealing more of herself so I think whenever we see her she'll surprise us with a new side of her personality.
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@astone2292 name dropped in this chapter too in the reference to an NFL linebacker, but like you said, I already went there in the last story. I didn't need to repeat.
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Thanks for saying that. When I sent it to Gnomie I told her I thought the chapter sucked. I did have to edit a good chunk of the meeting as it was too detailed with stuff that didn't matter and really had no purpose to the plot so it needed cleaning up. This is what I think of as a bridge chapter. It gets us from one place to another.
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Sebastian knows this and is now doubling down with preparations. This includes training his able-bodied pack members to fight. But this is Caleb's story so he didn't tell me to write any details about it so we have to trust that the Alpha knows what he's doing.
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Just you wait. Go ahead. Get comfy.
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Caleb's transformation had to be acknowledged. He has come a long way. You may or may not be right about Huntington.
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Since when is anything in these comments fair?
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These kids went through a lot. We need a reminder every once in a while.
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We're you refreshing your screen every five seconds or what? You almost beat Gnomie. But you know the saying.. almost only counts in horseshoes and grenades.
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Staring at the visage in the mirror, Caleb reached toward the image as if to verify it was real. The face looking back was someone he hadn’t seen in a long time. It was an edited version of himself, and the changes were for the better. The realization of how far he had come in the last year and a half sank in. Caleb smiled. His reflection smiled back. “That’s a good look on you.” Turning around, he smiled brighter as Asa stepped into his personal space. Caleb wrapped his arms around h
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Oh hon, you have no idea. Do me a favor? Read the comments. This story is when the Krew really came into their own. It will give you a much better insight as to who I am as a writer.
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Ahhhh.... this Kage dude, yes. Starting with a bang. Did you expect anything else?
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Sometimes it's the smallest things that make a character more real. It's one of the things I've tried to improve on by "showing" vs "telling". So far it seems to be working. Or it could just be dryads doing their thing.
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I'm glad you liked it! I'm also okay with doing a bit of groveling if it will get you to recommend and review the story! (I really want to get to 100 recommendations and I'm at 98)
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I am never, ever, sorry for cliffhanger. Nor will I ever be. 😉
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I just finished with it. Look in your inbox
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I keep telling you I don't drink much anymore so bribes of alcohol won't work.
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Just to upset you maybe. Behave.
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Umm... been there. Vann's already been kidnapped. Why would I go there again? I'd be more concerned about me killing someone off. Somebody's gotta die.
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2023 Anthology - Leap of Faith *Wrap Up*
kbois commented on Valkyrie's blog entry in Gay Authors News
This was fun to participate in and to read the other submissions (most of them at least). Great job to all the GA staff involved. You guys are the best! -
Reilly hit the nail on the head. It is just a matter of time.
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