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Larry Davis

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  1. Jealously is a recipe for disaster
  2. even though Michael and Kendall are together, I think that Michael needs to get over his jealousy towards Chet.
  3. Why did Michael feel the need to Kendall to go the hospital with no underwear on? lol🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
  4. ooh things are finally heating up. Kendall and Michael remind me Noah and Wade from "Noah's Arc".
  5. Oh so now Kendall is fighting for his man? Come on now. This is love
  6. seven chapters later, and we're still talking about the way Kendall acted once he told Michael that he had a crush on him? Come on now, Kendall and Michael just need to fall in love already.
  7. I can totally relating to Michael. Being someone who cares about someone whose in enjoying their time with someone else.
  8. The one thing that I will say is that a mother always know when their son is gay keep up the good write
  9. I'm glad Chet came into the picture. That way, Kendall can stop crying over Micheal. Oh, I forgot, he still is. LOL Keep up the good write.
  10. Michael is giving Kendall all of the signs and Kendall still doesn't catch the hint. Michael is love with Kendall and the feeling is reciprocated. Keep up the good write!!!!!
  11. Let me just start off by saying that I don't like Cassie because she's desperate and thirsty. Second of all, I loved the fact that Michael was willing to his personal feelings aside to resolve the tension between him and Kendall. Keep up the good work!!!!!!
  12. Sure will
  13. I think that every gay boy has been Kendall before. Personally, I can remember being the nerd who was to walk up to a football player and tell them how I feel about them. I will be reading the rest of this short story. Keep up the good work.
  14. Thank You
  15. Since I am from the 90s, that is my favorite genre.
  16. Larry Davis

    Exposition

    I learn that sometimes you have to say something without really saying it . I too used to make sure that the readers knew that my character was gay. However, after taking a few writing classes in college, I learned that there are fun ways of saying the same thing.
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