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James B.

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  1. I so Love this story.
  2. James B.

    Nate In Love

    I too love this family and the relationships. I too am really looking forward to you getting back to Austin.
  3. Great chapter as well as a nice surprise. I was beginning to think the story got abandoned.
  4. Thank-You for the great chapter, letting Johnny live. Now my heart goes out to poor Daniel, It's so hard to believe the things some parents can do and treat their children is so puzzling.
  5. I agree I'm not gonna function correctly till I know Johnny is okay.
  6. I'm so heart broken and going to be impatiently looking for the next chapter. I'm really hoping no one got badly hurt or killed.
  7. James B.

    Evolution

    I Loved this chapter I just wish Grant would come clean about the Troy's Diary before things get to far.
  8. Excellent Chapter! You did an excellent job introducing Cade in to the family and to us. He's very well adjusted, well mannered and very mature. His momma did an excellent with him.
  9. Oh yeah I Love when kids make it into a story especially surprise ones.
  10. James B.

    Chapter 4

    I think Justin and Dion need to get in gear and pay Jeremy.
  11. James B.

    Chapter 2

    I don't blame Justin for being pissed off but he also needs to remember he's keeping secrets too
  12. Really after such a wonderful and caring chapter you had to leave us with there's a cliffhanger at the end of the next chapter. Oh well I'm sure at the end it will all work out.
  13. Well you started the chapter with all 4 of them waking up with there thoughts and Simon's really come back to me when he said ” When I look in the mirror, I shudder at the man I’ve become... a deceitfully bitter man, only looking out for myself. I’m surrounded by more wonderful people than I deserve... and I’ve never been so alone. Then at the party JJ 1st song he sang I think hit Simon in the ❤️ and made him feel really bad about what had occured between him & JJ, and him feeling so deceitful to JJ. I think it was his only way to apologize to JJ.
  14. 😓😓😓😓😓😓
  15. The threesome was definitely awesome, I just hope it was a one time thing. Hoping JJ gets back with Zach. As far as Simon, yes he was creepy, took advantage of the situation with JJ but feel so sad he felt he had to take his own life to make things better. Did he even think how his suicide would effect JJ?
  16. James B.

    Johnny's Take

    Oh, I'm all for Johnny, but must say he can use that monster of his on me too.
  17. James B.

    Overture

    Well I'm loving this story already. Looking forward to the rest.
  18. The only way this chapter could be better would be if I was going to.
  19. James B.

    Good Intentions

    Although I now Grant is trying to help Troy but he really is over stepping messaging Brian and I too believe Brian will think Troy got his house back. Grant needs to sit down with Troy and tell him about the ledger, how he came about and everything up to him moving in. I to am worried about Troy's mental stability at the same time. If he finds out on his very own what Grant has been will he spiral further?
  20. James B.

    Epilogue

    I'm looking forward to more of your stories, especially if there this great.
  21. James B.

    Nate

    OMG!!!!!! POOR NATE😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
  22. James B.

    Chapter 17

    I still don't trust Trevor.
  23. James B.

    Chapter 16

    I am so worried right now about Jesse and Dylan. Those two can't seen to catch a break. Now I believe that Can Edsel guy had Spun beaten and stabbed. I wouldn't be surprised he had something to do with Cody's death. I'm not saying he didn't deserve to be punished but he didn't need killed either. Then poor Diego with his father, Luca over Winston's death. I just really hope Danny, Jesse and Dylan make it back from Florida alive. I wish they had taken security with them.
  24. James B.

    Chapter 12

    Somehow I don't feel like this is the last we heard of TJ and it probably won't be good.
  25. James B.

    Chapter 10

    I'll tell ya reading this chapter had me a little on pins and needles thinking something happened or was gonna happen to either Dusty or Zak. A great chapter otherwise.
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