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  1. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 23

    and is paying for this - and are paying for this: subject-verb agreement
  2. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 20

    I don’t hate you, per say, - Perse There is a very famous photograph taken at, I believe, the Queen's birthday, of a row of military men one of whom was a very well endowed member of the Scots Guards in full Scottish regalia. From the angle of the photo, it was obvious that he was not wearing anything under his kilt!
  3. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 19

    roaster didn’t get to them. - rooster didn’t get to them.
  4. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 18

    Woe, woe, woe. - whoa, whoa, whoa. h’orderves - Hors-d'oeuvre
  5. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 14

    It doesn't make any difference, Italian Catholic or Southern Baptist, it's always the father who has the biggest problem with his son's boyfriend. I think that mothers are easier to get along with than fathers probably because they can express their love for their sons better than can fathers.
  6. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 11

    Is it alright if I feel sorry for Mitch's father? He is so brainwashed. Maybe braindead. I can only hope he will force his mind through a lifetime of negative thinking, start reading the New Testament and pay attention to the story of Christ and John.
  7. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 7

    Hardwood floors everywhere. Granit countertops… Hardwood floors everywhere. Granite countertops…
  8. 9-11 to me is the summation of the negatives of 'organized religion'. If I remember correctly there were four pilots\planes-full of passengers involved; two at the trade center, one at the Pentagon and a fourth forced down by the passengers in Pennsylvania that was heading for the Capitol. These four fanatics believed they were buying their way into heaven by murdering non-Muslims; infidels as they called them. One of the side fictions concerned a nearby mosque where the members of the congregation were supposedly observed dancing on the roof in celebration of the deaths. Later investigation disclosed that the 'dancing on the roof' incident was a political creation, no muslims were dancing anywhere after 9-11; they too were saddened and ashamed that such death and destruction had been caused by religious fanatics.
  9. Will Hawkins

    Past Horror

    can we the worst - can be the worst I was surprised and relieved that the US did not fly over the holy cities of Mecca and Medina and bomb them to rubble after 9-11.
  10. Well, I ran in to Alex - Well, I ran into Alex
  11. Ruben gotten a tentative - Ruben had gotten a tentative - helper verb needed.
  12. The nations taxes - The nation's taxes nations should be a possessive
  13. “Things have gotten very complicated, hasn’t it?” - “Things have gotten very complicated, haven't they?” subject-verb agreement. long before we were attracted attention.” long before we attracted attention.”
  14. Will Hawkins

    John Burke

    Now that you can see it more of the world - Now that you can see more of the world the sun rose and peaked over - the sun rose and peeked over sun rise that long, - sunrise that long,
  15. Will Hawkins

    Second Bite

    to sit at the table long wooden table - to sit at the long wooden table and then…stopped - and then…stop. agreement of verb tense.
  16. Will Hawkins

    Our Wedding

    were would wear - we would wear
  17. breeched - use breached here four posted bed - four-poster bed
  18. A wall-in refrigerator A walk-in refrigerator She was baby girl She was his baby girl
  19. A vampire wantabe? A vampire wannabe? Nothing like having the vampire change taken out of your hands!
  20. I am constantly amazed by the information that is available on the internet. The duration of the sunrise in Charleston, SC that I just calculated is an example of the type of information that can be developed. To check on the appearance of a house in Charleston, SC, google 'shotgun house'. the web page will show you the appearance from the street and a plan view.
  21. Will Hawkins

    More Truth

    Educating people of color was definitely not done. Remove excess 'that'.
  22. Will Hawkins

    Gabriella

    No, hating doilies does not revoke your gay card, it just means you have good taste. You may taste good as well, but we will leave that for a further day. It is wonderful that Colin has found his daughter.
  23. Will Hawkins

    More Truth

    I am different from think you know. I am different from what you think you know. but I willing to give you what I have so far but I am willing to give you what I have so far
  24. Will Hawkins

    My Daniel

    You speak of Daniel as having died April 1, 2017. Not true, no-one is truly dead who lives in the heart of another. Daniel lives in your heart and in your pen (or word processor whichever you use to create the tales you bring to us.) Speaking for myself. I am pleased to think that a little bit of Daniel is in each of the characterizations you employ in your creativity. Mourn his passing, yes, but love his memory.
  25. Just as a note: $60,000 per year is just a hair less than $30\hour. Not a bad starting wage for a Personal Assistant,
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