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Love this soooo much !! Please write faster!! So different and creative and a nice change from the usual teen angst love saga. Keep it rolling!!

You know..I absolutely love your story ok? I truly do ! But!!! ...there's nothing more frustrating than a good author with a good story who can't keep up with his fan's desires and his own stories. I'm sorry but it's true. Its so frustrating and such a waste of time having to re-read several chapters when a new chapter finally comes out just so that u can relearn what's going on and who the characters are and what they're about. Do authors just assume that we stop reading anything while they take a month or several months or a half a year or more off? That's why so many people have stopped being interested in stories by authors like comicality. If its not about vampires or zombies u have to wait so long to get a new chapter from him that you've forgotten what the story is even about! Listen...you've got an awesome story going on here...its truly great ok...but if its going to take so long between chapters people are simply going to lose interest. Please do your story and your fans justice and keep everyone interested and on track ok. Keep up the great work. Thanks. J

Ok...that's cool. Just wondering is all. Carry on! LOL !

Why do you bother to sit here and slowly post new chapters like its brand new to a story that's existed online in its entirety elsewhere for so long ? I so totally don't get it. (?) Are you having a creative writers block ?

Love the story! Hopefully not going to wait so long again for the next chapter. I'd like to know how and when Allen's dad found out that he's gay (??). I feel like that's pretty important to fully understanding everything that's going on. And how does Allen's mom feel.(?) Also...what sort of work do Allen's do that allows them to apparently constantly travel ? Before the shit really hits the fan with Kyle and his psychotic plans I feel like knowing and understanding some of these other details is kind of important. Anyway...I'm seriously enjoying the story and love how the suspense is building ! Keep it up ! 😀

Love the plot twist and building suspense. Can't wait to see what's next! PLEEZE don't make us wait too long! 😉

Awesome!!! 😀

The whole basic premise and fabric of this story is so unique and refreshing. Its a total break from the typical story of the downtrodden loner high school boy who somehow finds improbable love. This story has serious legs to it! Can't wait for what's next! Don't rush it...but damnit get writing!! HA! 😝😄

Yes PLEEEZZEE!!!! Just please hurry damnit! LOL! Its so hard to wait for new stuff in great stories! I love this series...truly...but two things : first, outside of a few dates why is this showing as a new chapter when its not? And second...not to get technical...but your uncle's husband's son (technically by marriage his step son) is not your "cousin in law". There's no such thing in the realm of family relationships. Looking forward to a new chapter...its a wonderful and well written story!

Just please hurry damnit! LOL! Its so hard to wait for new stuff in great stories! I love this series...truly...but two things : first, outside of a few dates why is this showing as a new chapter when its not? And second...not to get technical...but your uncle's husband's son (technically by marriage his step son) is not your "cousin in law". There's no such thing in the realm of family relationships. Looking forward to a new chapter...its a wonderful and well written story!

I love this series...truly...but two things : first, outside of a few dates why is this showing as a new chapter when its not? And second...not to get technical...but your uncle's husband's son (technically by marriage his step son) is not your "cousin in law". There's no such thing in the realm of family relationships. Looking forward to a new chapter...its a wonderful and well written story!

I can relate completely to this story probably more than anyone. I lost my wife and all three of my sons in a horrible tragedy almost 12 years ago that haunts me every day and night. I'm so curious to see how things continue to develop in the coming chapters. Btw...yes I'm gay...but I was one of those married closeted guys for my entire life until December of 2006. After that I saw no reason to hide who I was...or even go on living at all. I basically dropped out of life...and now I live in a very remote wilderness area and basically keep to myself. Enough about me...this is a great opening chapter. It has so many possibilities.... Looking forward to what's next.

Thanks for responding to both my comments about both stories. Its so refreshing to read your work because its not only well written but its also very different and extremely creative. You also have a wicked and wry sense of humor (the comment about johns purse had me in stitches 😄). Hopefully we'll all be reading much more of your work soon...but I'm not trying to rush you. Keep it up!!

Being in the program myself I appreciate the realism and accuracy that you portray it with. So many people who use AA or NA as part of their plot lines obviously have no idea what its like and about and completely distort the truth about it. But not you. Excellent job! Can't friggin wait to read more!

Being in the program myself I appreciate the realism and accuracy that you portray it with. So many people who use AA or NA as part of their plot lines obviously have no idea what its like and about and completely distort the truth about it. But not you. Excellent job! Can't friggin wait to read more!

Awesome chapter...very nice to read something so different and creative. John is a total douche. Stop taking so long between chapters. Get back to work NOW! LOL 😄