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  1. Black Paper

    Runway Runaway

    Thank you so much. So glad you enjoy the story so far. Your feedback always brings joy toy heart! 😌🌜✨
  2. Thank you so much. I truly appreciate that you enjoy the story & the plot. And, yes, it has an ending which is about 30-40% away from this chapter. And, I knew what it would be before I even wrote chapter 1.
  3. The Phoenix The Bird that always dies. The Bird that always flies. Many view it turn into ashes even if they are distant. And, see it come back together in an instant. "He" has wings of fire. Some think "She" is only desire. But, what the Phoenix truly is, Is truly HIS. It is ultimate power at every hour. All darkness, it will devour. It has not even a single feather, yet, always flies. Just like the storm's weather, It rules the skies. It is never foolish & always wise. It has burning eyes. It hates evil & all lies. It sees good & bad. And, that is why it gets mad. Anything that gets in the way of its path, It will destroy it all, with its wrath. Its mind is stronger & longer than anything you can imagine. That is why you can never go in. You wouldn't survive in there, Similar to a Tornado's violent air. It blows & goes everywhere. You think you can beat it? You can never defeat it. Just like water, It has no permanent form. That is why it has the ability to transform. It is so warm... The main lesson of the Phoenix, Is everyone has the power to fix, Anything bad in their life if it is possible. If so, they are responsible. Oh, you think you cannot? That is why the Phoenix is so hot. Because when you use it, You would be surprised how far you can go. Go. Simply, do it and have fun, While The Phoenix burns just like the Sun.
  4. The Phoenix II It has an Inferno tail. It will ultimately succeed. And, never fail. It is neither female, nor, male. That was always its tale. It is both. That is why it has eternal growth. It has never ending flames. It never looses games. It has fire for wings. If you touch them, it stings. You can barely even look at it, Because, it is always lit. It is like a light. It is so right. It is inside of you if you believe it is alright. If you grant it p
  5. The Phoenix The Bird that always dies. The Bird that always flies. Many view it turn into ashes even if they are distant. And, see it come back together in an instant. "He" has wings of fire. Some think "She" is only desire. But, what the Phoenix truly is, Is truly HIS. It is ultimate power at every hour. All darkness, it will devour. It has not even a single feather, yet, always flies. Just like the storm's weather, It rules the skies. It is never foolish &
  6. Pain You have the ability to turn pain into power. Do not let it fool you. Do not let it rule you. Use it to fuel you. From the ashes of failure stem the roots of success. From lost games, can burn new flames. Forget all shames. They can be hotter and stronger and longer then ever. Yes. They can truly burn on forever. Enough crying. Tears are caused by pain, joy, or fears. Wipe them away. Today is a new day. That already is power, But, only if you use it, can you
  7. Pain You have the ability to turn pain into power. Do not let it fool you. Do not let it rule you. Use it to fuel you. From the ashes of failure stem the roots of success. From lost games, can burn new flames. Forget all shames. They can be hotter and stronger and longer then ever. Yes. They can truly burn on forever. Enough crying. Tears are caused by pain, joy, or fears. Wipe them away. Today is a new day. That already is power, But, only if you use it, can you bury the past in the ground and grow a new flower. It takes time like this rhyme that you were meant to read. Patience, to eliminate pain, isn't even what you need. What is required, Is for you to simply let go. And, you will no longer feel tired. Your new flower will grow.
  8. Black Paper

    Runway Runaway

    Sascha has been hopelessly in love with Jesse since he first met him when they were about I'd say 9 years old or 10. And it's hopeless because Jesse's straight. So what's the only thing Sascha can do? Become his best friend. Psychologically, it makes sense. That's as close as he can possibly get to being with him. However, as Jesse became older, he also changed into something that became something that Sascha is slowly starting to realize is not what he wants much to do with. But his heart still clings to him, for now, anyway. I'm sure we can all relate to being in love with someone that we know that we probably shouldn't be and the feelings and friendship that he has with Jesse are very unhealthy. You're right that things were simpler in Georgia. But, perhaps Billy was meant to go there and help people he meets, one of them being Sascha in order to help with this identity crisis and dilemmas. Thank you @PhilippeπŸ’«
  9. Black Paper

    Runway Runaway

    EXCELLENT to hear. Thank you.🍷🍾 Cheers. ~Black Paper
  10. Chapter 16: ~Runway Runaway~ Sitting in the lunchroom cafeteria, the following Monday, directly after Halloween, was a serious case of me being quiet. Everyone around me at my table felt it. I'm sorry. But, I couldn't help it. After everything that happened at my house the previous night, sitting next to Liam, glancing over at Sascha who took peeks at me, and feeling Antonio's identical quiet energy made everyone wonder what was on my mind, including him. Jessica.... the girl th
  11. Thank you so much! Well, now that Liam learned the truth of how Sascha never really betrayed him... Hormones kicked in. And what can we say, sometimes animal instincts kick in.🐾
  12. Not a three-way relationship. Just a three-way experience. Liam & Sasha have some 'history' not boyfriends. No "Full on" history either. Thank you page SπŸ’–
  13. Thank you very muchπŸ₯‚ I'll just give everyone, including you especially, a little spoiler. Liam & Sascha, before Liam believed he betrayed him, used to be somewhat, more than friends: kiss here & there, hold hands etc. Not boyfriends, really. Just that special & unusual category we can all say we've been in... As for Sascha's Father you'll meet him in the next chapter, actually. No, not a mafia man. But, definitely a man of "Black Paper" persona, if you know what I mean.πŸ·πŸŽ©πŸ“œ
  14. Chapter 15: ~The Deadly Medley~ A few minutes after we settled on a movie to watch, particularly, Donny & I who chose it, I heard my Momma. *Thunk Thunk Thunk* Hearing her footsteps go from the first floor to the basement, where we all were, for some reason, gave me anxiety. Actually, there were many reasons. She appeared with a warm grin and a tray full of 4 glasses, filled with homemade lemonade, and a giant silver colored bowl full of popcorn. "H
  15. Black Paper

    3 Musketeers

    Thank you! Yep this Chapter is mainly a precursor to the following two. To sense the feelings of tension. Some Foreshadowing as well. People tend to only write chapter reviews as I suppose they barely even notice story reviews are even available. Which I do not mind. Once again, thank you.🌟
  16. Black Paper

    3 Musketeers

    It also hinted Sascha's home life a little. Which I'll touch on later. Your feedback always brings me inspiration. Thank you.🌴
  17. Chapter 14: ~3 Musketeers~ So, it was all set. As Donny, Sascha, Liam, & I were heading to Dairy Queen after our Trick Or Treating session for our ice creams, I couldn't say the awkward silence was THAT bad; it could have been worse. What was more interesting to me than anything else, were the empty glances that I was able to catch of Sascha looking at Liam as we walked during the night. The looks he gave him, when he thought no one was looking, seemed like he both had alot
  18. The reality is, all authors and artists only want one true thing: we all strive for someone to feel something from something we've created. And the validation that we receive from feedback via comments and/or reactions gives us the validation that someone has received something from something we've created. All stories have pieces of us authors, hidden, inside of them whether it's certain characters, certain scenes, etc. And by having others love those characters and scenes, they are secretly loving us, because, we are in them. If certain people do not like the thumbs up reaction, I simply recommend that the like reaction be removed and be replaced with the love reaction and have the love reaction be the new like reaction just like Instagram and other social media platforms use the heart as the only like reaction icon platform for that very same reason. Thank you. Black PaperπŸŒ™
  19. Most of those are one shots to which case it's acceptable. As a writer, poet, and author, myself, I'm simply stating my personal literary opinion. Stay safe. Stay loving. God bless. I understand your viewpoint. Everyone's different. Everyone's hearts are different. Everyone's desires are different. And, how we respect one another ultimately defines us as people.🌟
  20. I'm going to have to formally disagree with you. Scotty Lynch has been introduced from the very beginning as a main character of the story for an important reason. And the reality is, I suppose you could say, it was Tristan's destiny to find someone for him. I believe the main characters of this story are not just Jesse and Tristan. That would very quickly become boring and useless as a story plot. That wouldn't be much of a story at all. I believe it's Jesse, Tristan, Scotty Lynch, and Artie. The foundation of a good story and a plot is at least four or more main characters in it otherwise the story becomes stale. Unless it's a one shot, which in this case, it's not.
  21. I mean, he was cute, sure...I'm not blind. But as I watched Artie shiver and wiggle and basically fall apart right in front of my eyes...I began to wonder if I was missing out on something all this time. Of course you did, you half-wit. Scotty Lynch is Com's best character ever created, besides Tanner, and I won't tolerate any excuses. but when Scotty grinned at him and asked, "Can I see more of the drawings in your notebook?" Com, you better stop writing cute sh++ like this, because, you're giving me heart palpitations.❀️ Love this story. Love this chapter. Love you Com. ~Black PaperπŸ₯€
  22. Sascha has already technically shown Billy how he feels about him in Chapters 9 & 10, particularly, when he tries to kiss him and held his hand while they were alone on his bed. So, Billy knows that he's interested in him, or at least pretty gay for the most part. The question is, what happens to Sascha, now? Thank you for reading and your great feedbackπŸ’ŽπŸΈπŸŽ Here's an apple martini. Something I'm sure Billy's mom doesn't mind having once in awhile, whatsoever.πŸ˜’
  23. Your soul tells you that, because it's obvious Sascha is a lost soul in general. Billy is one of the only people who sees that and so do you. 🍎
  24. @Philippe Wow thank you so much for the exceptional examination of the chapter, relationships, and the overall plot of the story, itself. Wait till you see when they.... start unwrapping their Halloween candy 🍭🍫πŸ”₯
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