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Black Paper

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  1. I mean, he was cute, sure...I'm not blind. But as I watched Artie shiver and wiggle and basically fall apart right in front of my eyes...I began to wonder if I was missing out on something all this time. Of course you have, you half-wit. Scotty Lynch is Com's best character ever created, besides Tanner, and I won't tolerate any excuses. but when Scotty grinned at him and asked, "Can I see more of the drawings in your notebook?" Com, you better stop writing cute sh++ like this, because, you're giving me heart palpitations.❀️ Love this story. Love this chapte
  2. Sascha has already technically shown Billy how he feels about him in Chapters 9 & 10, particularly, when he tries to kiss him and held his hand while they were alone on his bed. So, Billy knows that he's interested in him, or at least pretty gay for the most part. The question is, what happens to Sascha, now? Thank you for reading and your great feedbackπŸ’ŽπŸΈπŸŽ Here's an apple martini. Something I'm sure Billy's mom doesn't mind having once in awhile, whatsoever.πŸ˜’
  3. Your soul tells you that, because it's obvious Sascha is a lost soul in general. Billy is one of the only people who sees that and so do you. 🍎
  4. @Philippe Wow thank you so much for the exceptional examination of the chapter, relationships, and the overall plot of the story, itself. Wait till you see when they.... start unwrapping their Halloween candy 🍭🍫πŸ”₯
  5. You won the award on September 9th. Interesting, considering, that's my birthday. And, The Artful Dodger just so happens to be one of my favorite characters of all time.

  6. Chapter 13: ~How Do You Like Them Apples~ "Mmmmmmm." My teenage high school enemy said to my mother with a grin on his lips as we were all still standing around at one of my family's business tables up front of my orchard. "This cider is suuuuuuper good, Mrs. Irving! Best drink I've eveeeeerrrr had." He was so fake. UGHHHHH. The level of almost professional sarcasm made me wonder how he developed such a skill in the first place. It almost blew my mind how my own mother couldn't catch the inauthenticity in his voice & empty statements; well, technically, our cider WAS extre
  7. The Elements Flow with the Water. Blow with the Wind. Glow with Fire. Grow like the Earth. There was a reason for your birth. The Elements assist with death and rebirth. They kill and also grow new life for a reason. This happens every Season. No. You cannot stop them. Work with them. They will empower you. To yourself, and with these four gifts, always stay true. And, they will surround & ground you as you continue…
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    Adam's Apple

    "The Apple Doesn't Fall Far From the Tree" Now, why didn't I think of that!? Hehe. Fun Fact: I actually wrote this scene as I was sitting down in Chipotle with my sister getting ready to leave for Florida the other day. Inspiration hits at the weirdest times. πŸ™πŸ€³ I do not control it I simply just & must embrace it. Sorry for the delayed update my life has been kind of an up and down unwritten book of adventure. 🌟🌴
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    Adam's Apple

    Maybe, we can turn him into apple sauce and sell him at a bake sale.πŸŽπŸ˜’πŸ½οΈπŸ’•
  10. Chapter 12: ~Adam's Apple~ The next Monday was the day after my birthday celebration that my friends had attended. Later on that day, after Shannon & I both got out of school, my mother and father took us both to see our new orchard for the very first time. It was a nervous & jittery excitement that I felt in the inner parts of my belly as I sat in the back of our car next to Shannon during that entire car ride. I thought to myself; what if... What if I don't like it?? What if it's no where near as good as our old orchard was or had none of the magical feelings that it
  11. ~Destruction~ Blow it all away. Make it go away. Throw it all away! Destroy it all today. Right here. Right now. How? With your mind, You can DESTROY all of the things that are all unkind. Destruction is required for reproduction. Just, like the storm, You were born with reconstruction. You have the ability to create a new tranquility. You have the responsibility. You have invincibility. Make your own destiny. You do not have to be rich. All you need is a penny. And, with that seed, indeed,
  12. ~Destruction~ Blow it all away. Make it go away. Throw it all away! Destroy it all today. Right here. Right now. How? With your mind, You can DESTROY all of the things that are all unkind. Destruction is required for reproduction. Just, like the storm, You were born with reconstruction. You have the ability to create a new tranquility. You have the responsibility. You have invincibility. Make your own destiny. You do not have to be rich. All you need is a penny. And, with that seed, indeed,
  13. But sometimes they could be really possessive, and things just weren't fun when 'she' was there. You know what I mean? Like...you two don't have to go into some secret corner and whisper to one another all night I've definitely experienced this before and it's a simple lack of consideration for other people and a non-interest in social intelligence. basically they don't really care about anyone else except for their significant other and themselves, aka that's called selfish, the most unattractive trait of all time. they'll learn their lesson eventually the hard way because people will ju
  14. At the end of the day. The key word here is respect. Adults must respect younger generations and vice versa it's okay to maybe have differences, but, I personally won't be have relationship ties or have tolerance with someone rude, selfish, or disrespectful, ESPECIALLY, prejudice in any way. No excuses. Do unto others. Many adults must learn this.
  15. Awww, πŸ₯΅πŸ’œπŸ’œ MRM! Huggzzz. I'd have gone with you too... Like sneakily wearing "sneakers" to sneak out back. πŸ˜›πŸŒ΄πŸ©πŸ₯‚ What a swiner for ditching you.πŸ€·πŸΌβ€β™€οΈWhatever. Not worth your thoughts.☠️😀
  16. I would have gone with you. We'd have a blast in the past..πŸ₯‚πŸΎπŸ’«
  17. This is honestly so powerful. It got me really emotional. I never went to my prom. I graduated early at 16. But, this is somewhat, how I imagined I would have loved mine to turn out.πŸ₯€ Thanks, Com. ~Black PaperπŸ₯‚
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    Unholy Trinity

    I'm so glad you like Billy's POV. It is really interesting to peak inside of his mind and how he observes the world from an innocent perspective as opposed to most modern day kids. I'll admit, witting it, was an absolute pleasure as country life is an extreme fascination of mine.🀠 'HillyBilly' was something I just had to use as the perfect taunting name since his name is already Billy and I was like Omg. Perfect. So glad you like the story and I hope you enjoy the surprises in chapters 3 and beyond....πŸ’« And there are certainly many that no one would have expected especially him.
  19. Also, I love the turtles, too. And, That's my favorite song of all time.
  20. Thank you very much for sharing your story. Also, alcoholism is in Johnny's blood, but, that doesn't necessarily mean he'll become one, himself. I'll update this story when I'm done with Rotten Apples.
  21. Wow. Thank you so much. You are right. I'm both of them in aspects of their character development. If you put them together as one person, they're me. If you cut me in half, you get them. This comment is by far one of my favorites.⭐
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    An Apple a Day

    Thank you.πŸŽπŸ’« The only spoiler I'll give everyone(which is a little obvious) is that they're all people Billy likes. But, he doesn't quite understand or know what he wants, yet.
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