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Thief This crook took many things. Have a look. These thieves stole other's leaves. They stole from their trees. They sting just like bees. Oh, please. They cannot even produce honey. This is why they steal money. Do you think this will last? They cannot run away from the past. They cannot run. They cannot hide. Karma ends their fun, With an almighty tide. Oh, yes. Karma has a way in some way, some day, Maybe, today, T
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Chapter 5: ~The Four Leaf Clover~ After eating inside of a Burger King fast food chain restaurant for the very first time of my life, my new friend Liam Prescott had taken the liberty to fill me in on many hidden and secret details regarding his old friendship with Jesse Bradford. He explained to me how they were not only friends and fellow sports team mates, but, best friends at that. They had apparently known one another for 7 whole years. Their fathers knew one another
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Billy's accent is pretty much exactly like this.(Just older) I've never seen NCIS! I'm looking up Agent Christopher right now😛♥️ Thanks! That's funny your husband watched that the very same time.
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Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
I fully understand the sense of compassion you feel towards the many losses Billy and his family have experienced. Understand, though, later on in future chapters, many blessings and new experiences happen for Billy and his loved ones. There are major morals and lessons taught in this story. One of the main ones being- "If you are good, good will come to you." Thank you so much for reading. Chapter 3 will explain a lot to you. Love and positive energy sent your way, ~Black Paper🥀 -
Chapter 4: ~Diet Coke~ “I’m listening…” The principal of my new school in New Jersey was extremely difficult to read at first glance. On the one hand, he had a very warm hearted persona that made you feel safe, welcome, and a genuine part of the school grounds which he was responsible of overseeing, yet, on the other hand, he had this intimidating feel to his aura that just made you feel dangerously interrogated by the chief of police, himself. And, as he looked at me with tha
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Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
Black Paper commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
Regardless of the fact that I've yet to fully finish this story, I know that this particular work of yours is a pillar in the foundation to all of your work as an author being that it was the first story you ever wrote(If I'm remembering correctly) I read this Chapter and can relate to the urge of wanting people I care about the most in my life learn who I truly love in this world and why I like them and accept that. I like males, always have, probably always will. As a 15 year old, I also liked boys & girls. So I was sort of just living half a life to please everyone and ignoring the rest of my heart. Unfortunately most of my family is fairly homophobic. This is still an issue now in my 20s. Maybe I'll do something about it. Maybe I will. Thank you Com. Love you.💘 ~Black Paper🥀 -
Your Sascha’s character descriptions and development are virtually almost identical to my Sascha from “Rotten Apples”, published earlier this summer... Rotten Apples - Sascha Character Visual introduction Billy’s POV~ The other long haired boy was the very first person that I ever looked at in all my life and thought, “Wow. He’s… beautiful.” He honestly didn’t even look like a normal boy at all. He had a wonderfully slim figure & was the closest thing to being male with graceful & feminine qualities without looking like or being an actual girl. His hair blew and flew in the wind with such grace and fluidity, you would think that his head of light hazelnut hair, that went below his shoulders in the back, was made of actual water if you didn’t know any better. He had really nice cheeks and a pretty set of green, glassy eyes with a very strong looking eyebrow ridge that just made him look like an absolute supermodel. He glared at me and I just couldn’t stop staring at his unbelievable beauty. If someone told me that an angel lived on this Earth in secret… I’d think it was him. I’m just making it clear to the audience neither one of us is nabbing character composition/characteristics from each other.
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You find out why in future chapters. For now, it’s just as much of a shock to the reader as it is to Billy.
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Chapter 64 - "Exchanged Wisdom"
Black Paper commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 64 - "Exchanged Wisdom"
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Chapter 64 - "Exchanged Wisdom"
Black Paper commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 64 - "Exchanged Wisdom"
This Chapter is terrible. UGHH. just kidding. I Love this story! Did you know I never read passed Chapter 14 for SOME reason? I think my sister interrupted me that day in 2017 when I first found you and read this😒 I have some reading to do from the beginning hehehe!💕Bye com Love u guys. Here’s some cupcakes for you all.🧁🧁🧁🧁🧁 -
Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Those interactions come in chapter 2 & 3. Chapter one introduces how he USED to live. Chapter two starts his new life and chapter three introduces his love interest for the first time💕 -
“He Who Must Not Be Named” sorry I kinda love you for the Voldemort Reference. I know it was challenging to read. It wasn’t easy to write to the point where I needed a coffee break from the negativity & realism. Fun Fact: Sascha is actually my favorite character. 👀.🏹🌟
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The dream and the cat make no sense to Billy or the reader until the end of the chapter and then Billy realizes the cat told the future and is some sort of mysterious guide that followed him around all the time and even his mother back then said it was a sign and when he sees sascha at the end and connects it all he’s like wait... WHAT the heck👀 Thank you for your kind support.🌙
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Imagine Magazine Question For 6/1
Black Paper replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
To be fair, I was offered modeling gigs by multiple agencies some just while I was sitting alone in the mall waiting for my friends. I was 17 and they said I had an extremely “photogenic and workable yet applicable look” Yet I HATED having people take my pictures and always shyed away from it *shrugs* -
I hope I did justice for you😏
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Imagine Magazine Question For 6/1
Black Paper replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
No offense, but, I wanted to be a Jedi. Yup. Until I was 14 a Jedi Knight was what I wanted to become. As I got older I wanted to be someone creative. A chef perhaps until I realized just how good at business I was and merchandising retail. Then, at 19 I grew my passion and started writing as well. But, yeah a JEDI! Dream big😒🌙 -
Chapter 3: ~Save Them~ “…What’s going on, here?” I heard, Ms. Silverman, my home room teacher, break the silence and tension of the four of us standing in front of one another as the three boys pinned me to the brick wall outside on school grounds in front of a bunch of other children. With fake innocence in his eyebrows, Jesse immediately replied “Ooh! We were just showing Billy where he can eat, outside, if he wants to at lunch. You know? It can get preeeeetttyy hot in that l
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One last one: This is a very easy guide to a simple & delicious Fudge- https://sugarspunrun.com/easy-fudge-recipe/
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This can be done with cooked bananas too. Just Cook them in the liquor and some sugar and Done🍌
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🍦Bored of just plain old ice cream? Wana have some fun? hehe. (Soak some giant raisins in any liquor of choice(Rum, Brandy, etc.) 2-3 days.) -Take the raisins and SOME of the liquor, depending how strong you like it and mix it all in slightly melting vanilla ice cream.(you can add pecans too if ya like) 🍨🥃-YOU JUST MADE YOUR OWN REAL VERSION OF RUM RAISIN ICE CREAM FOR 21+😮💕😛
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Precisely. Also, the famous”Brownie in a mug” is of the same family in nature. THIS one I like because it’s healthy and I’ve used it as my desert during diets many times.
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It’s really preference. But, I find fuji and Granny Smith work great✨🍎
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🍎Try this! Like apple pie filling? Wana quick and healthy snack that’s easy? -1 or 2 apples. Sliced -stevia or some powered sugar(Yes granulated is fine) -cinnamon -salt mix all these together with some corn starch(the apples will be all dusty. That’s perfect!) /put in microwave until you reached the doness and creamy texture you like/ eat alone or put on top of ice cream😱🥰ITS YUMMY I PROMISE HEHE.
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Fire With the ability & power to fruitfully create, or with destructive intentions it can truly eliminate. Fire is the element of death and rebirth, It has done so since the beginning, That is its mission on Earth. To provide man with the power to cook, sterilize, and light, this cosmic energy was not born to cause fright, for without it one could not see in the night, and blurred by its darkness unable to see what's in sight. Though it can burn villages if used and not ca
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“Or a shattered mirror to examine the complex contradictions of their being.” 😂😂😂😂😂 Ive seen this a long time ago but it’s SO accurate it’s sickening♥️💋😂 People don’t understand us “sensitive kids.”
