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Chapter 35 - Chance Encounters II
Black Paper commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Chance Encounters II
I mean, he was cute, sure...I'm not blind. But as I watched Artie shiver and wiggle and basically fall apart right in front of my eyes...I began to wonder if I was missing out on something all this time. Of course you did, you half-wit. Scotty Lynch is Com's best character ever created, besides Tanner, and I won't tolerate any excuses. but when Scotty grinned at him and asked, "Can I see more of the drawings in your notebook?" Com, you better stop writing cute sh++ like this, because, you're giving me heart palpitations.❤️ Love this story. Love this chapter. Love you Com. ~Black Paper🥀 -
How Do You Like Them Apples
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in How Do You Like Them Apples
Sascha has already technically shown Billy how he feels about him in Chapters 9 & 10, particularly, when he tries to kiss him and held his hand while they were alone on his bed. So, Billy knows that he's interested in him, or at least pretty gay for the most part. The question is, what happens to Sascha, now? Thank you for reading and your great feedback💎🍸🍎 Here's an apple martini. Something I'm sure Billy's mom doesn't mind having once in awhile, whatsoever.😒 -
How Do You Like Them Apples
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in How Do You Like Them Apples
Your soul tells you that, because it's obvious Sascha is a lost soul in general. Billy is one of the only people who sees that and so do you. 🍎 -
How Do You Like Them Apples
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in How Do You Like Them Apples
@Philippe Wow thank you so much for the exceptional examination of the chapter, relationships, and the overall plot of the story, itself. Wait till you see when they.... start unwrapping their Halloween candy 🍭🍫🔥 -
Chapter 13: ~How Do You Like Them Apples~ "Mmmmmmm." My teenage high school enemy said to my mother with a grin on his lips as we were all still standing around at one of my family's business tables up front of my orchard. "This cider is suuuuuuper good, Mrs. Irving! Best drink I've eveeeeerrrr had." He was so fake. UGHHHHH. The level of almost professional sarcasm made me wonder how he developed such a skill in the first place. It almost blew my mind how my own mother couldn't
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The Elements Flow with the Water. Blow with the Wind. Glow with Fire. Grow like the Earth. There was a reason for your birth. The Elements assist with death and rebirth. They kill and also grow new life for a reason. This happens every Season. No. You cannot stop them. Work with them. They will empower you. To yourself, and with these four gifts, always stay true. And, they will surround & ground you as you continue…
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"The Apple Doesn't Fall Far From the Tree" Now, why didn't I think of that!? Hehe. Fun Fact: I actually wrote this scene as I was sitting down in Chipotle with my sister the other day. Inspiration hits at the weirdest times. 🙏🤳 I do not control it I simply just & must embrace it.
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Maybe, we can turn him into apple sauce and sell him at a bake sale.🍎😒🍽️💕
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Chapter 12: ~Adam's Apple~ The next Monday was the day after my birthday celebration that my friends had attended. Later on that day, after Shannon & I both got out of school, my mother and father took us both to see our new orchard for the very first time. It was a nervous & jittery excitement that I felt in the inner parts of my belly as I sat in the back of our car next to Shannon during that entire car ride. I thought to myself; what if... What if I don't like it?? W
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~Destruction~ Blow it all away. Make it go away. Throw it all away! Destroy it all today. Right here. Right now. How? With your mind, You can DESTROY all of the things that are all unkind. Destruction is required for reproduction. Just, like the storm, You were born with reconstruction. You have the ability to create a new tranquility. You have the responsibility. You have invincibility. Make your own destiny. You do not have to be rich. All you need is a penny. And, with that seed, indeed, You can create plenty. Show them who you are. Show them how you’ll go far. If they don’t believe you will achieve, They can simply leave. That isn’t evil, for that type of logic is simply Medieval. Just, make them watch you as you powerfully continue, As you will prove how you will improve with every single move…
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~Destruction~ Blow it all away. Make it go away. Throw it all away! Destroy it all today. Right here. Right now. How? With your mind, You can DESTROY all of the things that are all unkind. Destruction is required for reproduction. Just, like the storm, You were born with reconstruction. You have the ability to create a new tranquility. You have the responsibility. You have invincibility. Make your own destiny.
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Imagine Magazine Question For 12/1
Black Paper replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
But sometimes they could be really possessive, and things just weren't fun when 'she' was there. You know what I mean? Like...you two don't have to go into some secret corner and whisper to one another all night I've definitely experienced this before and it's a simple lack of consideration for other people and a non-interest in social intelligence. basically they don't really care about anyone else except for their significant other and themselves, aka that's called selfish, the most unattractive trait of all time. they'll learn their lesson eventually the hard way because people will just simply not want to be with them and they'll wind up alone ....it's only a matter of time. Like a flower withering & dying as it's petals fall, they'll loose those in their life and circle with each petal, day, and week that pass as long as they stay that way. Literally, Rotten Apples decaying & dying. They better change or they'll eventually turn into nothing.🎭🍎 -
Imagine Magazine Question For 12/1
Black Paper replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
At the end of the day. The key word here is respect. Adults must respect younger generations and vice versa it's okay to maybe have differences, but, I personally won't be have relationship ties or have tolerance with someone rude, selfish, or disrespectful, ESPECIALLY, prejudice in any way. No excuses. Do unto others. Many adults must learn this. -
Awww, 🥵💜💜 MRM! Huggzzz. I'd have gone with you too... Like sneakily wearing "sneakers" to sneak out back. 😛🌴🍩🥂 What a swiner for ditching you.🤷🏼♀️Whatever. Not worth your thoughts.☠️😤
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I would have gone with you. We'd have a blast in the past..🥂🍾💫
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This is honestly so powerful. It got me really emotional. I never went to my prom. I graduated early at 16. But, this is somewhat, how I imagined I would have loved mine to turn out.🥀 Thanks, Com. ~Black Paper🥂
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I'm so glad you like Billy's POV. It is really interesting to peak inside of his mind and how he observes the world from an innocent perspective as opposed to most modern day kids. I'll admit, witting it, was an absolute pleasure as country life is an extreme fascination of mine.🤠 'HillyBilly' was something I just had to use as the perfect taunting name since his name is already Billy and I was like Omg. Perfect. So glad you like the story and I hope you enjoy the surprises in chapters 3 and beyond....💫 And there are certainly many that no one would have expected especially him.
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Fake It 'til You Make It/ Take It 'til You Break It
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fake It 'til You Make It/ Take It 'til You Break It
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Fake It 'til You Make It/ Take It 'til You Break It
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fake It 'til You Make It/ Take It 'til You Break It
Thank you very much for sharing your story. Also, alcoholism is in Johnny's blood, but, that doesn't necessarily mean he'll become one, himself. I'll update this story when I'm done with Rotten Apples. -
Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Wow. Thank you so much. You are right. I'm both of them in aspects of their character development. If you put them together as one person, they're me. If you cut me in half, you get them. This comment is by far one of my favorites.⭐ -
Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
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Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
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Thank you.🍎💫 The only spoiler I'll give everyone(which is a little obvious) is that they're all people Billy likes. But, he doesn't quite understand or know what he wants, yet.
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Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Yay thanks. You basically like a "Billy Coleman" from "Where The Red Fern Grows" type of sweet country boy. I agree. The heart is what makes the true difference.🍎💕💫
