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  1. jarquafelmu


    I know I havent commented but I found your story a couple of weeks ago and couldn't put it down. I loved every moment reading it and you are such a strong witty author. I may not have commented but I reacted to every chapter. I am super excited waiting for book 2 and I hope it begins soon. The spirit of water has a lot to answer for
  2. Loving the new books and chapter! Book 4 was missing a new kid to be saved and Xander and the new baby certainly fit that bill! I wonder if in the future Graham will bring some closure between the baby and his mother
  3. I started this story yesterday. I finished this story today. That's how much I couldn't put it down. An A+ showing from craftingmom this story will wrench your heart strings and leave you foaming at the mouth for justice to be done. But don't worry. Justice is done.
  4. jarquafelmu

    Chapter 18

    I hearted the chapter for Jason and Devyn. I know torture isn't right. But I want to put Brad through an industrial cheese grater lubricated with lemon juice!
  5. Yup, I've read it and loved it
  6. I'm sad to see it go but I loved every moment of it! I look forward to reading your next works. I think I have currently read everything you have written so far so I guess here is to the future!
  7. Once again Ace will leave you speechless as he envelops you in another of his tales. I just finished this book and I loved every single chapter of it. Including the ones that made me cry or made me angry. For an author to be able to write in such a way that I get emotionally invested in the characters, to me, this means that this author knows not just how to tell a story. But rather, they know how to show a story. His writing is so clear and understandable that I am not just reading the story. I am in the story watching it happen like a spectator. If you like any of Ace's other sto
  8. I haven't commented yet on this story but I have been adding ❤️ on every single chapter as I have reading through it like crazy because it keeps pulling me in. I just had to stop for a moment and comment because you have done it again Ace. You have made me cry again. That is a massive compliment to you. You write strong enough to cause me to more than just feel. You are a legend.
  9. jarquafelmu

    God Forsaken

    Yay! Artie and I didn't even have to go a whole chapter before he was rescued! Unknown uncle 1. Bigoted entitled grandparents 0.
  10. I can't suggest this story enough! This is one of a trilogy of stories that all work around each other and build from each one. The Tales from the Underground are a collection of stories that you cannot miss. Give yourself a chance and start reading this story and the others. This is an author that you need to keep an eye on because he is going places.
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    Ace! You did it again. I am now fully convinced that I have go read everything that you have written. I love your writing (flaws and all 😄). I hope that you keep writing and I am off to see if you have a fourth book in the Tales from the Underground or pick up one of your other stories now. I read blinded, then velocity and now this one. So it has been an awesome way of filling in the details of your amazing world. I absolutely love that in each of your stories you have an epilogue chapter that gives us readers a glimpse into the future of your characters. It is such a relieving way
  12. About time Robert finally realizes the bastard he has been! And awesome on Aiden for not buckling and making Robert prove that he actually means what he is saying and isn't just spouting BS in order to get Aiden home! You deserve all of the accolades that have been sent your way Ace! Every single one of them.
  13. I don't often cry at movies, stories, or even events in real life. I get sad but rarely does it make me cry. I have however cried during each of your books in your Tales from the Underground. You are going places Ace. Keep this up and you will be a best selling author in no time.
  14. Ace is one of those rare authors that can tell you a story and make you believe that you are in it, watching it all unfold. Blinded is no different. Be prepared to laugh and to cry as you learn about Riley "Cy" Walker and the struggles that he has to overcome in order to find what he was always yearning for.
  15. A good honest book that combines both fear and love; hate and joy. You need to give this story a try. It will grip you and not let go.
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    Now that Aiden has finally stood up to his dad he can finally start becoming the man he wants to be rather than just being his dad's cock in the fighting ring. It's exactly what Aiden's "father" is doing. He's a cock fighter but instead of using chickens he's using his son. The bastard.
  17. Hopefully that comes with either a baseball bat to dear old dad or cuffs and an orange jumpsuit for the rest of his life.
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    Aiden's father is a bastard and his mom is not much better. What utter wastes of parents they are. I really hope that Aiden's father eventually rots in prison like he deserves.
  19. Thank you for your story. I had to heart every chapter because each one was great in its own way.
  20. jarquafelmu

    A Real Father

    I started your story yesterday and I am already this far. I am loving it and huge props to you and your writing style. I have to wonder though. David Walker is in prison for first degree murder. Was he the one who slashed Riley's eye and killed his mom?
  21. 😂 In all seriousness. Thank you so much Bill for your wonderful stories. You should really look into publishing the Castaway Hotel series. I bet they would sell well. A great addition to the already wonderful line up. There were moments of scary, love, heartbreak, and all that there is to be alive. You sir have amazing gift.
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    A Lot Going On

    It will be hard for Hunter and Hayden for sure but thanks to their mom's loving foresight they have a great family to help them through the rough times to come instead of becoming orphans with no one to help. I also suspect that Brent and Cody will get with Graham and express Julia's love from the other side.
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    A Lot Going On

    Loved the new chapter, Bill! I hope to see Julia recover but I think the writing is on the wall for her. I give her 10 chapters tops.
  24. jarquafelmu

    A Lot Going On

    You absolutely should. I read the series when I was younger and absolutely loved it and grabbed every book of it that I could get my hands on.
  25. jarquafelmu

    Chapter 50

    I agree with most of what Shadow said. I'm not sure about the dream signaling Taryn's death. I'm just not sure what to think of that other than Justin is obsessed with protecting Taryn above all else so it makes sense that he would dream of Taryn being in danger and needing protection. I do agree that Rage being there could be an indication that he has at least picked up Justin's "scent" if not having found them completely. I have to wonder how the Jeweler's people would handle him. I could totally see that Justin and Taryn leaving being a huge advantage to the Elder's people in
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