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  1. jarquafelmu

    Consequences

    My favorites are Kallian and Wyn. Wyn is such a spitfire, I can't wait until he really starts coming into his own
  2. jarquafelmu

    End

    Thanks for this wonderful chapter and story! I would love a book 3 but you have tied this up well and left the reader wanting. like I said, you ended it well but I would still love a book 3 to explore what Wyn, Kalian, and Talon can really do now that they arent fighting for their lives at every turn. Further, now that Talon is not longer cursed, it would be amazing what light and shadow could do together.
  3. I absolutely loved Awaken and I loved this! I am eagerly looking forward to more. it makes sense to me that the dieth government would persecute and ban Magik users while. employing them in their armies. Magik can be used as a dangerous weapon so preventing anyone else from having it greatly increases the control that Dieth keeps over their people
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    Epilogue

    I know I havent commented but I found your story a couple of weeks ago and couldn't put it down. I loved every moment reading it and you are such a strong witty author. I may not have commented but I reacted to every chapter. I am super excited waiting for book 2 and I hope it begins soon. The spirit of water has a lot to answer for
  5. Loving the new books and chapter! Book 4 was missing a new kid to be saved and Xander and the new baby certainly fit that bill! I wonder if in the future Graham will bring some closure between the baby and his mother
  6. I started this story yesterday. I finished this story today. That's how much I couldn't put it down. An A+ showing from craftingmom this story will wrench your heart strings and leave you foaming at the mouth for justice to be done. But don't worry. Justice is done.
  7. jarquafelmu

    Chapter 18

    I hearted the chapter for Jason and Devyn. I know torture isn't right. But I want to put Brad through an industrial cheese grater lubricated with lemon juice!
  8. Yup, I've read it and loved it
  9. I'm sad to see it go but I loved every moment of it! I look forward to reading your next works. I think I have currently read everything you have written so far so I guess here is to the future!
  10. Once again Ace will leave you speechless as he envelops you in another of his tales. I just finished this book and I loved every single chapter of it. Including the ones that made me cry or made me angry. For an author to be able to write in such a way that I get emotionally invested in the characters, to me, this means that this author knows not just how to tell a story. But rather, they know how to show a story. His writing is so clear and understandable that I am not just reading the story. I am in the story watching it happen like a spectator. If you like any of Ace's other stories then you have got to try this one. If you are new and haven't had the pleasure yet then sit back and hold on dear life, because you are about to watch a rollercoaster of a story!
  11. I haven't commented yet on this story but I have been adding ❤️ on every single chapter as I have reading through it like crazy because it keeps pulling me in. I just had to stop for a moment and comment because you have done it again Ace. You have made me cry again. That is a massive compliment to you. You write strong enough to cause me to more than just feel. You are a legend.
  12. jarquafelmu

    God Forsaken

    Yay! Artie and I didn't even have to go a whole chapter before he was rescued! Unknown uncle 1. Bigoted entitled grandparents 0.
  13. I can't suggest this story enough! This is one of a trilogy of stories that all work around each other and build from each one. The Tales from the Underground are a collection of stories that you cannot miss. Give yourself a chance and start reading this story and the others. This is an author that you need to keep an eye on because he is going places.
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  14. jarquafelmu

    Crestfallen

    Ace! You did it again. I am now fully convinced that I have go read everything that you have written. I love your writing (flaws and all 😄). I hope that you keep writing and I am off to see if you have a fourth book in the Tales from the Underground or pick up one of your other stories now. I read blinded, then velocity and now this one. So it has been an awesome way of filling in the details of your amazing world. I absolutely love that in each of your stories you have an epilogue chapter that gives us readers a glimpse into the future of your characters. It is such a relieving way of tying up the story and making it complete. You rock.
  15. About time Robert finally realizes the bastard he has been! And awesome on Aiden for not buckling and making Robert prove that he actually means what he is saying and isn't just spouting BS in order to get Aiden home! You deserve all of the accolades that have been sent your way Ace! Every single one of them.
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