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A "wow" emoji seemed lukewarm for my response, and anger? Well, just not the case. So here I go. These pages hold for me a aura of fantasy, intrigue and escape from the outside ugliness and day to day common place. Playful banter, pleasant, intelligent and heartfelt emotions. All in response to lovely and creative words penned for our benefit, by authors we both admire and adore. Yes Mark, thats you😏. With all due respect to personal beliefs, I find introducing above mentioned "outside ugliness" to these pages a disservice to it's readers. No offense intended. Just a hopeful recommendation.
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I appreciate the strength and stability both Jeremy and Will's partners are bringing. Also encouraged with both brothers working together for a common good. Isn't the family's strategy of Travis's co habitation for safety concerns, possibly placing Jeremy and Chris in the cross hairs? Great chapter.
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Better meds, his own strategy and leverage to all but guarantee at least getting his foot in the door. It was just a flicker, a glimpse into what could be. Thanks Mark.
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The Ancient Relic of the Massive Cock
RJRBD100 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Ancient Relic of the Massive Cock
To further prove his lack of parental expertise, Bradley proposes cutting Jeremy off financially in an attempt to encourage Jeremy to bow in supplication at the feet of the golden child. Would this not be interpreted as further betrayal in Jeremy's eyes? Any concern as to it's affects on Jeremy's mental health? The emphasis on the Golden Child's emotional well being speaks volumes. -
Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
RJRBD100 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
Literally everyone of these three are guilty of concealing their true feelings. But Mason takes the hit? -
Chapter 2 - Moving Forward
RJRBD100 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Moving Forward
Heartwarming and heartbreaking. Beautifully written. Damn it. -
Chapter 14: Jeremy is stuck between a rock and a hard place
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 14: Jeremy is stuck between a rock and a hard place
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Is Alan trying to slow the roll on Cal's training? Tying into your theory about Alan's new " more than just sex"
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Very much appreciate the attention to details. Progress definitely being made toward an uninhibited atmosphere for Cal's education.😉
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Lovely, thank you.❤️
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Not only do I find these sessions extremely erotic, but the interaction personally endearing.
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Agree. Jj's actions being referred to as a "betrayal" . Be like, the pot calling the kettle black. Apologies are definitely in order here. First up, Bradley.
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Jeremy seems to be tracking a healing path. As usual, Will seems to be burying his emotional turmoil deep.😁
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Thank you, while you by no means condone or validate Jeremy's actions or methods, you help to give insight into his troublesome plight. We, myself included, tend to gravitate toward that which is beautiful in appearance or charming in nature. Will, for example. Much like diamond, his flaws are difficult to determine, and the untrained eye only equates perfection. Where as Jeremy, even though multifaceted, projects a different response. His flaws closer to the surface, clarity and color are off, still beautiful, yet held in a lesser regard.
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Was wondering when Jeremy's mental break would once again be addressed. Unsurprisingly, it was meet with a total lack of compassion, forgiveness and introspection. His feelings of unbelonging being justified with the revelation of his true parentage. They knew, He did not. Yet they are looked upon as the betrayed? They are not ready to see him? Their treatment of Jeremy's mental illness is banishment? Again, what where the repercussions of Will's pummeling of His un-brother within the sacred halls of Escorial?
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Enjoying this unique, yet completely believable storyline. To combine Alan's sexual mentoring of Cal, combined with the co-vid upheaval, pulls me in with my own fears and uncertainties of the time. Great job. I felt a tug in my chest for Cal, with the "Babe" reference from Alan. Is Cal riding ( or being ridden😉) for a fall?
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"He laughed, truly laughed, and she joined him, and it was marvelous. " a momentary flash of familiarity and ease. Then, gone.
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I see Fab as a project. But, who's?
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Too good. If Alan's were only the rule and not the exception.
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These two would appear to be bonding on a more personal level. Enjoying one another as companions, while satisfying each other's sexual desires. Intriguing use of an otherwise fearful and tragic time table. Making available just enough of the outside world, to lend to authenticity. Keeping our minds focused and anxious. We'll done. More, please.
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I'm not receiving a predatory vibe here. More of a mutually beneficial agreement. Boundaries were set, expectations were expressed with one exception, the unavoidable emotional ties that link to your first sexuaul experiences. Which in this case seems overwhelmingly positive. But unfortunately, not true in many instances.
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Well done Mark. Options a plenty. Will, looks to be well on His conquering path.
