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yea yeah yeah ya got me Prick! Great chapter.😏ya know, your pretty good at this.
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Loved it!
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Chapter 9: Beneath the King’s Shadow!
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: Beneath the King’s Shadow!
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Just can't help seeing heartbreak in Jody's future. You can only detach for so long. The heart wants, what the heart wants. Great chapter. Jeff was an excellent development.
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Yes! Yes! Yes!
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A surprise trip to California, could possibly be an eye opener for both Carlo's and Will's relationships.
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Chapter 10: A chance too late!
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: A chance too late!
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. -
An ambush, gone wrong. Would Steph been involved from the beginning, JP's limits on volume might not have been exceeded. Jeremy's wherewithal to bring in reinforcements, shows signs of growth with trust issues and a increased self control. Thank you Mark.
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Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
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Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Will Z's Daddy be impressed with River's interaction with the Queen Bee? -
Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
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Your good, really good.
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Chapter 11: Marked by Morning
RJRBD100 commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 11: Marked by Morning
I could very well have checked several emoji to describe my thoughts/emotions on this chapter. I'm left unsettled, but anxious and curious as well. Thought provoking, well done. -
Chapter 17: An explosion! Who will rise and who will fall?
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 17: An explosion! Who will rise and who will fall?
Choices, with heartbreaking, tragic consequences. Well done. Thank you. -
Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
"and you, you swore to me you'd never be like him. But here you are. Making your husband live that same hell." Not just an old adage, like father. Like son. Another good one, " once a cheater, always a cheater." -
When Cal and Lt Pearson first met, He called Brady, Sir. Brady responded with. "only in the bedroom". What might Cal be getting himself into?🤔
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I agree, Cal's new boldness and confidence in his sensuality took me by surprise. Hopefully this new found eagerness will not allow him to be taken advantage of, by more experienced and less scrupulous co-workers and party goers.
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Great chapter! Do these two have chemistry?
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Cal's relationship with his father is refreshing and also completely unimaginable in my reality. Their comfort and trust in each other is heart warming. The sentimental, and romantic me, says Alan and Cal are becoming more than sexual playmates. My imagination? A possibility? What ever direction you decide for these two, I'm sure I'll enjoy their journey. Great chapter, thank you.
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Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
RJRBD100 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Great chapter, very well written. Read through it's entirety before I realized. Anxiously awaiting Jace and Matteo's climax ( pun intended). Thank you in advance.
