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Great chapter. Such intense range of emotion, and you feel it all. The greatest of these being betrayal. By everyone you ever loved and trusted. How could he remain? To serve a future Alpha, placed in a role in which He his entire life was groomed to achieve. So so good.
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Chapter 1 - How It Began
RJRBD100 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 1 - How It Began
Is Evan serious? Can J trust him? I'll be there watching. -
It's been, and will continue to be a pleasure absorbing all you have in store. Great job Ken
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He reached out his hand and touched me, but his hand didn't feel as solid. He looked at me with a kind of fear in his eyes. "I think soon I won't be able to come at all." This entire interaction between Lonnie and Leo was just so poignant. And yes.🥹. Yet again, another great chapter. We'll done.
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" like much of my fiction, this is how I wish it had been". We share that wish Ken. RJ
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To experience such gentle, nurturing through this authors writing of Gary's sexual education is not only arousing, but heartwarming. I do however wonder, just how many readers breakthrough moments were so.
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Dean, Julians one constant. His rock.Yet when faced with lies and pure manipulation, Julian not only rejects, but crushes him. IDK? Maybe Switzerland isn't far enough. Team Dean here! Needs to not be an easy fix, if fixable at all.
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Looking forward to Lonnies progressions in his loss of Leo. And his rejoining life with his new normal. Such a well written chapter, totally got me here🥹.
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First off, loved it! It was current, setting and character building was excellent. The emotional connection was well written and felt by this reader. A story of victory not only in their individual arenas, but in a more personal aspect. Well done.
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Simply, I loved this. Storyline, characters, emotional bonding, both between characters and reader. Sexual intimacy, Hot! Minimal angst leading to a positive and uplifting conclusion. All sewn so well together. Well done!👏
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I appreciate your attention to intimacy. Also that Jody seems to be developing emotional ties. As a hopeless romantic, (although loving all the physical action) is a there a possible love interest in Jodys future?
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Ouch! But extremely 🔥
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The boy catches on quickly. He knows what He wants. That flutter in your stomach, weak, shaky knees in anticipation. Still remember that. Vaguely, but still bring on a smile. Very good, thank you.
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I'm definitely a sucker for a good trap. Bring it on!
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It's actually difficult to sympathize with any character. Deception all round. Still have hope, but it's waning.
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First Night in the Village
RJRBD100 commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in First Night in the Village
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Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
RJRBD100 commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
Lovely. Completely captured. Thank you. -
The pleasure was all mine.
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[Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
RJRBD100 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
I honestly gain more from reading all that you guys gleam from these chapters than I do reading it. I'll think I've got some reasonable account of what just happened and, nope. Rereading once again. Thank you, not only for your insights, but the articulate manner you express them. -
I Needed to See How It Would End
RJRBD100 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I Needed to See How It Would End
We often read about life long friendships forge in fire, blood, sacrifice... in the hallowed halls of academia. When in actuality, most, all though valuable and serving purposeful meaning, are destined to fade into a reoccurring chuckle or smile in remembrance in the years to come. These, three beautifully, painstakingly created individuals. Are so, well done. Perfect in their imperfections. Human in their insecurities. Believable in their anxieties. More please. Looking forward to whatever you have in store. Thank you -
yea yeah yeah ya got me Prick! Great chapter.😏ya know, your pretty good at this.
