Great chapter. Such intense range of emotion, and you feel it all. The greatest of these being betrayal. By everyone you ever loved and trusted.
How could he remain? To serve a future Alpha, placed in a role in which He his entire life was groomed to achieve. So so good.
He reached out his hand and touched me, but his hand didn't feel as solid. He looked at me with a kind of fear in his eyes. "I think soon I won't be able to come at all."
This entire interaction between Lonnie and Leo was just so poignant. And yes.🥹. Yet again, another great chapter. We'll done.
To experience such gentle, nurturing through this authors writing of Gary's sexual education is not only arousing, but heartwarming.
I do however wonder, just how many readers breakthrough moments were so.
Dean, Julians one constant. His rock.Yet when faced with lies and pure manipulation, Julian not only rejects, but crushes him. IDK? Maybe Switzerland isn't far enough. Team Dean here! Needs to not be an easy fix, if fixable at all.
Looking forward to Lonnies progressions in his loss of Leo. And his rejoining life with his new normal. Such a well written chapter, totally got me here🥹.
First off, loved it!
It was current, setting and character building was excellent. The emotional connection was well written and felt by this reader. A story of victory not only in their individual arenas, but in a more personal aspect. Well done.
Simply, I loved this. Storyline, characters, emotional bonding, both between characters and reader. Sexual intimacy, Hot! Minimal angst leading to a positive and uplifting conclusion. All sewn so well together. Well done!👏
I appreciate your attention to intimacy. Also that Jody seems to be developing emotional ties. As a hopeless romantic, (although loving all the physical action) is a there a possible love interest in Jodys future?
The boy catches on quickly. He knows what He wants. That flutter in your stomach, weak, shaky knees in anticipation. Still remember that. Vaguely, but still bring on a smile. Very good, thank you.