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Mancunian

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  1. I'll bet I can guess which one of you is the Joker.
  2. I didn't bully you, I only spoke the truth. I leave the bullying and tyranny to you.
  3. Well, you would know all about being deranged,
  4. You're just a little out of date
  5. Umm, well, if you shut your eyes so you can't see the scars I look good
  6. That's me 007 sophisticated, I'd be a good 007 🔫
  7. We're sexy and sophisticated
  8. What? How? Is that even legal? All Canadians are lumberjacks (or lumbersnacks as we now know them) All Aussies are bronzed, speedo wearing surfers and of course all Texans are studly cowboys… isn’t that the law? Hey, where do us Brits figure in this? Can't you find something to say about us too?
  9. You love it! Something I've heard before may apply here. He's on that famous river in Egypt, DENIAL
  10. I could say something about farm animals and excrement, but I'm far too polite.
  11. I never mentioned any names , but you know what they say, 'if the cap fits 🧢, wear it'
  12. Who in their right mind would refuse kisses from Gary Think about who your comment is aimed at, he's definitely not in his right mind, I'm not sure he ever has been.
  13. A great feel-good story with a sad start but a happy ending, it's the stuff that dreams are made of. To appreciate it you have to read it and accept that we are all individuals and have our differences and values. Steven is not the media portrayal of how they see the typical gay man, he is as ordinary as anyone and seeks what he values as being right. A pleasant and refreshing read to be recommended.
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  14. Mancunian

    Chapter 1

    Steven comes across as someone who may be on the autism spectrum. He has a clear sense of what he believes is right and wrong. His enjoyment of the peace in the church probably helps him to process events in his life and what he wants, the little voice is probably his inner self coming through in a way that he can process. He appears to value many of the Christian values without being religious, many live good and fulfilled lives in this manner. His troubled past has no doubt shaped him and his beliefs, I'm happy that his mother eventually found the courage to stand up to a tyrannical father, it needed to be done for both of their sakes. I think that Georgio will be good for Steven, they appear to have very similar values and importantly, Georgio shows a good understanding of Steven and accepts him unconditionally. A great feel-good story with a sad start but a happy ending, how can anyone not like that? A nicely written welcome story. 😃
  15. Aloha Albert, I hope you get your computer sorted soon
  16. Good morning, afternoon, evening all, it's been a busy start to the day. Hopefully, now I can relax.
  17. I'm using the iMac that my Dad bought four years before he passed away, which makes it more than eight years old now. I've never had a problem with it, it still works as well as the day it was new. I also have a Windows-based laptop that I use for work, I'd switch it for a MacBook but Mac iOS isn't compatible with my clients. I tend to find apple based is more reliable and secure on the internet. Go for am iMac, when you get used to it you will love it.
  18. Aloha Albert, everything is good here thanks. How's things with you?
  19. Mancunian

    River City

    A well-written and gripping short murder mystery. It packs a lot into 11.4k words, it really packs a punch. I'm not going to give too much away, but there are more victims in this story than those attacked and murdered. A great story that grips from the start. Very nicely done.
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  20. Murder mysteries always get my attention and this did exactly that. The fast-paced action and investigation are intense and revealed both good and bad leads, all of which were followed up and led to the perpetrator being identified. It's a shame that it rarely happens that way in real life. It is a story that could easily have been expanded into a much longer story allowing for more background detail. But in saying that this is still a good and full story of the events that gets the reader's attention and draws them in. One important aspect that it clearly shows, is that mistreatment in childhood can, and often does, have severe lasting effects on people. This can lead someone to behave in a way that could have possibly been prevented by better parenting and/or earlier intervention. Overall a great short story and a credit to the secret author.
  21. Mancunian

    Chapter 1

    I'm sorry to hear this news Tim, I'm sending my best wishes and good thoughts your way. Remember, you have friends here and we will be here if and when you need us.
  22. If they are happy tears then they are good tears. And there is no need to thank me, I'm just doing what any good friend would do, so I hope you are smiling too.
  23. You have a lot of good friends in GA who like, love and respect you. Some of us may not have spoken to you much, but we are not strangers, just friends you haven't met yet. So hold your head up and be the best you that you can be, you are wonderful. I'm just one of those friends in the shadows, we are all here for you.
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