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  1. mikel22

    Chapter 13

    yes a short adventure with jamie would be very hot find the sex descriptions very good erotic without porno
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    Chapter 11

    I think about this like you do. we would certainly not read 9 books about mister perfect
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    Chapter 11

    Billy tries to catch up with Brandon. Brandon is running after him now. You should always keep in mind that the guys are 15 years old are the mistakes and give. you were certainly fault free in the age perfect.
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    Chapter 11

    Billy never told jimmy I love you on the contrary. Why should billy not fuck him when he comes the genius. someone wants to tell me Brandon lives chaste
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    Chapter 10

    Brandon always finds excuse for why he behaves repellent. First it's Sam's fault thn jimmyßs. Brandon is slippery like a eel. Why is stevie so interested the billy and brandon come back together? Considering how long brandon and billy are already apart, i see no real future for them. I think Brandon is angry because Billy is not running after him anymore.
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    Chapter 39

    beautiful how billy gets along with his father again
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    Chapter 45

    a little more drama can be good
  8. mikel22

    Chapter 1

    a short good story. the completed ones are the best you do not have to wait forever for the update.
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    Chapter 35

    First of all my esteem for Stevie so small and petite and yet more putty than all the others. Wow Al does not boggles back from anything he has no inhibitions at all
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    Chapter 34

    well the billy withdraws from brandon, brandonn alone in the buchreirei acidify
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    Chapter 33

    I think Billy should have fun and take what he can get
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    Entry 38

    the only one who defended Jimmy was Billy when he taught Kal a bloody lip
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    Entry 30

    yes that's the big advantage of the author he can do it so that it ends well for his hero
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    Entry 28

    But it's a bad way to play with the feelings of Little Marie.
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    Entry 17

    i´m so sorry for Marie she thinks Brandon loves her too
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    Entry 14

    pretty mean of Brandon, to let Marie think he would find something for her the poor girl I'm sorry for
  17. mikel22

    Entry 13

    go home to shower as disturbed Brandon?
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    Entry 11

    " However that being said, I personally would like to see a little more action in the story and not so much sumerization. I think it'd make the story come to life a little better" I agree with you to more action should be
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    Entry 10

    Perfectly boring, I think brandon is
  20. mikel22

    Entry 1

    well that will be very difficult to follow cumsis story even just He is at book 9
  21. mikel22

    Chapter 31

    "Also, Billy hasn't exactly been showing a lot of newfound (sexual) maturity recently." you do not have to be 15 at all
  22. mikel22

    Chapter 32

    But...for the record...my blowjobs are still the best he's ever had! Hehehe! So take THAT, ya 'vagina vendor'! I roll on the floor laughing. These funny sentences sometimes come across as surprising,i like it
  23. mikel22

    Chapter 31

    yes, and as stevie coming out, brandon has also moved away from him.We do not know what Brandon is doing. He will not sweat his sperm through his ribs.
  24. mikel22

    Chapter 31

    Fuck Brandon. The selfish boy .I am with you one opinion. When Brandon in the morning looks in the mirror appears to be a divine sacred sparkle over his freshly steepled hair
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    Chapter 30

    Brandon is an arrogant guy I think he's kidding Billy Billy had better stay away from him but unfortunately they'll be back together for sure.Brandon is the most uninterestingly character in the story.
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