mikel22
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"So...yeah. Brandon and I did it today. In fact, we did it FOUR times" each 20 seconds😁
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How is Billy supposed to be happy with Brandon when he eschews billy?
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I'll never understand what makes Billy look so interesting at Brandon the boy can he not speak three words in a row ..
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very well written chapter one is right in the history we can stop reading. Nick has conquered my heart such a sweet guy
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the AL is a minority among the gays I think is a rumor to Billy he does not have to hold his ass, no one forces him
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Make the story very interesting and such guys have to be there while Brandon is so interesting again last weather report.
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Billy quickly falls in love with everyone who looks reasonably good.
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Hopefully Johanna has an instruction manual to help Billy know how to handle it.
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Billy is always horny but also normal at the age.
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billy is many boy quickly in love and also changes quickly to others .
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I read jezt again from the beginning .have read some too fast
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wehn billy coming out to his school Brandon, he'll to dissociate by Billy. I also think Brandon's sex with stevie is going on.
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Chapter 11: "Hospital High Jinx"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 11: "Hospital High Jinx"
Poor tyler's a loser. I'm sorry for him. but this up and down make the story yes interesting And the erotic wow at the hospital. -
Chapter 10: "10th Anniversary!!"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 10: "10th Anniversary!!"
find this chapter very good and exciting. -
I had a long time to wonder if I should shriek my negative criticism but I want to if always helich write what I think about it. i have already understood that it hints at future conflicts only these hints have been there since the last 3 chapters
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somehow this story is slowly becoming uninteresting it happens Nothing more billy at work and a short meeting with Brandon who spends his time with Stieve.
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Chapter 9: "A Rock And A 'Hard' Place"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 9: "A Rock And A 'Hard' Place"
Randy feels sorry for himself. Doesn't see the pain he's inflicting on ryan. Ryan suffers the most his heart zerbrocher .he is now completely alone the types with those he hangs around do not help him. -
Chapter 7: "Giddy Getaway"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 7: "Giddy Getaway"
Randy, what are you doing? You should have had at least the guts to confess to Ryan your love play with Tyler. -
Chapter 6: "Don't Ask, Don't Tell"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 6: "Don't Ask, Don't Tell"
Randy who is so jealous Ryan cheats, Ryan couldn't have done it. That'll break Ryan's heart. -
Chapter 4: "A Secret Between Friends"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 4: "A Secret Between Friends"
hurts it Ryan that Tyler love Randy and he could lose him, or hurts him his first love don't love him ? -
Chapter 4: "A Secret Between Friends"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 4: "A Secret Between Friends"
i´m reading this story third time and always discover things i have read about or not understood.i have discovered the story in this summer. i have not learned English and with translator reading it takes until i have understood it korekt . -
Chapter 3: "Something Wicked This Way Comes"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 3: "Something Wicked This Way Comes"
Ryan's a smart guy. He knows how to get Randy to have sex. I notice when Ryan and Randy they're just for sex then they separate most of the time fast. -
Chapter 2: "Tootsie Rolls And Eye Candy"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 2: "Tootsie Rolls And Eye Candy"
I can understand why Randy felt excluded. some unsensensiebel from Ryan in the whole weekend Randy Ryan might've figured that'd be quick. jealousy comes up. Wyan is a little too sure with Randy that can go wrong -
Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
this story cannot be compared to ("Jesse 101"). the coming together of Jesse101 Tristan is more difficult because they had only been able to play youtube, but tristan was also immediately in love with Jesse. With Randy and Ryan it went faster by the immediate personal contact and as one says love also the first look.also a difference are the fights the Randy and Ryan have strong heights and depths. that makes the story for me so interesting .i love but also the andren stories of cumsy from vampier or zombi is geschakt things. -
ouinn is already thinking about 4 chapters . the type is not quite dense. that makes the history really uninteresting
