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mikel22

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  1. "Oh right! Like I'm REALLY gonna believe that Ariel kissed YOU!" Yeah, ryan, you probably look hot. but they fall in love. all in Randy
  2. but that makes him interesting.
  3. @Dodger you have a very good storry here. I've already read many on the site but this one is among the best. It reflects the life of a 15 year old boy very well again and is close to reality. i think there is still a lot to write about Robby and I'll keep doing it with pleasure
  4. love isn't about being reasonable you love someone whether he is good or not for you. everyone has certain types he falls in love with.robby i think is attracted to guys who dominate him
  5. I wish haily got it that Ryan just used her to stand up good with his dad. Haily should then kick Ryan in the ass he deserved it.
  6. "Oh wow...under different circumstances, I'd be honored to have Ariel in my arms, in my bed even." I think Randy would be with Ariel will be better.Ryan will surely give Haily also love more fluently if Randy is not there otherwise Haily would not be so in love with Ryan
  7. Ryan seems to have more interest in Haily than he admits. Father he's gay now he's trying to cover it up by telling him about Haily. It must look to Ryan's father like he's not in love with Randy anymore. Well done Ryan, you're now standing well with your father. In my eyes you are so far down slide not a good character you have
  8. Ariel is so sweet. I think a lot of boys are secretly watching him.his awkward way still makes him lovelier
  9. Sometimes when I read it over and over, little things fall on me that I missed when Ryan says: "HE DOESN'T LIKE ME!" Ryan shouted. "He likes YOU!" so Ryan was still interested in Tyler.
  10. mikel22

    Chapter 1

    which surprises me a little Ryan is first loves Tyler over everything then meets Randy and immediately it's the big love
  11. wonderful chapter. when orrin has given the beggar some of his little silver what he himself then from eating was missing show that he has also an inner beauty besizt.mein heart he has already conquered. @cumsy you create it so that the people in the stories about real beings you will forget that they actually don't exist.
  12. yeah, you're right. this is the best story there's love jealousy, funny places and lots of tension. and you can't wait to see how it goes.
  13. mikel22

    Chapter 21

    Derrick's so lucky with his mom. The woman has a strength wow.ich think the school principal was certainly glad when Derrick's mother was away again .he will certainly not ignore this woman and what to do against mobbers.
  14. mikel22

    Chapter 19

    i also think that it would be of little use against the idiots before going those are rich people there the school will be careful and sue surely have the good lawyers
  15. mikel22

    Chapter 19

    Johnson and his buddies are going to go on Derrick the reason why They do it is they want to expel him from school, so so brutal. how johnson is it could also end deadly for Derrick.Johnson would have him seizes ersaüft in the toilet.Were Derrick my son I would have taken him out of school immediately .tot uses the best school nothing
  16. mikel22

    Chapter 11

    wow, that's exactly what i thought in the last chapter when derrick to chris said he was hetro He better not have. Like you say, he better have said that he's with tanner.
  17. mikel22

    Chapter 9

    Now Drrick's mother has to do more overtime to fill the fridge. Derrick sollt auf knien danken das er so eine gute Mutter hat .
  18. mikel22

    Chapter 8

    Wow wow, that was a brilliant chapter. I think Derrick better not have taken the bracelet. Derrick had a very good view under the bar.
  19. mikel22

    Chapter 6

    I love it when the stories intertwine.
  20. I don't think Ryan's father is that bad. but he's a good excuse for Randy not to break up with haily.
  21. ""Can I watch it?" Wilson asked innocently. "Yeah Randy. Can we watch it? I'll wake up your mom and we can all go downstairs and watch it in the living room. I'll make popcorn."" I'm sure that would be very funny.
  22. mikel22

    Chapter 2

    I believe Tanner and Derrick every word of love manifestations, i also think tanner is the wealth of his parents embarrassing. he is not interested in expensive gifts.
  23. mikel22

    Chapter 1

    good chapter Derrick's feelings of exclusion were very realistic. The closer come from Tanner and Derrick gentle and credible .
  24. mikel22

    Chapter 17

    There you can see that ryan only has eyes for sean.
  25. A good meal and randy is back under ryan's slipper.ryan continues to hang out with sean. randy and cody would be better lovers. how long would sean still chase after ryan. for one or two fucks then he unloads him
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