mikel22
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The story should have a positive ending
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This story has to be a good story. I'm done. I'm sure teenagers who suffer that much also read. I hope cumsy gives you a hint that there is hope to get out of this situation.
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Chapter 60 - "Guess Who's Coming..."
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 60 - "Guess Who's Coming..."
I have to work on my track record to get into Ryan's school. I'd be like a second Sean to try all those cute boys -
Wow that very well written. One suffers With Zack. This is how abused people act in real life.
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Chapter 60 - "Guess Who's Coming..."
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 60 - "Guess Who's Coming..."
Wow, now I see why Sean is so hot for Ryan. It would be interesting to see how Sean and looks like -
Chapter 61- "Tell-Tale Cravings"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 61- "Tell-Tale Cravings"
Good chapter. I'm surprised that ryan dad is being so nice to randy. Maybe he already has plans to move to texas for work. -
a wonderful story I love it
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i am looking forwards to your next chapter
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I will continue to write if I like and even if not . you can't stand criticism
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as long as the story finished written and then the readers wait let already very strange . then I wish you much more fun with the hinhalter of your fans
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i think every author here has thought through his story to the end and will not let himself be influenced by comments. so i think story should only be published when they are finished. the advantage for the reader would not be to start stories that run over years or soar decades. i only read completed ones here.
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i think it's ok that you have sex .have a lot in this time through the internet much earlier already sex
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ohgott someone dares to criticize, yes, stones him.
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in germany Dustin must be 16 and the older may not be 10 years older than Dustin
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I'd turn the Dustin relationship into romance. and from Eric's point of view as horniness
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Eric is into boys as young as it is in chapter 1 was described if Dustint is getting older he is uninteresting for Eric.Eric inducement to young boys doesn't just vanish
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one is sure this love has a short time existed, the erick will then find something younger whether Dastin can cope with it
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with the confused thoughts Eric has in his head, I think it's already a very broken type.
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I suspect Joy was behind Colin's strange behavior.
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Well, I can't judge Russ for having sex with Joy. They're teenagers, not little angels. and joy's I love you sounds to me also not like the big love. beautiful story good kapiltel like me .i hope Russ and colin find together
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this fits well to the description of colin just too sweet the little
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Chapter 43: "Whispers, Scandals, & Secrets"
mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 43: "Whispers, Scandals, & Secrets"
and then Randy catches sean and Ryan fucking, Ryan says it's not what you think Sean is kidding. -
you can say better Danny don't call Adam and beg him to come back but just like people in love don't act rationally. that's what life is like and that's what cumsy has described to the dot Bravo a perfect emotional description
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i say this is the most painful way a relationship can end.just not be noticed anymore how air is treated.i can understand danny's pain there is a feeling of worthlessness.
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Tanner likes to be fuck And Derrickt gives it him likes that makes sex an ideal couple. Tanner has quite a tight entrance is much better than his own hand .
