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    Chapter 1

    mikel22 commented on Michael White Potter's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I'm sure the little one's been through a lot. he has to take care of himself for a long time now. the whispering sound surely not to annoy adults surely he got a lot of beating.
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    Chapter 3

    mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I think it would be too early to come out of the cupboard the boys solen himself to deal with himself first .I also think that this school would not react well to where she Derrick already makes life so hard. both are very impressive personalities.
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    Donald´s Dad has to go to jail because he's guilty of the merchandise. and I bow before Eddy for his actions
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    Recovery

    mikel22 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Recovery

    good chapter and yes Nate must love you he is so sweet and how worried he was about his big brother. I did not surprise the Nate already knew that Matt and his brother were a couple.
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    Unconditional

    mikel22 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Unconditional

    very good story .i like especially the preacher and his wife .beautiful times to read from a Prdiger who does not preach with the whips in his hand
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    Ryan urges Randy to come out again. He's always saying. Randy doesn't have to if he doesn't want to but Randy always comes back with the outing. by the way Sean and Ryan have a long time relationship not physically but mentally. I mean Ryan has not deserved Randy he should amuse himself with Sean.the two pass to get together both rather superficially
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    Yes sure Ryans dad makes a tasty dinner and by chance sean shows up ryan had forgotten to tell Randy.
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    the nicola thing wasn't meant to be serious either. what robby thought when fucking with stephanie I give him right my few times with women did not come to me the shopping bag in the head but so similarly
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    Robby fucks everything that spreads the legs. I understand him the family has driven totally crazy and so he reacts now. i would be happy if robby also nicola fikten and she would pregnant that would Don sure Don would dance on the table but not with joy..
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    Chapter 2

    mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Derrick´s Mother suffers when she can't give her son much. I am also impressed by Tanner's considerate behavior .he does not simply reach into his full pocket and pulls money out no he can think of what it looks like Derrick still has money but the mother has certainly understood where the 20dollar come from and that makes her sad. I have read kids in shool the spinoffs often, this story is completely different she's violent but close to real life. i always have to cry when children look into an empty fridge the story is on a very high niveau sorry if i write too many comments but this has to come out of me
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    Sanc Chapter 4

    mikel22 commented on quokka's story chapter in Sanc Chapter 4

    than I have to cry when I read like Jonah had to eat his way out of the garbage. the mother had to know that when a 12 year old boy throws it on the street this happens.
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    Sanc Chapter 3

    mikel22 commented on quokka's story chapter in Sanc Chapter 3

    good story i like especially Jonah so a dear boy .he had all reason to be evil but no he is just great . the mother and the stepfather should be behind bars.
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    Sanc Chapter 2

    mikel22 commented on quokka's story chapter in Sanc Chapter 2

    yes the police in usa can make you much worse .more cautious they are if they have someone with a lot of money and good lawyers against you. to the bad behavior of the Dad.ich could imagine that the author consciously at the beginning Dad does not look so good. That he's not a good dad shows Jonah's behavior. who lives out of a trash can for a week until he desperately asks his dad for help. Good thing dad doesn't mind his son being gay. Most dads. do not accept this
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    ok if it is such a big tempest no one will come from outside to catch robby so it is amy
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    Chapter 2

    mikel22 commented on PhillMakracken's story chapter in Chapter 2

    that is well written the erotic part wow i think it will be a very good story. the chapters are short but exactly on the points.
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    it amazes me something that the dicusions now are reduced to who catches robby wanking. what well I think also in canda no forbidden thing is. more surprised me the jo´s report to the police of the abuse of alex to robby has not yet led to any questioning of the police. I know that so that with a suspicion of abuse the questioning happens immediately.
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    I think Amy is it the robby when jerking sees.Don Robby will then safely instruct in a clinic for sex criminals .would fit to the dorky family.Robby should not waste his time with conner who has a boyfriend . the reaction of Robby when he says conner he could give him next summer or some explanation or save his breath.
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    Chapter 5

    mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 5

    they're an ideal couple. I also like Ariel's grandmother, She's sweet and clever- I don't think it'll take her long to discover that tyler and ariel are lovers. @cumsy @cumsy you have the grandma well described and she is an enrichment for the story.
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    Chapter 2

    mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 2

    that's a lovely story that I like to read over and over again.
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    Roby should never have let himself be adopted. from the beginning he was badly treated by his family.as it looks like now he was 20 years old at the pigsty.he lost his independence already in the first days.apart from that his money was already squandered by Don. again a praise to Doger for a wonderful story the in contrast to other authors also runs in a reasonable time frame.
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    Chapter 31

    mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 31

    with so many started stories it becomes surely difficult that it goes on in a reasonable time frame and it comes yes more and more new to it
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    Chapter 34

    mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 34

    yes exactly it is good if they in time remains .
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    Nice family first chases Ryan him out the window and now Ryan's father is chasing him out of the house.
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    Chapter 5

    mikel22 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 5

    yes in any case in socks is chriß almost naked. well that chris has kept the socks on otherwise Andres pants would have become wet
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    no despise Ryan I only ragiere on how he acts and that is horect, zb how he rummspiete with Haaily and then she drops shows no good karakter.warscheinlich see the other readers differently than I . you hopefully understand my view about Ryan not as a creep in your story.
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