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Marty

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  1. Marty

    Chapter 6

    That was really brave of Justin; accepting that offer to hang out at the concert. I'm suspecting it may actually be a turning point for him. It may have helped that it was with a group of drama kids, who are used to being treated as different.
  2. As they have also done in Ireland.
  3. Okay then, I'll rephrase my comment: He was thinking about going for a swim.
  4. Marty

    Chapter 5

    I like the way you are slowly fleshing out the characters in this story, instead of simply having them all as two-dimensional, @TheZot.
  5. Marty

    Chapter 4

    Poor Bobby.
  6. Marty

    Chapter 3

    Another interesting chapter. Looks like Justin may actually make some friends, and find out just how much fun he can have when that happens.
  7. Marty

    Chapter 2

    "There's more to being attractive than just how you look. There's the way you act, and the way you move, your attitude. It's all important." Wise words from Rafe.
  8. Marty

    Chapter 1

    Interesting first chapter, that makes me want to read more. I'm not sure what Bobby's story is, but I'm not giving up on him yet. If he truly is a closet case, maybe that explains some of his behaviour. Particularly growing up in a redneck part of the country...
  9. Hi, Val Hope the storm doesn't do any damage...
  10. I've probably missed people, so.... G'day, all !! Another good day weather-wise here. Mainly sunny, temp around 20°C/68°F
  11. G'morning, duggie
  12. Of course he knew what he was doing.. Going for a swim.
  13. I'm off to bed. G'night, gang!
  14. I reckon if all you are doing is appreciating the view, then it's not pervy at all. Just because we grow older, doesn't mean we should stop admiring. I know what you mean about remembering him as a little kid. But little kids do have this strange tendency to grow up...
  15. <Mental note to self> Remember the insect repellant next time you go out with your arms and lower legs uncovered. *itch, itch, itch* *scratch, scratch, scratch* 😮
  16. Then it wouldn't be lemonade.
  17. Okay, we won't.
  18. *Scratches head, and wonders how you could make lemonade without lemons*
  19. My day was good, thanks. Took advantage of the good weather and did a 6+ km trek around a lough (lake) in the Ox Mountains, about 60 km from me. Glad I remembered to bring my sunblock with me. You had a good day?
  20. Bonjour, Nick
  21. Hey, Albert!
  22. Good evening, clo
  23. G'morning, all. Another sunny and warm day here. Currently 19°C/66°F and dry.
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