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Wayne Gray

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  1. What? I was just asking a friend a question. *blinks innocently*
  2. Did your shoveling dreams come true?
  3. It's like *monotone voice* "Oh. Oh good. Yes. More of what we don't need. That's great. This is fine. All of it is fine."
  4. This was a good read. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Give it a try.
  5. Wayne Gray

    Chapter 5

    I see Leo as a sort of physical manifestation of guilt, mourning, and the process of moving on. Such things are very real to those feeling them, and there's no one right way to get through that process. I feel for Ty. It sounds like Dad was trying to force him to have a "normal" relationship or pay for his "degenerate" ways. Luckily, he couldn't imagine a world where men could marry each other. I hope that works out well for both of the guys. Nice chapter, tim. I'm gonna read it again.
  6. Wayne Gray

    Choice

    You're not wrong, Tony. Maintaining love takes work; that's true. And what I'm saying is that the decision to put in that work isn't really a decision for me. It's decided already. It's just something I'm going to do, because I must. And ... I'm okay with that.
  7. Wayne Gray

    Chapter 3

    I can feel the self-admonishment. The "you should be past this" in Lonnie. And this contrasts pretty hard against the views of most around him. So many are saying, "take your time," "go and be still," "do what you need to do." And then he has Leo. This line is telling. I undressed and slipped into our bed. OUR bed. He's not ready. And that's okay.
  8. Wayne Gray

    Choice

    Thanks, Parker. It’s a pretty clear and simple emotion that inspired it, so that works. 🙂
  9. Wayne Gray

    Choice

    Thanks, Chris. 🙂
  10. Wayne Gray

    Choice

    Thanks, tim. 💚
  11. Wayne Gray

    Choice

    How is it that I feel so much, when all I sought was fun? Why does this seem like something real, like something I have won? Why does your name fall from my lips, with reverence in my voice? What have you done to me, my boy, you took away my choice. To love is not a choice.
  12. Wayne Gray

    Chapter 2

    Maybe it is a bit soon. The going estimate I see most often is that we need a month to mourn for every year we spent with someone we lose. Of course, there's a lot of variety there, too. Regardless, I bet Lonnie could use a friend at the very least. If things turn into more than that ... well, that's just gravy.
  13. Wayne Gray

    Chapter 2

    Awww. Lonnie is on his journey. There will be bumps and even a little crash or two along the way, but he's moving forward. Keve could be good for him. Hell, they could be good for each other. One way to find out. Ask the man, Lonnie! Nice chapter, tim. I understand how hard it is to move on, and Lonnie is still somewhere in the middle of that. I am interested to watch his journey.
  14. You are not wrong. That Xan is one of the best knights in the kingdom was just icing on a delicious cake. 😏
  15. Thank you for reading and commenting. This one, in particular, I am proud of. 🙂
  16. Wayne Gray

    Loss and Hope

    I'm glad you made it through it. This was the roughest chapter I've ever written in any story. Though it's critical to what comes next. Thanks for reading and for the comment.
  17. Wayne Gray

    Changes

    I'm glad you're still reading. Yeah, it is getting sad. But as I've said to others, it's not about what looks to be an upcoming loss. It's about what is left behind. You're right about our three guys leaning on one another. They're lucky, all of them, to have found what they did. It will make the coming weeks bearable - not easy, but bearable.
  18. Wayne Gray

    Chapter 1

    Oh, man. Lonnie is so wounded, and you write him so well. What do we do when someone we love is just ... gone? How do we think about moving on without guilt? Lonnie knows Leo would want him to do exactly that, but honoring our love and moving on sometimes feels at odds. And no matter what we tell ourselves, the guilt can still suffocate us. That's what I see in Lonnie. He's trying to hang on, and let go, and move on, all at once. I've been there. Anyone who has lost something precious has. Nice job, friend. xoxo.
  19. Thank you, Mike. That's a great compliment considering the man delivering it. And the dynamic is really fun. It engages me in a unique way. The man with the authority ... asking. Pleading, almost. For permission to command. Yeah. I like it.
  20. Gotta admit, it's a seductive thing for me too. I love the idea, you know? Love superseding duty is such a draw. And that dynamic is fun. Thanks for reading and for the comment. It's great.
  21. Wayne Gray

    Awakening

    Great to hear you're enjoying it. I know it took a bit to ramp up, so I'm glad you stuck with it. There's more ahead!
  22. Wayne Gray

    Time

    Weird ... double post.
  23. Wayne Gray

    Time

    You’re welcome. Thanks for reading. And no. Chris and Miranda largely got along well until Chris left Tad. That made things even harder for her - she lost someone she liked, and she’s dealing with the diagnosis for her brother. Its a hard time, all around.
  24. LOL. Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As I said above, the dynamic is very fun. Thanks for the read and comment!
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