Danilo Syrtis
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Cassie as hunchback of ND ? 😂🤣 i want to see that 🤣😂 Liam’s story is just heartbreaking ! a spin off for John ? 🤤
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Arggggggh !!! you are killing me 🙊 !!! i’m dyingggggggg !!!!!!! how could you do that ? !!!!!! that’s worse than evil !!!! you are making me cryyyyyyyy... of frustration !!!!!!!! from high to low after Jeremy/Mason lovely scene ! 🙈
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we need to have a wall where we can pin the best extract from stories. and Liam’s remark belongs definitely to this wall 😂🤣 took me couple of min before i could resume my reading 🤣😂
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sell the dishwasher and make everyone wash their own things 😂
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hot hot HOOOOOOOOT !
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ok Jujubee made me cry a lot ! 😭 Nash was one of the cop who found Lex and Cassie ! 🙊 there will be an interesting chapter when they meet together😁 (picturing Cassie boa-constricting Nash 😂) definitly a rollercoaster emotions chapter and a great chapter ! well done 👍
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!!!!! 😍😘
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i often have « allergies » when i’m on Wayne’s stories : i just can’t help ! 😂 took me a few lines before i realize Patrick was trans ! very subtle the way you use to make us find it 😁 just one thing : the chapter is too short. i don’t have enough to survive until next chapter 😭
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kind of sad for Nash but life sometimes is like that
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found a typo 🙈 « The said their goodbyes » (they ?) so sad Danny was going away but i hope he is going back soon yes i would to have a story about Danny 😜
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lol i’m already hooked 😜 and i’m already loving « Danny » 🤣
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Epilogue & Author's Note
Danilo Syrtis commented on kbois's story chapter in Epilogue & Author's Note
the story is definitely wonderfully written 😍 and i already know that i will read Jarren’s story with delight 🤤 -
wonderful ending ! 😍 Ms Helen is more 😈 than i expected 😂
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Sarah’s letter was just heartbreaking !😭 one question : how Sarah’s lawyer managed to deliver her letter to the spa at the right time ? he tracked Lex ? since the spa was something Cassie planned, the lawyer couldn’t know where Lex was, unless he asked Cassie or Rita (may be Rita works for « that » lawyer ?) my question does not minus the exceptional quality of this chapter 😍 oh so Ryan’s daughters and Kathy’s grandchildren are going to see the pic with Lex’s tattoos ? 🙊🙈
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the rings and the tattoo look awesome !😍
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ok i know some of them was drunken but : « He was smiling as he he watched them leave. » Mazen got doubled ? 😂
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1 more typo : « how they both though she would be perfect for the job » (thought ?) Cassie always makes me lmao 🤣 (6 more chapters before Jarren’s story 😄)
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and there will be a lot of « holy s*** » during the wedding 😂🤣
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another drop of my jaw, though not as big as the previous chapter 🤣 going from good surprise to good surprise 👍
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yes it is but tomorrow is sunday and i’m hooked to the story 😜🤣
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WOW my jaw dropped as well !!!😂🤣 with the first « holy s*** » i knew that Lex was like Ryan lol but Seth was a really BIG surprise and a very good one 😍 well done 👍 and my favorite chapter for this story 😍 catching readers off guard is the talent of a good writer 👍
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sorry i found a few more typo 🙈 : « he meant to call he back » (her ?) « The three of the watched » (them ?) « making his lats stand out » (last ?) « The stopped and watched » (they ?) still thinking my comments are the best ? 😜 btw congrats for the job 👍 (almost 6 months late 😝) after salivating on the sex scenes, now i’m salivating about those lobsters mac 🤤
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yes i’m in another continent and i do sleep 😜 i live in Europe (France) hmm i don’t think my comments are the best. all your readers send really good comments and even better than me ^^
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« As Lex shut off the bike and Jase got off, Jace pulled off his helmet and pulled Lex into a hug after he had dismounted.. » Jase or Jace ? split personalities ? 🤣 so we have now another Cassie-like ? 😂 Ian should ask Lex to help him in apprentice interview : which one’s aura was best for him 😜 great chapter 👍
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i don’t like donuts 🤣 blueberry muffin is ok but my favorite are french pastries 😍 german and austrian are tasty too
