Freemantleman

Comedy Gold!! How come I get close to Peeing myself every chapter because I'm laughing so hard!?!?. I'd love to re-read this chapter but I darent, my mums on daily diuretics & I'm not fighting an 88yr old for the only WC in the flat (apartment for you "Johnny foreigner's"!). Not a cool look and tbh I'd get my arse kicked, never get between an octanegerian and a WC - I'm the carer and I'd only need to drag the carpet cleaner out in the end!!! Roflmao

Game On!

Many thanks that makes perfect sense. As you said it was security that screwed things. Why go to the lengths of a Faraday if your taking the computer home with you that seems utter madness!?!??

I've got this mad desire to start screaming Fake News, Fake News! We all know the computer fairies stop the bad stuff happening, but those naughty sprites do like to pretend to be African Prince's needing your help to move their fortunes abroad and they'll pay you handsomely!! Great chapter, I'm not into tech but I grasped the scary s☆☆t that was happening.!! My only bit of confusions comes in that I thought Faraday cages were infallible !? If I'm wrong I'm blaming Dr Who & the BBC! Roflmao (they've appeared in atleast 2 episodes lol) ❤️😇❤️😇 🤣🤣

Isn't Enrico both a highly trained Mexican intelligence officer with fluid sexuality, some morals, questionable ethics at times but also our much sought after "master of terrorism & shadow puppeteer in chief" using his official training (much enhanced at some point) and access all areas permission from his legitimate "cover job" he's way too slick, entitled, sauve and deadly to just be a mid level "spook" !?! If he was just a spook 100% on Mexicos' "dime" what's "Mexicos'" interest in any of these plots!?! It's either that or when did I "lose the plot" quite literally!?!?. Also TMI WARNING! TMI WARNING! I don't bottom much nowadays but I'd let Enrico "slip me one" !!! 😱🤣❤️😇 (if he ever got super hard up & nonfussy roflmao)

Too short!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 3??? Lol ❤️😇

Compelling, energetic, longing.

Totally epic!!!! I'm loving this and I defo will get my panties in a bunch somewhere painfully and very embarrassing if the next chapter doesn't drop like NOW!?! NOW! NOW ! FFS there's only so long I can stand in the middle of the living room shouting "NOW" at my phone screen wearing pink nylon woman's panties for dramatic flair and effect - I need to wash them n get them back to my neighbours washing line before tomorrow as its seniors bingo down the schemes community room & "MIssy" loves her geriatric support "pink pulling panties" PS never promise what you don't want to have to deliver.!!! Apparently my outburst got unwanted attention and I'm now being blackmailed by the sweet looking old biddy in the unit 2 down from my mothers (where I'm my mother's live in carer) she snapped my hissy fit on her "geriatric" mobile and is demanding two packs of incontinence pads daily to keep the photos off social media - it's always the quiet one's!! Talk about being caught by your short n curlies! Roflmao! Chapter 2?????🤪😉🥰😇

Now theres a pace that you can get behind and jog along the story to! Nice!!

Fab!

Cracking! Now no keeping us in suspenders!! Roflol ❤️😇

Loved it!

Loving it!! ❤️😉😇

OK I'm gonna have to ask!?! Why the clothes line!? Lol 😕🤪🫣❤️😇

It all happen hard n fast "in the rocks" & we all know Marc loves "playing (exaggerated eye waggle) in the rocks" !! Lol

Wow! There's trouble racing towards them! Say in about 9 months lol!?!

I can smell a true "Country Karen" from a Mile off all soggy badger (as she was labelled by another contributor (badger) ) with a strong whiff of lab having rolled in foxs' shit, with a potty mouth that would put an Essex girl to shame, mixed with a knock off "Roedean" education from a lower, lower tier private school. All wrapped in twin set (& knock off) pearls, sharp vowels, vileness, a tad of bile & a huge heap of self appointed superiority when castigating the phelbs and degenerates in public and the barely contained rage & potty mouth in private. "Country Karen" = vile self serving, shrew who should know better as karma does ask for payment in full! Vince's senior partner deserves a shout out ! Deflated the "C.K." in seconds pleasant to "watch" whether he is fully on board or not well done!! Lol Great chapter!!!

Wow! Wankbait!! Lol

Phew!! I'm way too young & far too sexy to be stabbed like Ceasar, by a volley of readers (& an author) with either quills or keyboard return keys! I also tell lies, 'cause I'm 55 & only sexy now to my fiancée & he has to tell lies when asked lol! If its,F,M &P's your referring too I don't have soo much of an issue with the info dump or speed there but perhaps that's because it's Scifi & there more leeway with realities!?!? Loving that book too!! As I said I'm happy for dialogue with people, I'm not a writer, I'm a fairly avid reader, & a late night poster, (U.K.time due to insomnia, & sometimes I think my late night ramblings are comedy gold, but in the cold light of day it's more like luke warm brass, than comedy gold!) And others take on a situation or plot explanation from their perspective can open up something that you might be struggling to interpret or enjoy?! & I certainly would hate to think I was being rude because I gave neither the skill nor imagination to be an writer. Again many thanks for your time & explanation its much appreciated! I'm sad yhers only another couple of chapters here cos it's been a nice "ride"!! with that I'll post n I'm off yo M,F & P's cos I saw on my way in another chapter has dropped! See you all soon!! Ian 💞

Talk about fast & furious at times! (& I'm not just talking about the sex!!!) 😂😉❤️😇 I'm gonna get murdered I'm sure!?!! but as much as I truly love this story, (I want as long and engaging chapters as is possible lol!) It seems to me, that "something" is getting lost as there is soo much information being put out at once, could be natural ebb & flow!?!? Everything seems to be progressing at break neck speed and I'm starting to find it hard to follow all of the different "story threads", "character strings"& "relationships" without going back to previous chapters to see where things link-up or progress from. I'm not trying to be a buzz kill, if I didn't love the story I'd probably just quietly click "unfollow the story" & find something else to read. If it's just me, we'll I'm sorry for beiing a dick!? I'd rather poke my head over the parapet and voice my opinion and ask for the thoughts from fellow readers & the author !?!

I wasn't lucky enough to have tutors like him at my school!! Well not quite......... There was one French (subject) teacher that helped out in PE (gym class) for one sport - Squash I tried it out and discovered it was taught at a small local country club and this time i was the only guy to take it up so it was one on one teaching. He was straight, rugged with a 5'🕔 shadow dark hair, hairy chest and I discovered later a big cock with low hanging balls! The first 2 weeks were predictable n hard going - I played rugby for my school and I was as wide as I was tall lol so speed wasn't my forte' so I wiped out and got hammered. After the lesson he showered, I watched lol and when he dressed I went for a quick swim n wanked in the showers after he left! The 3rd week I'd forgotten it was squash n didn't have the right kit I explained n blushed but he threw me the thin Jersey he'd worn to school over his shirt n tie. I stretched it n nothing a good way n he commented on my nipples almost breaking through the weave, he playfully flicked one as we took our stances to begin. That Jersey was wet when we finished I'd sweated so hard, I was embarrassed to hand it back but he sniffed it n said he'd sort it later with a wink it wrnt into his bag this week he said he'd swim with me his tshirt came off followed by his dark blue rugby style shorts & ol i saw a perky hairy arse frame by his jockstrap straps and I went as hard as a rock - I was only 16! He stripped the strap n waited I hesitated n he smirked n told me to just do it he could see me hard. It was a male only facility so we walked naked to the pool it was desserted at 4pm on a February Thursday. He clubbed up- I'd heard rumours that he liked dick, probably bi as he was dating a female teacher. We bullshitted, and lazily swam. I got probing questions about my non school life but nothing that went too far over the line we'd been skating along if not over! It was the mid '80's. He popped up n went to float and his half hard cock broke the water and without thought he skinned it back lazily ( we,are both uncircumcised) then realised he was with a student n stopped he said it was natural and not shameful and with some more work my remaining puppy fat would turn to muscle and I'd be q really good looking guy, again my limp cock exploded to full length in 0.45 seconds I giggled out loud he turned and laughed loudly.he didnt touch me, not then but as we entered the empty changing room we grabbed towels and headed to the showers open school gym style he grabbed my arm turned me to face him n he said he was proud of me to give this intro to the sport a go - he knew I was wildly out of my comfort zone, he saw me for who I was becoming and he pulled my close, I could feel his breath on my shoulder and he looked up, lightly kissed my forehead, I was shaking with embarrassment and massive desire and he them took me into a full body hug arms tight around me and as his cock mashed against mine I lost control I totally kept mashing my cock against his and then I went rigid and FFS! I bloody well spunked all over his cock, balls and his treasure trail !!! God I was a wreak what the hell had happened???? As he pulled back another spurt came as I saw my cum dripping off his balls and pubes he was hard, rock! He laughed with me/at me but he then pulled me back kissed my forehead again n said things things happen and it was our moment and nothing unnatural, men are men. As I lathered up my cock n pubes he turned I hadn't seen him jerking off id been lathering my head up first, he stepped back and he came with grunts and a smile one volley hit my shin and we both erupted with laughter! When we'd finished and dressed he grabbed my hand and said thank you it was natural, gentle and organic and I felt lis lips brush my forehead one last time. I got hard again! Christ I was 16 lol!! he knew that I knew the score, I was newish to man sex but there were no threats or pleas to make sure I kept quiet. I also knew that there was be no follow up hook ups. It was what it was a huge learning curve for me. He gave ne a lift back to school so I could pick up my bike n cycle home. Some may see him as a predator, a peodo, a beast. But I saw the flip side of this hard arse no nonsense language teacher. A man's man but one that showed me that I shouldnt be ashamed of my body (which i was), a man that showed me organically that man sex is ok. Yes we leaped over that invisible "line" but I wasnt raped or abused, nor threatened to keep quiet. I was shown that I was growing into a man that was already learning that I liked cock and I wanted to be with a man. There was no premeditation or coercion, just acceptance and affirmation that I wasn't a ghoul or a abomination . Whether this ever happened with other male students i don't know.!?! I'd heard he'd been seen near a known cruising ground but that's all. He was never my teacher, and when i did see him occasionally around the school I might get, curt nod once a wink other times an eye roll if he was harried! I've never spoken of this In almost 40 years, no fear or shame it was personal and a turning point im greatful for I've used the memories as wank bait often for months after, sporadically over the decade's. One important thing I did learn - Squash isn't a sport for me!!!!!

Christ!! I almost licked my finger, ready to flick the page over. I actually meant to scroll to the top of this page!!! 😂🫣🤪😇

W.O.W.!!!!! My heart is still racing! Hot, sexy, demure, principled, flawed. That could describe several of the "players" within this cracking tale, but I'm as queer as one Liberaces' fur edged capes, so you can knock out the southern belles! Roflol. There's threes hot men that almost steam!!! Two who want to be together, mainly in lust at this stage. Two that should be together, one of whom just doesn't see/feel it yet (& may never!,!) but with luck might 🤞 !?!? There's a bitter manchild who might just explode the story, I feel abuse in his past and a desire to feel affection not hatred/domination from a man, but also loathing of it from the otherside of his psyche !?!? One strong woman who would stand in the arms of one if she thought they were true of heart, but stand aside if need be (she doesnt miss much!!) & a girl on the cusp of womanhood who isn't sure where her path leads. It may not all be true but its what I'm seeing at this stage. I'll hold my hand up if I'm off the true path of the story!?!?!! But for heavens sake keep it coming I've got corners to curl n margins to smudge!!!!!!! 😉

Bloody brilliant writing, if it was a paper book it would be covered in bent corners where you've rushed ahead to see what happens next,then your thumbing back to where you started to carefully read every word throughly. Ahead, back again, ahead, back again skip, read, reread with a hasty pace followed by a snails pace. Other corners deeply creased where you've marked your place so you don't have to waste valuable time later. Corners & page margins would also covered in smudges, over lapping, interlaced, permanently marking the enjoyment gained and the hours spent holding it, reading it and dissecting it. It would almost be like you could see the colours and the emotions lifting, swirling off the pages and dancing before your eyes just where your near sight blurs and your far sight begins. Not that i have any strong feelings lol roflol. <cough> <embarrassed smirk> 😉🤣❤️😚😇

Sounds like Stevens video is just going to the the "tip of the cumberg" sorry I meant "iceberg" yeah!?....... I thinks that's what I meant!? 👿 😇❤️