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Oh please no!!!
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With so many kids maybe after David and the other older one Steven I think?Go to college they could come back and be part of the staff/Family because they are going to need the help.I have a friend who I got interested in your story he's from the Philippines.After reading the last chapter he told me poor filipino families often sell their youngest child.I don't know if you planned on adding any other kids in this story but that might be something you can work in.
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Thank you so much for the new chapter to this story.Well we will definitely find out If Mr.Raffe is an ass or a human being the way Zack poured his heart out Mr.Raffe has to be able too see this is for real.Wouldn't be something if the teacher Zack doesn't like turns out to be the guy who gets the ball rolling to get Zack out of this.I don't know if some other reader said this in another chapter comment but Sam is a sweetheart
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It great to have powerful people on your side like Carleton does as long as the cause is admiral like this one is.Was the military base you mentioned an American base?If it was these people have incredible pull
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I'm most likely going to show my ignorance of architecture here.Couldn't you build a building that connects the house sort of like how a hospital adds a wing?Maybe have a hallway that connects the two buildings so all the boys are sort of in the same place .Just a thought
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If I recall their location is secluded.I'm worried some government busy bodies will start asking questions about so many kids etc. and about other government regulations. That dream he had with the first kid was a great touch.I do believe he's in a better place but if I had that dream after initially being freaked out I would also be reassured .
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This is sort of a cliffhanger. This is way more then just a couple of boys to bring back.And I admit usually I have a thought as to what it might be but this I don't. I hope it's not trouble with legal authorities.
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Carleton was thinking about one or two dogs.At different times we would have one or two dogs at a time. To me when it was two dogs they always seemed happier. When Carleton told Harry the story he mentioned something about boys saying no.I guess that means some boys turned him down. I could understand why they would but I bet that hurts Carleton almost as much as the boy who died.
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"I don't know Rita I still have...""Great I'll see you there " if that's not classic Rita. I guess that means you won't need to give us another Rita warning next chapter. I see the timing of Rita's closing date and Senior's arrival coinciding could lead to some incident that could possibly involve Gus. Maybe Marta's family is buying the property. If I interpreted Rick reaction right he seems to think after reading the Wikipedia passage about Gus that Gus is straight but it referred to Helene as a partner nothing more than that a business partner.While he was at it he should have checked if there were any YouTube videos of Gus
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A buddy of mine had a Great Dane and it was a cool dog but he did tell they cost a lot to maintain.
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I'll say one thing it never seems to be dull over there.I don't want to rain on anybody's parade but so far he brought home boys and all of them been nice.What would he do if one had behavioral problems and didn't get along with the others? Law of averages suggest that would happen eventually.Although I'm sure Alex and the other men try to weed that out.
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What story is that?
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Well Harry looks like a different case from the other boys yeah it's terrible to lose your Mom like that but he did have a loving mother. The other's were on the street and suffered. I think it was David's parents that died if I remember right I guess he could relate to Harry the best.So how many are there now?If the new rooms aren't done how are they doing it?
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Finally found it thank you.As far as the 30 boys I assumed Alex was bringing them but you're right Mr Jobe fertile mind might be going faster then his pen
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Yeah I looked through it again and no mention of dogs.Although funny I was skimming fast through the words and for a brief second I thought I saw the word Dogs lol.I bet that's what happened to @Buz
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I wasn't thinking a part was missing but what I was going to say is the I didn't know it was 30 boys.I assumed Alex had been bringing them.Well next chapter explain how all this happened the dogs also.Also are the new rooms finished?As far as Carleton getting to know each boy individually he's not only a dad but sort of like a 24/7 school teacher
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Carleton mentioned going on a vacation well since its boys Disney world or Six flags has to be in the mix safe to say none of them has experienced that.Matthew apologizing to Carleton was a very thoughtful thing to do.He had to had some kind of good influence growing up
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 11
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 11
How about that?A story where a guy gets together with his crush with no dramatic roadblocks or issues that stop them.Great story Thanks Coms.Hey everybody save this page you can prove to people that Coms actually finishes multi-chapter stories lol -
If I had been present at that trial I would have been thrown out for laughing at the demonstration .His 25% will keep the house running smoothly. I wonder if the boxes he didn't know about are significant
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There is only one thing I worry about the day may come where Carleton might simply have no room to take another boy .He would have wall to wall sleeping bags of boys if it were up to him but I don't think the law would let him.Did Maria give him an answer?
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He said ten rooms?Wow.I think you would have to expand the kitchen also plus a space for big freezer
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I hope I'm wrong but it sounds like something traumatic happened to Charlie.While this organization overall is doing a great thing I would be uneasy if the Russian Mafia was involved.
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I think Dallas has an idea Trey has the hots for him if he asked him to walk home together.That girl in fifth grade that asked Trey to be her boyfriend when he responded by running home for a month and a half I wonder how long she was scarred for? If I was in that locker room situation where Dallas was in another part of the room I would have probably tried some lame scheme like 'Oops I dropped my quarter"and hoped it rolled far enough to Dallas side of the room while he was changing.BTW another awesome picture to go with the story.
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We now have seven with David being the oldest and Charlie being the youngest.The Brady Bunch had 6 and they had pretty much had the same age range so we got come up with a name for this group.Lets see..Carleton's Crew?
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David said he was taught to cook well that right there could solve some staff problems.Carleton said he tipped the waiter it better not be the waiter who sneered at David.
