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That's not their son perhaps Great.Great Great Great Great.......Great Grandson seeing that he's on a train
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It's going to be fun to see her go down
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You say Good Morning after the words real danger 🙄
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The bear and the warnings.
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The bear and the warnings.
Is the text about Kellan and the wall being spray painted about Chase from the same person trying to confuse the hell out of Noah? -
The bear and the warnings.
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The bear and the warnings.
Comments, conspiracy theories and reactions always welcome. Conspiracy theories?...... OH!!! You mean about the story I was all prepared to say a lot of stuff about JFK -
The step Tommy took in this chapter is the step Brian still has to take. I could understand when Brian was a teenager but now? I'm thinking WTH. If Brian calls out of the blue again if I'm Tommy I don't know if I would answer it
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Chapter Four: The High Chair
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Four: The High Chair
It might even be worse than that. She might know what Caleb is saying is true but it may be better for her sick narrative to act like what he's saying isn't true. I'm thinking about the pills I don't know if Caleb can convincingly put the pills on the side of his mouth or under his tongue to avoid taking them. As gross as this is he may have to force regurgitate them. Maybe the incubator's sister overheard the commotion on the phone. Right now she would not get it but if Caleb gets well enough to remember things and accuses the incubator of what she is doing perhaps the sister will remember hearing what she heard over the phone and put 2+2 together -
I typed this comment and then discovered it wasn't here now I wonder where I posted it? Duh with most of his mother’s clothes going to the local Saint Vincent de Paul shop I didn't know St Vincent dePaul had such a world wide reach.We have some here in San Diego run by Father Joe Carroll.They do good work You may not be aware of this but in the U.S. there is a DePaul University founded by St.Vincent de Paul. And while there is an innocent explanation for this the school's mascot is Blue Demons...Go figure
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‘Maybe. Pop didn’t ever really like me having friends around, or anything like that anyway . . . it’s just the way things were.’ Remember in a previous chapter I commented that Pop's religion had similarities to the Amish well here's another one.It sound like Pop didn't want Levi to have friend from the evil English world Since Levi didn't have many friends perhaps Aaron's brother Zack could be one ‘Goodbye, Mum,’ he said quietly. Matt placed a hand on his shoulder and Levi leaned into him briefly. That line really got to me
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If @kbois was with you you wouldn't have to worry about gators....They were scared of her
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Shane took advantage of Ryder with the drug dealing but I also have to wonder if Shane also targeted Ryder because he was cute and you know where that could lead
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“That’s fine. All you gotta do is hold on to me and don’t let go. That’s the whole job.” “Arms around me,” Ryder said. “Tight. Don’t be shy about it.” Bet you Owen had an instant love of motorcycles He kissed me. I wonder if the long motorcycle ride was Ryder's idea of foreplay
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Just so you know ....A bird and a Cat don't mix well😄
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I have a feeling if Owen and Ryder's relationship got discovered, Margot wouldn't take his side... I just hope she'll grow a spine soon! Answer to both questions Jules. I think if Margot tries to throw Ryder under bus Jules would then say "if you go through with that WE"RE THROUGH. As far as being an ally to Owen I could see Jules filling in some blanks to Beth.
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Your way?🤔....OH YEAH The alternate universe where @Topher Lydon wins all those Pulitzer Prizes
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"Men," Val said simply, chewing thoughtfully. "You are such incredibly simple creatures. You punch each other in the face, break a few teeth, Something Val has NEVER done of course
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Who ever The king is when Cecily is older we KNOW who the real boss will be
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The story doesn't say complete yet. So is it? I understand why one would think that but who knows maybe something happened after that.We don't know for sure until say "complete"
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Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
Do all those images represent certain characters in the story?(if the third one is Billy good for Caleb) -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
So what is Daune (Duane?) going to tell Billy?......To read @Topher Lydon story on GA? -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
Your mom has hooks into anything, and a friend that works at the bank. She’s got eyes on you… You need to be careful, okay?" An employee at the bank is watching him ?Holy crap -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
I have seen the name Duane but here the name is spelled Daune.Is it the same name spelled different or is this a different name? And how do you say it? -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
I remember a beer company that had the slogan 'It's the water and a lot more" in this town I think the " a lot more part" is more relevant -
As @Summerabbacat pointed out this comment by Eric “On a motorcycle though?” Eric said. “Didn’t really look like the Ohio State type.”, A MOTORCYCLYLE!!!!???? OMG!! He must be on the FBI ten most wanted list. Hey Eric I looked it up there are some students that go to Ohio State that owns motorcycles.Yeesh small town mentalities Eric talked about the fair food industry and how it was basically a traveling economy with its own supply chains. Eric probably did some research on fair food....Seeing how it contributes to the business he's in
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Ryder read Margot but it is interesting that Margot also read Ryder.....Gee Margot how were you able to do that?....Unless you share some of the qualities of Ryder. While Margot already made up her mind about Ryder with the prison thing(We do need the details on that) Ryder has shown he is less judgmental than Margot with this comment “I’m not saying you’re a bad person. I’m saying you’re scared shitless. Needless to say most of the readers here will disagree with the first part of Ryder's statement
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