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That was comment #13 I add this comment so the total won't be that number😄
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This is me hoping more than anything else. Perhaps when the police check out the car Colt didn't do it correctly and the brakes were in no danger of giving out (or they can pretend they didn't find anything) Tell you what if I'm on the jury and I hear all the details I would vote to acquit even if I think he is guilty
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We are building a fire before you turn blue, Then he could meet Kyle......Oh,oh that kind of blue
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I wonder if anyone agrees Alvarez looks a little like Brad Pitt
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Well I was hoping for a light heated balance to your other story but I guess not. But this looks good
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REALLY!!! I could have sworn that was your M.O.
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"And for God's sake, get rid of the weed before I have to pretend I didn't see it." Good line he could also pretend/forget what Colt said about the brake line "I'm sorry," Noah said, and his voice broke open in a way Colt had never heard before. "I'm sorry I made you carry this. You were the only person who ever tried to help me and I turned you into a criminal. I didn't know how else to..." He couldn't finish. If Noah testifies to that in Colt's trial it would go a long way for Colt to get a leinent sentence
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@mastershakeme you better write it where George gets the most severe penalty. Otherwise @Summerabbacat will write a scathing comment almost as long as one of your chapters (And almost as entertaining 😄) When they decide which prison to put George in have the person in charge look for the one that has the most inmates named Bubba
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No wonder you write such intelligent stories ,TV hasn't soften your brain (Like me)
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the treason of a Crusader fighting alongside a Saracen to spill noble blood was an absolute abomination. Yeah far more serious than throwing a baby off a roof
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The remaining two Crusaders, seeing their Lord fall and three of their comrades dead in the sand, lost their zeal. They were severely outnumbered by the surviving, enraged Bedouins, and they had just witnessed a half-naked boy cripple a warhorse with a single swing. Panic overtook piety. One of the men scrambled onto his horse, hauling his comrade up behind him. They wheeled the mount around, driving their spurs in deep, and fled back over the northern dune, disappearing in a cloud of frantic dust. You just borrowed a trope used in Jack reaper or Jason Statham movies they take on a group of 5,6 or 7 goons and the last two standing who just witnessed their partners get their ass kicked runaway. Just like these guys
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The shot heard around the world
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The shot heard around the world
3. 80's song's are tonights music choice. Since Grandpa is at the place where they are Burning Down The House I guess that makes him The Old Man Down The Road. Jack should have Beat it well pretty soon he'll be Down Under -
Never had a phone I'm sure they used electric lights otherwise I would say Levi was Amish. I wonder if the fact he didn't have a phone made some friends drift away from him.Julie didn't have a phone either. In the U.S. IF you see a pay phone you do a double take because there are so few of them.Is it like that in Australia? How about the things you find on the internet? There is going to be some culture shock for Levi.What is already under any circumstances difficult will be more so because Levi in many ways is a Fish out of water
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Ibex it took you awhile to come up with that
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Chapter 13: THE ART OF THE DEPARTURE
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: THE ART OF THE DEPARTURE
I bet the grandmother ships wouldn't think to go to Denver Megastore brilliant -
If George sent the text then he's been tipped off about the Police he now may not even go to the cabin but text didn't specifically mention the brakes so that is still a danger also . If it was Pam she also doesn't know about the brakes if it was indeed her the wording of the reply means she knows what's been going on and said nothing.Has she been a battered wife?
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He had broken his holy vow where in the holy vows did it say to slaughter an elderly defenseless woman or to throw a child off a roof? I hope Erik can convince Seb he is not a coward
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You hinted cryptically than Noah will be back with Shiloh.Things seem great with Chase so what are you going to do with that? ....Oh no not another one of your explosions
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When did SOAP ever have naked balls in it?
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Chapter 12: THE ART OF MEETING CUTE
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: THE ART OF MEETING CUTE
"I want to WATCH the mating. I have been WAITING for someone to mate for SEVEN YEARS. Surely the ship's computers or Hughie has access to porn -
Chapter 12: THE ART OF MEETING CUTE
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: THE ART OF MEETING CUTE
When Dimitri says he is feeling blue it doesn't mean he is sad -
I too am thinking something unexpected will happen during the storm and it will involve Ash and Taggert. remind them that the only buildings we've got rated to survive an EF3 are the dining room and kitchen, and The Middle. That is, so long as that rail gets replaced." Forgive my ignorance here but why aren't all buildings that way? Is it a budget thing or something else? Cara looked between them a second longer than the others Has Cara noticed something?
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@kbois is probably scratching her head thinking 'What's wrong with that"?
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Two thing I can think of the car doesn't start or George is still in a impaired state when he leaves and gets into an unrelated accident before the brakes give out
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Who would think The bow and the arrows would come in handy so fast? A sign that luck is with them. If a tense situation should happen again will Erik/Ishan instinctively remember some magic?
