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My head hurts trying to decipher all the scientific theories in this story but I enjoyed every minute of it.Thank you
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You gotta hire Vinni his dad owns the pizza place I can see that coming in handy.
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I may be a little dense here but will all this being birds and learning to fly stuff in this chapter come into play during the rescue?
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It looks like i'ts starting to come together of course something going to happen that will scare the s**h out of them first right?Pascha can only make a fair pizza?pfft.He's not as awesome as I thought
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Im glad that they are going to hire Tom.I hope he has time to become part of the crew.I wonder if Shawn and Frankie should talk to each other about their common expierience I don't know if that would be a good idea or bad idea.
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like the song says"Some people call me the space cowboy"
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Now for Nicky the good stuff is coming up.
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It will be interesting to find out how Pacha and others got to the place they are in now.That conversation Max and Charlie had about time and not being in a hurry, that would never work for me.If had forever to get something done it would never get done lol.
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Are Kevin and Glen ever going to have a day where they just take it easy?I guess not with all these kids around.But its cool
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That made think we can do so many things by going on the internet but not if there's a power outage.In 1925 only half the homes in the U.S. had power so an ancient technology like that can bring modern technology to its knees.Thats what this chapter reminded of
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Already planning for Christmas and Thanksgiving.Are we going to see that part in this story?
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Split-presence huh?Now that would be a good ability to have as long as one of me could be sleeping.Like how its going so far
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Wow it was painful to read the description of what happened to Shawn but he now has the right people supporting him.Working out naked?Be careful with those weights.
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You know the song "Feels like the first time"?Well it applies here.Love the way the boys are taking care of Frankie.Good idea for Nicky and Jamie to share a place.
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So I guess we will find out about the boy next chapter I'm curious how and why it happened.We don't know his name yet name him Kenny that's my name lol.Kidding
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Sounds like kids were involved in hurting the boy.Hope I'm wrong but I'm thinking gay bashing
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"Eenie meanie, chili-beanie, the spirits are about to speak!" Kippy took a startled breath. "Are they friendly spirits?" Max grinned. "Friendly? Just watch" I'm really surprised that no reader recognized that from Rocky&Bullwinkle. After all this time I don't think anyone is going to see this comment so I don't think I'm giving away a secret or anything but it does work here so its all good
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So glad to see Frankie adjusting.Still calm I see.Are you teasing us.
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Leaving us with a little cliffhanger huh? I'm thinking unexpected bad weather or something like that. Just a guess
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It broke my heart when Kevin told of Frankie's frighten look on his face when he misunderstood Kevin saying"ready to go home".Also know about how his mother died he's going to need a lot of help the boys will be good friends but I think they need to be counseled on how to deal with Frankie.Very nice touch the adoptions going through the same day as the wedding
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Luke got off cheap by just going to military school.God I hope things will be OK with Frankie.A person who beats a child is the absolute worst form of human life
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Wow a lot of stuff going on here.Including supernatural abilities.Don't get me wrong I love what you're doing but its starting to get difficult to keep track of all the names of the kids lol. Not to put a damper on anything but I'm hoping that Father Damian and Sister Ann don't have a problem with a same-sex couple adopting the boys because of their religious beliefs.They sound they would not but IRL it would be an issue with some in the church
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Val sure knows how to make an introduction huh?I first thought it might be another reason for Blu to go back to not liking Sage again.But Val showed up with 150,000 reasons not to react like that.Maybe Val and Brent will find their way back.
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Dr Butler is a wise women I agree with her opinion about Jack having a boyfriend(For the record Me agreeing with her is not the reason why she's a wise women) Jimmy hugging Jeff tells me he really wants to do right by Jack.When Jimmy said to Jack "Damn,Dude,you're ripped" I knew where this was going even though Tracy made it happen. The last words of the chapter Jimmy saying "I'll be careful".Why do I think that won't be the case?
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Another good chapter.I wonder If Father Damian went to Kevin's building for the reason I think he did.
