Quixo
-
Posts
568 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Quixo
-
Lovely wrap up to the story. My only disappointment is that I selfishly want to hear more about Chris, Rory, et al. Also, did I miss something, or was this the first we heard of Chris being allowed back to his original pack so that he and Rory could attend Aiden's and Ethan's wedding? I would have though I would have remembered something like that. That would truly involve a lot of healing for Chris. Again, WolfM, masterful storytelling that has held me eagerly tearing through your stories, barely able to stop for meals. Very much looking forward to Book 3.
-
And there was the piece I had been anticipating. I'd had a feeling about this since the middle of "Running With the Pack". Great way of bringing it out.
-
You had hinted in the previous story that Michael's abuse and psychological blackmail was deeper that any of the guys were willing to talk about. I had suspected that it was as deep as you revealed here. The is one more piece to this puzzle, and I'm waiting it see if I have guessed correctly. This was a huge breakthrough for Chris being able to start to face this set of demons. Hope is is on the path to his healing. The road will get rougher before it gets smoother.
-
This chapter is more full of the "feels" that I have looked forward to in past writings of yours. The way Kyle and Corey are looking out for Chris in entry 14 are the beginning of the healing he needs so much of. It's one thing to be shown friendship, another to accept it. Chris seems to be slowly getting used to that and I look forward to seeing much more of that in coming chapters. Thank you.
-
Starting book 2 i the series. Very much looking forward to this. Thank you for the continuation.
-
What kbois said! Love this latest chapter. I was a teary mess at Grant's reconciliation with his Mom. And I can't wait to meet Beth.
-
I just started reading this story a few days ago and have burned my way through the chapters, each demanding that I get to the next one. I have fallen in love with all of your characters. Thank you for such a titillating and satisfying read. The sex scenes have been really hot, but the sensuousness of Grant's and Troy's relationship from the beginning has been wonderful. You have another devoted fan in me. Thank you again.
-
I am a blubbering mess. The whole chapter is so full of so much delight and love. Your attention to every detail is lovely. The romp in the snow, Christmas Day, and the wedding are so full of love. Thank you.
-
OK. So much for the self control of reading 1 or 2 chapters a day during my lunch break. I have been tearing through this. I can't wait to get to each new chapter. Wonderful writing! The emotional engagement you are able to bring to your readers is tremendous. Each new chapter has more surprises and more delights (or horrors). Thank you for such a satisfying read. I'm definitely a loyal fan. Thank you again.
-
Well, if wasn't hooked after Chapter 1, I certainly am now. This is delightful. This is my lunchtime reading and I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter tomorrow. Thank you
-
I started these chronicles about 3 weeks ago and have just burned through all of them. The writing is wonderful. The characters are engaging. The historical detail is marvelous. I can hardly wait for a continuation. Mr. Arbour, your loyal fans await you.
- 18 comments
-
- 10
-
-
I've just come across this series recntly and I've been burning through all the stories as fast as I can. The whole saga is wonderful! I can't wait to get to the next chapter and then the next book. All that said, I've developed such a soft spot for Winkler. When he got a hug of thanks from Granger, it made me teary (as it did him.) I have been routing for Winkler and Jacobs for a while now. I got choked up when they finally opened up to each other. Now that Jacobs has revealed his secret, I hope they can find a way through this. I'm such a romantic, I am hopeful they will.
-
Yep, That took me out of the moment for a bit as well.
-
Chapter 42: Final Chapter
Quixo commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 42: Final Chapter
I have become hooked on the whole series. I have been tearing through these stories like mad! Thank you. I'm anxious to begin the next one.
