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Poor Rory? Seems to me he is his own biggest problem - I've slowly developed a liking ( of sorts) to almost every other character in this story - except him
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Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
rustygrooves commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
This author has a tendency to fill his stories with very unlikable characters - in my opinion - and frankly I can't really figure out why. But he is losing me quickly - I'm at the stage where I start scrolling through paragraph after paragraph , scanning for something positive to land on - and the landing happens less and less frequently. I'm asking myself, "why would I want to read about these people and their ridiculous drama?" And again, I cant reason why... -
I've decided I'm only reading your stories that are labeled "complete" - and yeah, this one satisfied that criteria Sooo ... Good job fella and thanks for the reads!
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That was the last chapter of this story for me - I can't waste my time on a story that has not even one likeable character...
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Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
rustygrooves commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
OK so even though I knew it was coming, I can't believe that this is where you "paused" the action - really, sir, you're killing me here - please, have a heart and toss a few breadcrumbs this way will ya? -
Just thought you should all know...
rustygrooves replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
There is a certain irony to the reality that others have such ultimate control over you - much like the way that gay youth grow up in a world that forces its control over their own lives - interesting if maddening that such injustice is continually perpetrated on those striving to end the injustice. Try not to let it dim your shine - in fact, let it fan your flame! -
Chapter 17 - Something Better, Something Real
rustygrooves commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Something Better, Something Real
It seriously took 16 chapters before Artie even got to be in the story! But what a debut! He definitely needs to meet Scotty Lynch ... just sayin' -
Chapter 10 - "Risk And Reward"
rustygrooves commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 10 - "Risk And Reward"
See, just like that ... Magic. True magic. -
It's true that most of us struggled with self confidence as teens - just ... maybe some protagonists need to be the kind that don't remind you of you. Maybe the appeal of a hero is that elusive magic that you always wished to feel in yourself.
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Chapter 6 - Close Proximity
rustygrooves commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Close Proximity
HaHa BabyXander I got Scotty and Artie paired up in my mind as well ... -
Chapter 4 - Bridging The Gap
rustygrooves commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Bridging The Gap
damaged beyond repair ...I personally am still working to prove exactly how many times a boy can be damaged beyond repair... (warm fuzzy sigh) -
Holiday Rush (Part One)
rustygrooves commented on Comicality's story chapter in Holiday Rush (Part One)
Don't be dissin' Arbor Day dude - that's my religion man...😠 -
Watching You, Watching Me
rustygrooves commented on Comicality's story chapter in Watching You, Watching Me
It would be interesting to read a companion story to this, told from Jacob's point of view - because there is a natural symbiosis between the exhibitionist and the voyeur. -
The drama is kind of endless...
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I sure do love a happy ending - fun story told well ... again!
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mmm ... pheromone ambrosia ...
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please sir ... could I have some more?
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I think I already know what's going to happen - but bring it on, because it's going to redeem TJ in the eyes of the other guys - and I like TJ for some reason - he's had to deal with a lot more than has actually been revealed.
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One of my favs - read it start to finish - I yelled a lot and scared the dog a few times, but in the end it was just ..."sunshine and candy" is the phrase I think I've heard you use... Thank you sir for all you give
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more of ...all of that shit... yeah, um... please!
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"If you were to live forever, let me live forever less one day, so that I may never have to know the pain of living without you." That's fucking brilliant.
