shifterslover

I'm very disappointed from such a sad epilogue. I had hoped until now that Lothar and Edwin would find a way to live happily together ever after. Shame on you. You lost one of your readers.

What a wonderful story! Every chapter is better than the previous one! I work in a hospital near Milan, Italy and right now I'm surrounded by patients with Covid19 related disease. This story brings a sunbeam in this sad place!

Firstable, I apologize for my poor English. I'm not used to write in this language, even if I can read it without any problem. I've really enjoyed these five chapters. There is only one little flaw: Venice, I assure you, has no sewage system. The town was built in the early Middle Age on artificial islands that were created in the low water of the lagoon by thrusting millions of wooden poles in the sand. The dirty waters coming from every single house of the town go directly into the many canals separating the islands. So, no sewage system in Venice to be used by Stefan.

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Very sad. After a whole day spent working in a Covid Hospital I needed a romantic Happy Ending.

🙂 THE AUTHOR MAY BE ILLITERATE, BUT HE'S IN ANY CASE A VERY GOOD WRITER. I TRULY APPRECIATE HIS WORKS.

IN LATIN "NEMUS, NEMORIS" IS A NEUTRAL WORD, SO THE ACCUSATIVE IS THE SAME AS THE NOMINATIVE. NOBODY WOULD EVER HAVE SAID "AD NEMOREM", EVEN IN THE MIDDLE AGE! THEY WOULD HAVE SAID "AD NEMUS"! SO, EITHER THE LADY FENICE WAS ILLITERATE, OR MENDAMERO IS NOT ATWOOD. SORRY FOR MY POOR WRITING, BUT I'M NOT FLUENT IN ENGLISH.