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  1. Carnelian
    I am growing ever more suspicious about Kris. An identical necklace, hmm…
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    UCLA VS USC

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in UCLA VS USC

    🍿 🤩 👊
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    Chapter 35

    Carnelian commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 35

    What exactly did Q gift to Zac??
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    Chapter 34

    Carnelian commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 34

    I actually agree with Kaylec just this one time; a singular chance to strike Q down. But since I love Q and Soullen, I’m glad Kaylec got slapped instead.
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    Freed

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Freed

    Jeremy will be horrified when he finds out his family is mixing it up with suburbians 😉
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    The Opera

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Opera

    Caroline just went into her mother’s house?? Hmm. Meanwhile, Cavendish 😍
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    A Good Deed

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in A Good Deed

    Chip reminds me of Tony and his rages. Will must be so frustrated dealing with closet cases in college, when he had to plow through so many in high school and his gap year.
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    Amiens

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Amiens

    Happy Birthday 😘
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    Chip

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chip

    I love Will being Will at college. I was hoping for a professor storyline, a la CAP. I fooled around with a professor back in my college days. University politics are a bloodsport ☠️
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    Strategically, I like that Will and Jeremy have bonded. Let’s see what happens when that bond gets tested. Starting with Kris. Why is he acting so dodgy lately? Hmm.
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    Hospital

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Hospital

    I don’t think Jeremy has changed at all, but his medication gives him a handle on his brain chemistry. He can make better rational choices in stressful moments. All that therapy has given him some social skills too. He isn’t stuck in brat mode with no relief.
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    Snakes Alive!

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Snakes Alive!

    Will and Jeremy doing the electric slide at Fuego? Everybody check for the sound of hoofbeats 😳 What a fun chapter, esp the snakes 🐍 🐍
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    Chapter 31

    Carnelian commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 31

    What a crazy chapter! I love all the layers of interaction. I wonder who’s going to recruit Aaron.
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    The Election

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Election

    I love that Stef laughed once Will told him about his Tesla deal ❤️ and also glad to see Brad et al kick into beatdown mode 💥
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    What a satisfying chapter - two brothers figuring out exactly what to say in two difficult situations.
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    I wonder if George has miscalculated with Caroline. She really doesn’t understand power. She may yet cause him damage, if she makes his deal with the royals go sideways. This is the first hint I’ve seen (maybe I missed others?) that Daventry may understand George’s secret side. I can’t imagine it becomes a problem, they are too connected in life, and have been through too much together. I wonder what former shipmate of George’s will pop up next? Can it be Cavendish please 😛😛
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    Travis was Raped

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Travis was Raped

    Awesome chapter; so much is about to go down, on and off campus!
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    This chapter takes place just a little after the 3 year anniversary of 9/11. It’s nice to see Brad in a good place after so much trauma.
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    Chapter 30

    Carnelian commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 30

    I dare you to wordcount “butt” for this chapter. And most of it came from Jacob’s mom! This is one crazy cliffhanger to leave your readers on, especially for a month with 31 days!
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    Terminal 5

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Terminal 5

    CAWS? Does the WS mean Will Schluter? I can’t wait for more techbro content 🤓🤓
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    Chapter 29

    Carnelian commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 29

    After all this time, it’s only Thanksgiving? And we still don’t know the twins’ names lol 😂
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    I’m prematurely sad for Jeremy that he’s had to live a life devoid of normalcy, and now that he’s getting a clue about how much love might be out there waiting for him, it probably won’t last.
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    Hook Ups

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Hook Ups

    Oh please let George explore his dominator side 😛
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    Toxic Condo

    Carnelian commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Toxic Condo

    Unmedicated Jeremy stomped into his biodad’s office and pulled a DEFCON 1 tantrum. Medicated Jeremy has yet to make his move. Travis explaining things to Jeremy is the balm that both brothers need.
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    Chapter 28

    Carnelian commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 28

    I love how brotherhood bonds are growing between the Nave and Skai. Great chapter!
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