Sherye Story Reader

I will be anxiously waiting with tears for your next chapter and please let there be a next chapter!

"No! Whatever you were about to say, FUCK that!" He said, turning my head to look at him. "We don't leave each other alone. Because that's not what friends do. And you don't ever have to worry about me getting 'bored' with you one day and leaving my best friend all alone in this world to fend for himself. I would NEVER do that to you! Ok?" I feel this way! I felt like all my friends left me, which they did, and they got bored with me and I had to fend for myself all over again. The last friend I had was 4 months ago and I was only trying to help her and she got defensive, thinking I thought she could not do things for herself. I wasn't. She still talks to me every once in awhile but will not answer her phone or texts. She will answer her door though. And then be sort of a friend to be. I guess she really doesn't want me to be her friend at all! Oh well! I may be a female but I have male friends that treat me better than she does! GO MALE FRIENDS! HEHEHEHE

If people were to look in and see who I really was on the inside, they might turn tail and run away from me. I feel this way myself all the time. I do have some bight things in my life though that keep me going. I know there will be a happy ending cause comsie is the highlight of our reading lives and he loves to hear the goodness of his stories that help all of us to get through life, whether he is older or younger than his readers.

...Save Me... That breaks my heart and I am crying so hard and having a hard time even reading this and have used so much kleenex that I am going to have to buy another box soon! 😭 I hope I can get through this story without breaking so far down in the dumps that I will need someone to take a shovel to unbury me. But I am going to just keep reading. This is the saddest story I have ever read and I have read several sad stories in my lifetime. And to think this is the memories of a few people as well as the writer that they have to endure all the heartache they all went through due to abuse. Including me! I even was abused a little, verbally and some physically, by my late husband. So, I understand how the pain can keep going and going and going.

I wish Zach would listen to Brody!

the italics and capital letters are to express how strongly a person is trying to talk to someone or to themselves. If you don't like the way Comsie writes his stories then stop reading them. I don't care how he writes his stories, whether it is with italics, commas, exclamation marks, errors in spelling, or anything, I believe that a person that writes should be just themselves and not have to worry about what others think. The writer is just trying to put their thoughts, their feelings and their vivid imaginations down to entertain your reading fetish. So if you think you can do a better job than the other writers on this site then go try and leave the other writers alone.

Oh WOW! That is so heartbreaking! I hate that you went through all that! I do know about abuse but it was from my mom not my dad and he helped me a lot. I do hear the voices too. My abuse might not be as bad as yours was but it was still abuse. My mom did not always physically abuse me but she did abuse me verbally a lot. She let my sister who was 2 years younger do whatever she wanted to and she thought I should be her model to show her what she should be. If I said a cuss word and my sister did too, I would be the one she got on to not my sister. And this was when we were both over 21 that she did this to me. The only problem was we both lived with her and I worked in her bar. We would see her doing things that she would always tell us to not do and she "THINKS" I should be a role model for my sister! I think she got it backwards! She should have been the role model to show both of us, NOT ME!

I love you all members! You are the highlight of my day to not only read these stories but to read the comments you all give. There are some sad things I read that you all put about your lives and some good things too! But in all, I want to give each and everyone a BIG HUG! I was the one person in all my family that was so insecure and felt so lonely. I even wanted to commit suicide a few times. When I started drinking beer all the time when I was off work. it got worse. I got so drunk that I even called the law to tell them I wanted to commit suicide. They had me call a suicide hotline every time I needed to talk to someone. My late husband was asked during that time if he had a gun in the house and there was a cap gun on the tale in front of him and he picked it up and shot the officer. The officer died laughing when he did that and also said that it was the only gun in the house. I think he was scared to tell him he did cause he was drinking too. Thank God I Stopped drinking after that!

I feel like Mr. Raffe has been talking to Zach's Dad! That way Zach will feel so low in life that he will never be the same again and I hope Zach will overcome the entire put down he gets from them!

I love Brody! He has a fantastic heart and a fantastic mind and the love he gives makes my heart swell with PRIDE!

I can't stop crying! BOOOOOO HOOOOOOO! I hate abusers SOOOOOOOO MUUUUCCCHHHHH!

😪😥😭💔My heart is breaking!

If you think you can do better with as many stories comsie has out that he has to write then go for it and stop being so RUDE!

No one is perfect! Even I make mistakes and I can spell! hehehe sometime even my sentences (I just had to correct something lol)have errors in them and I don't see them until it is too late!

ASSHOLE AND A HALF FATHER! NO, THAT IS TOO GOOD FOR HIM! THERE IS NOT A HIGH ENOUGH NUMBER FOR HIM AS A ASSHOLE!

Zack's father seems like a man that is so INSECURE, FEELING POWERLESS, NEED TO CONTROL, and HE THINKS IT MAKES HIM FEEL REWARDED. But people that do that are actually abusing themselves as well as others and will never be HAPPY! He NEEDS HELP! B A D L Y!

OMG! The release from Brody must have been intense and Zach finally got to taste the honey nectar! Hehehehe

The fact that the mother does not see anything may be because the father has covered his "ass" and keeps threatening Zach! He might have threatened Zach with hurting his mother if he told and Zach is only protecting her in the only way he can by letting the abuse continue. What I don't understand is the neighbor next door hasn't heard anything the way they yell at each other. And if he has, why hasn't he called the law to tell them that Zach is being abused?

I just realized that I have read this story on Nifty. I am still going to read the rest since there are probably chapters I have not read yet.

Hugs to you comsie! We love you and always will! You are the highlight here! I know that you write from experience and also have a vivid imagination that we all have seen from your stories. You will always be in our hearts forever and a day! 💓🥰😘🤗

I hope Zach's mom finds out about the abuse! II hope Zach gets away from his father soon before it is too late!

I hate Zach's father! Someone that abuses anyone should be abused 10 times more to see how it feels but the father probably was abused and that is why he abuses his son. He is taking out his anger on his son to take out his anger on his abuser. My father never abused me but my mom did at times which wasn't very often, thank goodness! The last time she ever abused me was when I wanted to move out at almost 21 and she started stomping on me and my dad had to pull her off of me. SHe was drunk.

I loved this story and the drone part was so cool! I wish I could afford to buy something like that to use.

Can't wait for the next chapter and don't forget that I am 66 years old and might not live to seen the end of this story or the others so don't let me wait too long. I know you have to work and all and you have many stories to write but "PLEASE" don't let me wait!

I hope it works to Tristan and Jesse's advantage where Artie and Scotty is concerned! Don't know why I have a bad feeling and hope I am wrong!