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  1. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 21

    The "protective posse" suggests to me there are other students outside the LGBTQI students who dislike Dan Thomas and his clique of bullies. Hopefully this holds Kenny in good stead if Dan's mother and the school board try to expel Kenny for fighting. Methinks when the shit hits the fan and Calvin reveals why he has returned that Bryan and to a lesser extent Diego and Caleb will realise what an integral part of the Padilla family Steve is. He may also be privy to information in his new job at Washington High which will help Kenny if he does have to come up again the school board. A relatively calm chapter @John Henry. @weinerdog may well be correct, the calm before the storm.
  2. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 17

    Dare I suggest an undertaker @Shadow086? "Loseress", what a great word @Shadow086. Perhaps the two "loseresses" might choose matching coffins. I think it might be a race as to who can ensure they make good use of those coffins and PERMANENTLY.
  3. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 17

    You have made a very valid point @weinerdog which I don't recall any of our fellow readers having voiced before in totality. Blake's parents are detestable; merely a sperm donor and an incubator, both more concerned with their social standing than the happiness of their child. Craig's father at least is an arsehole. He appears to be what I had previously speculated he may be, a parent living out his own dreams (which are apparently unfulfilled) through his son. He certainly would not be the first parent to do this ("stage" mothers and "sporting" fathers are a dime-a-dozen), but his comments on Craig's desire to be a dancer proved him to be a fuckwit in the first degree. And you are right, Mikhail would whip his arse. As for Craig's mother, a vacuous doormat totally without an original thought or idea which challenges the status quo. Seth's mother continues to lower the bar each time she appears in person or in hearsay. She is disappointed in her son because he is gay. My response to her, WHAT ABOUT YOUR FUCKING LOSER DAUGHTER?. Stacy had no business contacting Craig's parents to disclose what had happened, but of course being the spiteful excrement she is, she would have embellished the story no end to portray herself as the put upon victim. She so needs to be terminated. Twas I @weinerdog who speculated in comments I made on chapter 2 that Seth and Stacy's father may be gay. I don't know if our learned colleague @drsawzall has also made similar comments. The thing Stacy is in most need of is a bullet and Mommie Dearest should have to pay for said bullet. Wonderful writing again @Ronyx. In the space of one chapter you have turned Craig from a villain into a boy who is as misunderstood as Blake, albeit one who has been much better at hiding his true self. I have to express my admiration for Blake yet again for taking a fuck you approach to the haters, including his odious parents, even though it has cost him dearly in many ways. And thank you for making one of the major female characters, Aunt Marie, an honourable and decent person. Her only competition for this title may be Carol Rinehart. As for the rest of the female characters they are mixture of inconsistent, equally likeable and unlikeable (Roni and Amber), to thoroughly unlikeable (read vile) most, if not all the time (Mommie Dearest, Maggie and Mega-Ho, Stacy).
  4. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 16

    You are too kind and forgiving @weinerdog. For me there was no almost about it, although I was hoping Stacy would throw herself at the car as the boys were driving off and not survive. She no doubt will play the victim to the hilt and likely get sympathy from Mommie Dearest and the odious Maggie. Whatever the outcome for the boys, at least Stacy has been humiliated and it could not have happened to anyone more deserving. I too believe Blake will visit Craig and Seth at his "secret hideout". For all the hurt and rejection he has suffered, he has remained true to himself. I suspect this may in some way help Craig and/or Seth, and I have no doubt Blake will freely give them all the help and friendship he can. He may be their greatest ally in the shit that is likely to come their way. I also believe Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve will be there to support Seth and by default Craig and perhaps even Blake. I doubt either will have much sympathy for Stacy, particularly her behaviour in outing Craig and Seth. I too was very concerned Craig was going to kill both Seth and himself with his alcohol-infused reckless driving. Thankfully he did not, nor was he able to find any rope. A marvellous chapter @Ronyx. I have to say I was quite surprised at how Craig and Seth were finally "exposed". It appealed to my dark sense of humour, particularly the delicious irony of the skank being the one confronted with the evidence. I so hate her.
  5. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 3

    I think as he has grown older it has become less of a "problem" and only occurs now under extremely stressful circumstances. Given Donna and Calvin's irresponsible and selfish behaviour anything is possible @weinerdog.
  6. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 20

    I thought, up until now, Diego was supposedly the smart one. What the hell did he return to Holden, Wilson and Burns for. Surely one visit was enough after they conned him into paying a retainer. And to be confronted by another haughty bitchy receptionist. He should have said "you are only a shop girl bitch so drop the fucking attitude". Start listening to Steve's advice Diego, it could not be any worse than your own judgment. To be fair though, Diego is under enormous pressure delving into fields he is not au fait or comfortable with to not only ensure the safety of his own sons but to protect Kenny now too, so he is bound to make poor decisions. Do not let Calvin, the school board or bitchy receptionists win. He should also report Holden, Wilson and Burns to his new lawyer (Steve's friend) to determine if he has any recourse against them and their totally unprofessional and rude conduct. Great chapter @John Henry. I was seething and am now merely ranting about the behaviour of the skanky little millennial princess who called herself a receptionist. Stuck up little bitch needed a fucking good slap and a reminder of her station in life.
  7. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 15

    Surely one of the males in this story plays baseball. If so, Seth or any of the "cast" apart from the odious Maggie, have every reason to borrow it and teach Stacy a lesson on how to behave. Slapping Seth, continually addressing him as "fucker", reason enough for him to shut her up permanently. Roni annoyed me again in this chapter. Craig's emotional problems may have been contributed to by Seth (at Craig's "request"), but Seth is not his responsibility. If Craig was to finally admit to himself what he truly is or appears to be, he may have less angst. Unfortunately for Craig I strongly suspect his father is a "sports fan" who expects Craig to achieve what he himself probably could not (and being gay does not fit into that equation). You were correct in your assessment of Craig's sexuality @weinerdog, but I am hard pressed to believe Ty is gay. I believe Ty is one of those rare heterosexual male school friends, someone who is not at all bothered by gay male teens and only wants what is best for his very best friend. The flip side to my belief is that Blake is very observant and as you have pointed out, he thought Ty may have been Seth's boyfriend. Another exciting chapter @Ronyx. Stacy continues to appal, annoy, agitate and anger, but definitely not arouse (hardly surprising Craig could not get hard for her, even if he were straight it would have been a miracle for it to occur). As for the rest of the cast (apart from Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve), their behaviour would be best described as snafu. I am assuming Aunt Marie is Mommie Dearest's sister as both are fully aware of Stacy's appalling behaviour, but neither appears to have the intestinal fortitude to address it.
  8. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 19

    They often have the cash to cover up their "sins" too @Mancunian. If they need an abortion they will pay for one and for the discretion of the doctor. If they want a same-sex experience they will pay for one and for the discretion of the escort. When caught they also invariably have a 'come to Jesus moment', pray for forgiveness and all is forgiven by their followers. I got the impression Dan's mother has only become friends with the district superintendent. They well may have met at their local chapter of Moms For Liberty (or its equivalent) and recognised a fellow Nazi sympathiser.
  9. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 19

    Excellent chapter @John Henry. I can only but imagine a group akin to Moms For Liberty frothing at the mouth to have Kenny removed from school. The true faces of evil are very scary and very fucking ugly. Diego won't put up with any of their neo-fascist bullshit.
  10. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 14

    @drsawzall I think you have unfairly judged the hitherto unseen family cat, Sheena. She has shown remarkable restraint to date in her acceptance of her humans’ irrational and erratic behaviour. She could so easily have used Stacy’s face as her scratching post or Stacy's, Seth's or Mommie Dearest's beds, wardrobes and/or shoes as her litter tray. Perhaps @Ronyx is saving those treats for a later chapter. I believed Seth to be a lot smarter than Stacy until this chapter, but it would seem he has taken one of her stupidity pills. He is at least aware though that his reaction to Craig’s dismissal of their trysts is absurd. Stacy is too stupid to realise anything is amiss at all in her relationship with Craig. I can only hope this story concludes with her as a corpse, in a nunnery or in a same-sex relationship with Maggie. Roni disappointed again with her plea on behalf of Craig for Seth to keep quiet and accept Craig's trysts with him were all a big mistake. I wonder how she would feel if someone encouraged Cindy to state her relationship with Roni was all a big mistake. Not too bloody pleased I would think. Once again I think Seth should have told her to go fuck herself. I don' t think he should broadcast he has had sex with Craig (I would be too ashamed to admit I had sex with such a loser), but he should not deny, at least to himself, that it was all a big mistake, poor judgment perhaps, but hey he was horny and opportunities presented themselves. Craig will not have to worry about Stacy castrating him as he has no balls to remove. If his rocket fails to launch on a second occasion he may find Stacy less agreeable to keeping quiet. He could always attempt to quell any suspicion by laying the blame at Stacy’s feet, she is after all a thoroughly unlikeable person. Blake is perhaps the most principled and sensible of all the main characters @weinerdog. He is certainly the most honest to and about himself. I had high hopes for Aunt Marie, but alas she let me down again in this chapter. I suppose I am being unrealistic in thinking an aunt would chastise a niece or nephew for bad behaviour, but she could at least have taken to Stacy with a meat cleaver. A riotous chapter again @Ronyx. I feel like Sheena, an observer gobsmacked, but guiltily entertained by the animals in the circus. Although I despise the use of animals in a circus, those in this circus garner no sympathy from me.
  11. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 18

    I had a great chuckle at the spelling mistake "food" instead of "good" Chris.
  12. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 18

    The biggest development in this chapter, which I think has been building for a while, was Bryan's declaration of love for Steve. He has seemingly shed most, if not all, his opposition to Steve, and has recognised that Steve is not only good for Diego, but also for Caleb and himself. After reading the confrontation between Diego and Calvin I have had many different speculations as to the reason Calvin wants to see his boys. All speculations relate to financial gain. I am wondering if he is stupid and/or desperate enough to try and kidnap them to force Diego to pay a ransom for them. Bryan's continuing display of emotion may ultimately be therapeutic. Kenny is certainly assisting in this respect. He, Kenny, is not ashamed to display his emotions, even if he is teased by other students for doing so. @John Henry the revelation as to Calvin's motive must surely be getting closer as he appears to be becoming more brazen or is it desperate.
  13. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 13

    From the pen of a slightly younger cranky old bastard (I was born in 1963 so my truly formative years were the 1970's), I have to agree with much, if not all of what you opine @drsawzall. I think the ethos of many developed nations is similar to that of the USA, although perhaps not as extreme. I may be wrong, but I think the obsession with "celebrity culture" is pervasive world-wide, but perhaps at it's most repugnant in your homeland. For me personally, the "gun culture" and extreme religious conservatism of many of your fellow Americans is something I cannot understand or tolerate at all. I could lament for 10's of thousands of words about the decline of civility, civic pride and compassion, the appalling treatment of animals and the destruction of the environment, but it mostly seems to fall on deaf ears. It is "communities" like GA which afford me admiration for some of my fellow species, something which declines with each passing year. I think one of your fellow countrymen has mentioned the Texas energy abomination in comments before which I have read, and if I remember who it was correctly, he is a proud Republican, but even he was appalled. I am well aware that not all Texans are the same, but as a non-American I have to say Texas, Georgia (except for Atlanta), Florida (particularly in more recent times) and smaller states such as Kansas and Alabama, are synonymous with bigotry, stupidity, cruelty, religious zealotry and right-wing solidarity.
  14. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 13

    Hopefully Aunt Marie's behaviour was typical in this chapter because she is the first reasonable, pleasant and sane XX chromosome human to appear in this story, although she too indulged Stacy's bad behaviour by allowing her to disappear immediately she had consumed her dinner so she did not have to help with the clean up. Speaking of Satan I, her treatment of Seth worsens with each passing chapter. I am not offended by any expletives and use them frequently myself, but the vitriol with which she uses them when demeaning or demanding something of Seth infuriates me. She is trash through and through and should be treated accordingly. Uncle Steve summed her up well; he clearly recognises her for what she is. Roni, what a disappointment she was in this chapter. Her anger with Seth and the manner in which she spoke to him warranted a severe tongue-lashing at least. Who the fuck does she think she is. Her blaming Seth for Craig's current unhappiness pissed me off. Firstly it is none of her damn business and secondly, the only "blame" which could be levelled at Seth for Craig's predicament is that he did not say no to Craig when he instigated all their sexual encounters. If I had been in Seth's shoes I would have told her to go fuck herself. The only consistently likeable humans in Seth's orbit are Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve (although they have only made one brief appearance to date), Ty and Blake. The latter has many problems certainly, but he is at heart a kind person, or at least he appears to be. As for the rest of the cast, kerosene and a lit match would improve them all. I am loving this story @Ronyx. I don't recall ever reading a story where I am having so much fun hating so many of the main characters. Ghastly, horrible people abound. It must be what attending a Republican convention or a NRA meeting would be like.
  15. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 12

    Some things NEVER change. Stacy and Maggie are still the daughters of Satan and Stacy's mother still not only indulges her appalling behaviour, but rewards it. I have changed my mind @Ronyx, Stacy needs a visit from Carrie and Freddy Krueger. Craig is still a confused, entitled and now seemingly dangerous arsehole. For all the tragedy that has permeated Blake's life he retains a quick wit and dark sense of humour at times. “There’s not much to say,” he began. “I’m gay.” He paused and waited for a reaction from Roni, but she didn’t say anything. Instead, she reached down and gripped his hand. Tears welled up in his eyes, and I thought he was going to cry. “I came out to my parents when I was thirteen. They’ve hated me ever since. Mom keeps telling me that I am the child of the Devil.” Tears started flowing when he said, “She hit me once when I told her she shouldn’t have fucked him.” What a vile woman. Perhaps Carrie and Freddy can pay her a visit too. I do hope you have some truly dastardly "rewards" planned as justice for Stacy, Maggie and Blake's parents in particular @Ronyx.
  16. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 17

    Bryan has acted foolishly by not disclosing the truth about Calvin earlier to Diego, but one has to admire his maturity in "copping" his punishment. He could so easily have reacted in a surly and hostile manner, but he recognised and accepted Diego's statement that he would be lost if he were to lose either Bryan or Caleb, ant that for this reason he was being punished. Kudos to Bryan for admitting he was in the wrong.
  17. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 30

    I am nothing if not predictable @Andre Delport, but I was particularly pleased my favourite member of the Devlin-Major family, Rascal, had a larger role to play in this chapter than he has for some time. And as usual, he delighted all with his playfulness. As noted by several of my fellow readers, the gastronomical delights were to the fore again. Even the non-vegetarian seafood dishes had my mouth watering; not as much of course as the delicious aubergine, tomatoes, avocados and peppers which are amongst my favourite vegetables. And the wines sounded most appealing too. To describe food with such passion and exquisite beauty I imagine you must be a gourmand yourself.
  18. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 16

    It is easy for me to say sitting in my "ivory tower" @John Henry, but I am starting to lose patience with Bryan and his continual bad decision making. He is clearly not a stupid teenager, but he is certainly doing a damn good job of behaving like one. I am sure you will have a rational explanation as to why he has still not disclosed Calvin's stalking behaviour to Diego, but it is certainly puzzling me. Kenny's summation of the situation was brilliant “so you, somehow, expect the man, who left you with a near complete stranger to chase pussy across the country, to find it in his heart to honor the wishes of a 14-year-old he has no real connection to, outside of DNA?”. And, I think Kenny had every right to be pissed off with Bryan on this occasion. "I promise you haven't been told the truth about me or what happened.” Calvin's lies and deceit appear never ending. He should seriously consider running as a Republican candidate in an election or creating his own mega-church.
  19. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 11

    I have not until this chapter had any issue with Seth's behaviour. I have had no issue with him having sex with Craig as I think he is well aware that Craig is only using him, although he does at times appear to believe he means more to Craig than just a convenient fuck. I also have no issue with him fucking his sister's alleged boyfriend as she deserves nothing but Seth's contempt. In this chapter though he finally went too far. He was unnecessarily rude to Blake and for that I have given him a virtual slap. Speaking of the little skank Stacy; I did not think I could loathe her anymore than I already did, but she proved me wrong once again in this chapter with her behaviour. And once again Mommie Dearest enabled her selfish, brattish, childish behaviour. I felt guilty @Ronyx, albeit very briefly, for wishing she be subjected to vile unspeakable treatment, treatment that even Carrie would have trouble inflicting. I just hope that when the chaos in Seth's life reaches its peak that Stacy is the chief sufferer in any fallout, and if it is not too much to ask, I want Maggie to suffer greatly too. It appears as if you have been correct all along @weinerdog. Craig's enjoyment of sex with Seth suggests that his continual denial "I'm not gay" is on increasingly shaky ground, particularly when he seems to have little interest in females, although in the case of his alleged "girlfriend" that is perfectly understandable.
  20. Simon very much was @raven1. As commented by @Mancunian "One important aspect that it clearly shows, is that mistreatment in childhood can, and often does, have severe lasting effects on people. This can lead someone to behave in a way that could have possibly been prevented by better parenting and/or earlier intervention."
  21. I agree @chris191070. I am not usually at all sympathetic towards the perpetrators of such heinous crimes, but in this case I felt a surprising degree of sympathy for Simon. I have to wonder if it was Simon who enjoyed hunting with his grandfather or if it was Max who did so. The viciousness of the attacks on Bobby and Ricki was the sign of a very disturbed mind. Although the story was primarily serious and disturbing, I did find humour in the name of the first suspect. The bullshit and hatred which he spewed forth when questioned was reminiscent of the irrational diatribe of an infamous American political figure with whom he shares one of his names.
  22. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 15

    What an insufferable, nasty, uptight little bitch Lauren (aka Barbie) was; a member of 'Moms for Liberty' in the making. Ms Justice would be very proud of her arrogance and bigotry. And as for Thomas Walker, he would be best treated to a journey like the one described in @drsawzall's joke (I had never heard this before, and as someone who works with lawyer's it gave me a great laugh). I think Diego would be well served to talk to Steve's lawyer friend. Diego's revelations of Calvin's prior behaviour whilst shocking surprised me somewhat as I thought it would be even worse. I found the most telling was the admission by his mother that he had been an habitual liar since childhood. @John Henry another most enjoyable chapter. I am beginning to think Steve is going to play a major part in any protection or rescue of Bryan and/or Caleb from whatever dastardly plan Calvin has in mind.
  23. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 14

    I am a teen of the 70's too @JohnnyC, having grown up in rural Australia. My teenage years were filled with the usual angst, but I certainly did not have to worry about fellow students coming to school armed with weapon(s), ridiculous social media, climate change and global pandemics. I also had wonderful music to accompany me through my teenage years.
  24. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 10

    Love those predictions @weinerdog. In reading them I have come to the conclusion the "chaos" in Seth's life will reach its peak at the school dance and the chaos will not just be restricted to his own life. I think all the cast are likely to experience some degree of chaos directly before, during or after the school dance. Now if only I could persuade @Ronyx to invite Carrie or maybe the spawn of Carrie to the school dance. She would make quick work of Stacy, Maggie and Craig. I thought for a fleeting moment Mommie Dearest was going to FINALLY treat Stacy like the spoilt brat she is, but no she let her get away with murder again. Mommie Dearest needs to obtain a large shillelagh or switch and when Stacy behaves like a spoilt 2-5 year old, deliver a good whack across the bag of the legs which may stop her from being such a bitch. As for the way she speaks to Seth, it is about time he slapped her in the face, consequences be damned. She has displayed no redeeming features at all to date so it is hard to imagine she has any. Seth needs to be very careful with Blake not to lead him on or behave inconsistently with him. Blake is very fragile and seems drawn to Seth for comfort, which Seth is providing to a certain degree. I also suspect Blake is far more attracted to Seth than what Seth realises. Another entertaining chapter @Ronyx. Momentum is building for chaos beyond our imagination. I look forward to it.
  25. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 14

    I'm still not Chris and I could be the grandfather of a teenager.
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