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In it for the long haul
Summerabbacat commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in In it for the long haul
Wow! What a spectacular chapter. A post-mortem of their weekend at Southwold led to a serious discussion of their desire and intent for their relationship between Gray and Matt. They both were pleased to learn their views align, and Matt’s insecurities and uncertainties were aired and for the most part placated. They are on solid ground in their relationship, progressing at a leisurely pace each is comfortable with. Vince’s BIG reveal to Dawn was quite the shock, but what surprised even more so was Vince’s enthusiastic acceptance. Peter holds the key to the private Vince, the part of him which would lay dormant and unnourished if not for Peter. A tremendously moving chapter @Robert Hugill, particularly the heartfelt discussion between Gray and Matt. The tears flowed freely, tears of joy. -
Neal, the modern day Charlie, but who are/were his Angels, surely not Razi, maybe Paul? Where are Farrah, Jaclyn and Kate when needed? Jaclyn recently celebrated her 80th birthday and she still looks good. The frost in the relationship between Killian and Micah thawed significantly in this chapter, with both making an effort to reach an understanding. This chapter, the calm before the storm @Josh Aterovis. And happy birthday to you. And whilst I like Stevie Wonder's song of the same name, it's this Happy Birthday which I just adore.
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Helen is an interesting woman. Her concern for Jimmy appears to be motivated by more than just wanting to keep him safe as he is useful, a young rent boy, presumably, who is going to help secure the arrest of a pimp, a pimp with a passion for roughing up his young boys. I believe Helen is a woman not to be messed with, but one who has a big heart. And what of Jimmy. I, like @centexhairysub, sense Jimmy is going to play a bigger role in this story. His bravado hides an unhappy teen, one who has likely had a hard life in recent years. I hope we get to learn more of his history. Joe Benevetti is a relic, a homophobe who thinks he is funny. If Rick shows any sign of weakness, of taking offence to Joe's offensive remarks, the petty man he so obviously is, will continue to taunt Rick with his heteronormative language. "All we picked up was a street kid and took him to a house full of dykes,’ I countered, with a chuckle. ‘Just so long as you didn’t pick up anything from the street kid,’ Adam said." It may have been an off-the-cuff remark, but the text in bold rankled me. Being the "precious princess" I am at times, I took an instant dislike to Adam because of this remark. He may not have meant anything by it, may have used it as humour, but it smacked of moral judgment and a sense of superiority brought on by wealth. Once again @Mark Ponyboy Peters your characters are "leaping off the page", real people, not cardboard cutouts, even if they are not all likeable. Real people with real problems.
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Chapter 4 - Pressure
Summerabbacat commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Pressure
Me too, very uneasy. Ethan has not done anything to warrant my mistrust, but it does not matter, I don't trust him. He is in a position of power, one which he could use to manipulate Kris. It won't surprise me if Dean's "date" with Leah is a flop, but one which leads to a friendship between the two, something which I suspect he would benefit greatly from. His generosity to Kris was unexpected and although very "noble", was quite stupid. He may have placed himself in a perilous position as if Terry the turd finds out, Dean may find himself unemployed. -
"I stared at the statues as I gasped involuntarily. Transfixed by their beauty, the radical sensuality they projected, and the obvious love between them, I was riveted to the floor. They represented a sort of timeless masculine love that I’d never seen before. My heart ached to feel for a man what they so clearly felt for each other. Oh, to love and be loved like that." These thoughts appear more consistent with the less experienced Calvin, the one who was interested in dating and getting to know Jordan. He is perhaps still undecided about what he really wants, is it a relationship with Brady, one which is not constrained by monogamy, or is it a relationship with someone where it is constrained by monogamy. In the meantime he is enjoying himself with a smorgasbord of admirers. The thoughts above brought to mind a song (of course) from an artist not unknown in the USA, but one who is nowhere near as popular there as in her homeland in the UK or here in Australia. The very gifted singer-songwriter Kate Bush, whom I have revered since her very first hit in 1978. This song, taken from her debut album, was a minor hit, one which I have always loved.
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I think it is high time we had another murder @Josh Aterovis. I nominate Razi as the next victim. He did not even appear in this chapter, and yet he still stirred up ill will by the sheer mention of his name. In revisiting his "generosity" towards Tad, I felt my dislike for him becoming stronger. Judy has seemed a little distracted of late. Either the worry of what Jake is up to is taking its toll on her, or perhaps she knows more about Killian's gift than she is disclosing, and the additional information is disconcerting to say the least. Maybe a little more Novak nookie might help to calm her.
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No good. Mischief and mayhem. Perhaps he is thinking of taking a "walk on the wild side", or has been gossiping with Declan and is buttering Oliver up with the intention of persuading him to have a little fun.
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Jason is following the sage advice often given by GP's the world over, and possibly by GA's resident @drsawzall. You have got to keep your fluids up to maintain a healthy body. Jason "drank" a substantial amount of fluids in this chapter, ensuring his digestive system was well lubricated from the end rather than the beginning. Colonic irrigation with a high pressure washer rather than a gentle slow flow.
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Nature Reserve – 24 December
Summerabbacat commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Nature Reserve – 24 December
Given the "action" has shifted from England to Ireland, perhaps I should be referring the world the characters inhabit as the O'Hugillverse rather than the Hugillverse @Robert Hugill. I have never heard of the given name Cathal or of plum bread before @Robert Hugill. Once again you are educating this philistine from the Antipodes. You will never persuade me to enjoy classical music or bleak cold weather though. Russ has certainly surprised with the manner in which he has disclosed very personal information, not only to his family, but to complete strangers. Perhaps the disclosure to Jamie is not so surprising though given Jamie is gay and a stranger. Russ' fondness for Toby appears growing. A most unusual but delightful friendship to witness. Another winner with this one @Robert Hugill. -
Or perhaps a "murder ballad" courtesy of Nick Cave & The Bad Seeds with guest vocals by Kylie @Mark Ponyboy Peters.
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Chapter 8: The day after!
Summerabbacat commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The day after!
I adore cats as may be guessed from my profile name @J J, so rather than saying 'God help us' or 'God only knows' I substitute Felix for God. It's shorter than saying Sylvester help us. -
Will there be any of this @Mark Ponyboy Peters? Check out SBE's fabulous emerald green glitter eye shadow. Agnetha's turquoise eye shadow, which was caked on in the video for The Winner Takes It All, pales in comparison.
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Chapter 8: The day after!
Summerabbacat commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The day after!
A snivelling weasel, although he may have some humility unlike Cobwebs who is just a complete c u next Tuesday. As for her son Adrian, a junior c u next Tuesday. I am unsure as to whether he is acting alone or under duress/orders from Cobwebs. I suspect he may be acting alone, he may dislike Cobwebs as much as everyone else, even though they share more than just DNA. Felix help us if their relationship has ever been of the incestuous kind, which would not surprise. -
Methinks yes @drsawzall. Methinks he is the killer, so yes again @drsawzall.
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A three-way? A Daddy and two twinks?
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Chapter 8: The day after!
Summerabbacat commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The day after!
Adrian is trash, just like his mother. And didn't Cobwebs get a serve from everyone, except River, at the breakfast table. And no surprises she is in cahoots with Harry, the snivelling weasel. And she has the audacity to refer to River as trash, and denigrate whores who work hard for their money. Hopefully all will bear witness to her fall, and as she falls she will take down Harry and her odious offspring with her. Her complete annihilation will be a joy to observe, at least for this reader @vanalas. Cobwebs remark to Harry “Then it has to,” she said finally, her voice so cold it made him shiver. “Because if it doesn’t… we’ll be bankrupt, and you already know what I’m capable of when I have nothing left to lose.” rang alarm bells for me. I wonder if she was slowly poisoning Elena after Zayn was born, or giving her some kind of drug so she was unable to care for Zayn for a while, thus "necessitating" noble caring Cobwebs having to step in and take care of him, thereby making Leonardo and Elena beholden to her. Her son appears to be quite capable of administering a drug to someone to take advantage of them, maybe he learned this from the best, Mommie Dearest, Cobwebs. "The breakfast continued, but under the laughter and chatter, there was still a lingering heaviness—like a storm that had passed but left the scent of rain behind." It was not the scent of rain left behind, it was the stench of dead mullet, the scent of Cobwebs, her toxicity leaking through all her pores. Putrefying botox. -
If I was being a real smartarse @CincyKris and I knew her reasonably well I might refer to her as Paul, Linda or Wings because of the song Helen Wheels by Paul McCartney & Wings. I suspect she may be irreverent, mouthy and a shit-stirrer, but also loyal, hard-working and highly principled. I don't think she will take any shit from her male colleagues if they get all hetero-panicky over Rick. I think she will be no pushover, hard-arsed, but a genuine "softie" for those less fortunate than she if they have fallen on hard times. Then again she might be a total bitch, a real c u next Tuesday.
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Well done lad. We'll make a shirt-lifting Sydney sissy out of you yet, particularly given you have a "cousin" named Primrose. LOL.
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I assume @Paladin is referring to the "man from Egypt", the politician with strong "Christian" convictions. The one who held vigils on the eve or day of Mardi Gras praying for rain to force the cancellation of the parade and after party. The one who had to watch Tinto Brass' Caligula more than once to brand it "filth". Being the well behaved and reserved rural lad you are you may not be as familiar with the "man from Egypt" as we city dwelling "poofters". In the mid to late 1990's I lived in Darlinghurst not far from "the wall" and had the misfortune of seeing the "man from Egypt" on several occasions when he was pontificating on my eternal damnation. But then you know what happens if one assumes @Mark Ponyboy Peters, don't you?
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Brilliant speculation @weinerdog. I believe you may well be onto something. Mardi Gras Murders is more sensational, guaranteed to grab the public's attention, something to inflame the passions of the pro- and anti-gay rights lobbies. Something to make currency from.
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I reckon Martin was probably Rick's high school boyfriend @Paladin. Depending on when the story is set, there may have been little in the way of investigation of the crime if it was known Martin was gay. I don't know what Newcastle is like now, but it was not particularly enlightened in years gone by, but then very few places, including Sydney, were. Just the one @Paladin? Don't limit yourself, dream big. If the one you are thinking of is the one I suspect you may be thinking of, I thought he was already dead. I made the comment once on GA he was dead, it may have even been on one of your stories, only to have my illusion shattered when told he was still alive, it may have even been you who corrected me. He was 91 last month and is apparently still healthy. I have read his children were not happy when he married his second wife after the death of their mother. The second wife is 24 years his junior.
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Chapter 3 - Connection
Summerabbacat commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Connection
Maybe it is a reflection of my age and my disillusionment with many of our fellow species, but I don't place any faith in Ethan having any influence over the selection process for the job Kris is interested in. Ethan may put a good word in for him, but I think Kris is being far too optimistic in thinking this will have any effect on the decision makers. Dean certainly displayed a great deal of kindness in offering to drive Kris home after having tested his car for free to determine what caused it to fail. Let's hope Terry the turd does not find out otherwise Dean may be out of a job, or at least have his pay docked. Hopefully Terry will get flattened by a semi-trailer in a future chapter. -
Recovery and More Summertime “Fun”
Summerabbacat commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Recovery and More Summertime “Fun”
Memory like a sieve @Lee Wilson. -
I thought of that too @drsawzall and revisited chapter 8 in which Killian examined Jake's bedroom. There did not appear to be anything KIllian could not open, including the carved wooden box which contained nothing particularly interesting. Unless Killian missed something amongst the proliferation of dildos, Fleshlights and other sex toys that he came across, it appears unlikely Jake has something worth killing for, apart from the photograph.
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Killian needs to see a photograph of Paul and soon. I still think the photograph in Jake's possession may be the key to solving the murder, or may give an indication as to what the key he found in the armoire unlocks.
