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Oh I’m pretty sure you’re just a sucker for his big junk, @Summerabbacat🤗 Can’t blame ya, but he did get you fooled once before.

Welcome back! Thanks for sticking with the story!🙌

You are correct, it is the US territory in the Pacific. It was attacked in WW2 and used heavily for logistics during Vietnam war, but you’re right, historically Vietnamese never attacked it! I will fix it, that was a great catch! I think there are more elaborate ways to cause him pain 🤗

I’m pretty sure there is a very direct and straightforward way which Dylan can easily use to have her end up in the above mentioned accessory, @Summerabbacat. Whether or not he will ‘pull the trigger’ remains to be seen.

Oh sweet baby Jesus you did it again! I can’t stop coughing still as I type, I’m wiping tears, wtf is this! You are correct though, the warning should’ve come with a scent of rotten fish, but that would’ve spoiled the surprise. Oh, I’m sure he only started. Let’s say, it’ll be a good first win on the battleground. The was is far from being over.

OMG this is some next-level stuff (please don’t be giving me ideas like these coz ya might regret it). Also, @Summerabbacat, a fair warning - the infamous snatch you are so terrified of, might make an appearance you are not ready for. I will not divulge any more 🤐 I still stand by my words though, I think the events of the next chapter will be disgusting, but ultimately, very delicious. Oh, he’s probably drooling over Liam’s big fat cock. Honestly, I see no other explanation 🤗 @Summerabbacat one of these days your comment will send me to the ER. I laughed so hard I choked on my sandwich. Can’t wait for your reaction to the next few chapters

There’s always a bit more. There’s always darkness in “good” characters and light in “bad” ones Oh you better not mention this to him lol

I cannot agree more! Dylan is lucky to be alive and sane. Now it remains to see if Liam will be so lucky, or will Dylan run him to the ground? I feel like there’s a perfect 50/50 split as to where this could go. Did someone just hack into my laptop?

I will hold you to that statement, good sir 😉 I think Emma is simply trying to do the selfish mom-thing and advocate for her son. Surely she’s stepping out of line, but as many of our loved ones, she’s flawed and ain’t perfect. I’ll forgive her the weakness of not standing up to the beating from her husband, but I won’t forgive her staying silent and underperforming as a mother, when it came to Liam’s doings a few years back. That, was arguably the time for her to advocate for her son and beat some fuken sense into him with a scalding hot iron. Prior to her demise, Jessica has to suffer a bit, don’t you think? Once again, can’t wait for you to get to chapter 16, @Summerabbacat.

Dylan’s biggest problem, I think, was identified by himself in this very chapter. He hates Liam too much. When there’s hate, there’s an opening for lust, passion, mistakes, crimes, so many delicious ways to fuck up… If he was indifferent to him, it would’ve felt much better - hate is too passionate of an emotion. Also, I would argue that the biggest temptation for Dylan is trying to restrain himself in ways he could truly enact his revenge on Liam, especially now that he now knows how much Liam loves him. Selfishly, sometimes I wonder just how badly Dylan could actually hurt him, had he been just a bit more evil…

Should he have gone to Jessica Elizabeth Juanita Vasquez De Costa instead?🤨 Oh yes, he will be lucky to get out of this mess with his sanity… and alive Indeed-indeed!

Thank you for your sharp eye! Yes, Gerald lost his oldest son in 1990’s (his oldest son was Hank’s father), so Hank is his grandson, and Liam is his great-grandson. I fixed it 🙏🏻Of note, I can assure you that Gerald died extremely happy, had a very peaceful death, at a venerable age, surrounded by riches and respect, without a single ounce regret in his rotten heart… regardless of whether or not Shanice assisted him in his departure. Rich and powerful of this world face consequences extremely rarely, and I want my story to reflect this sad reality. Hmm, I’ve noticed that people like the idea that Dylan’s ‘mother in law’ can be very nicely pitched against Jessica. A very interesting thought indeed!

De Costa. Jessica Elizabeth Juanita Vasquez De Costa, to be exact. “Who told you?” I asked, licking chocolate pudding off the back of the plastic spoon. “Swathi Patel. Apparently they were assigned to an assay on ‘environmental risks of wearing slutty mini-skirts’ together last year.” Elle said with an unperturbed look on her face, adjusting her glasses. “Is that even a real name?” Pete asked, cocking his head suspiciously. “Two middle names, two last names.” I conclud

😂😂😂😂😂 I think Emma was honest, but I might be wrong. They married rather young, and Hank’s ‘ascension’ happened much earlier than he expected given unexpected death of his father. It’s true - we don’t know Hank’s motivations and thoughts, we haven’t really met him, but he did help Helen get rid of her abusive husband - I would imagine he knew the core of the issue was that Dylan’s father was homophobic, so I presume he is very pleasant and supportive of gays. He never objected to friendship between Dylan and his son, as far as we know. Otherwise, had he been a bigot I don’t think Emma would’ve married him? In truth, homophobia of majority of the characters in this story is rather fucked up. It’s very flawed and hypocritical - take Jess, for example. I think she throws the f-word as a tool to exert power, humiliation and control over Dylan, not much out of spite for gays. I think she might have a few gay ‘besties’, in fact - I won’t be surprised given Liam’s assessment on the quality of the ‘rainbow crowd’ in Montgomery high. ‘Rich gays’ might be just as fucked up as the rest of the rich and powerful. 😦 🫢 🤔

This comment needs to be framed, hung on the wall in the kitchen and cherished until the end of time.

Oh this has cracked me up so much, I love it 😂😂😂 Truly a masterpiece of a review on the character, @Summerabbacat Jessica is one evil-ass bitch, that’s out of questions. They never get what they fully deserve, of course, but despite that, I have a strong suspicion that you’ll enjoy chapter 16 immensely 🤗 Cheers!

Oh I’m sure this will pose a huge problem for Dylan, if he ever dares to climb that mountain. 😂

🥹☺️ I appreciate your kind words! Truth be told, I’m not a writer by any stretch of imagination (I’m pretty sure everyone can easily tell haha), and this is very obviously the first story I am trying to give birth to. I feel like if I there is a gift (a talent? a consequence of countless hours of movies/books/TV shows consumed?) in me, it lies primarily in storytelling - that I’ve been good at since I was a kid. Even though writing is a polar opposite of my actual field of work/study, I realize how important it is to spend good time and make sure that whatever comes out in the end wouldn’t ruin the plot of the story. This is how low my bar is set at - I try to wtite it well enough for it not to distract the reader from the events taking place. Hence, I try to go over each chapter at least 4–5 times (with frequent iterations) before I actually release it. I feel like if I had been more experienced, there would’ve been more beautifully written “ water” in the body of the text, and it wouldn’t feel so dense (which I think would’ve been great).

You might stumble across her snatch in one of the later chapters @Summerabbacat, and rather intimately, if I dare to say so myself. Our dear boy, as a future doctor, is smart enough to know how dangerous a ruptured rectum could be. Ahahahahaha ABBA is the GOAT, as kids say nowadays. Oh, my dear friend… Please don’t feel ashamed. Guilty pleasures tend to be the sweetest, even if they leave us with a bitter aftertaste in the end.

In terms of Jake, as prosthetic a prediction, as I’d expect from you, @Summerabbacat. Guns have always scared and intrigued me in stories, because once they’re mentioned, you can rest assured there will come a time someone will be shot. Oh yes, this story is as far from werewolves, pheromones and vampires as it can be. We are trying to stay grounded in heavy realism🤞🏻🤗. I would, however, blame Dylan in sometimes, harboring overly expressive thoughts when it comes to judging Liam and his actions. Who knows, this may have been this author’s genius plot twist all along (or not so genius if everyone caught up to it). I’m glad you enjoyed it! I rarely come across interesting lines of narration, but I find that they elevate the story when they find response with my readers. Thank you for your amazing review, once again!

Oh, those two are a walking mess. I’m thinking Liam probably knows what he wants at this point, but Dylan…

😂🤣🤣 Love the start! It felt like there was some history between Todd and Barrett in the past, huh. Let’s see what happens🤞🏻 PS: Sabrina is a savage

Hmmm, maybe? I’d let you guys decide 🤗 I feel like it’s purposefully vague at this point. Dylan has no avenues of information to know for sure. Emma only knew “so much” and gave him her impressions of what was happening. Things will be clarified in later chapters, I hope (if this author won’t croak before then). If Dylan’s sources were more ‘hands on’, it might’ve helped.

The last time Helen caught me jerking off, I was at the tender age of 12. For the entire next year, this mortifying event served as the single most humiliating and traumatizing memory of my childhood life. Even to this day, nightmarish flashbacks of her disembodied head popping into my room out of the darkness of the doorway in the middle of the night haunted me randomly wherever I went. Six years later, Helen Moore decided to replenish my piggy bank of traumatic memories by walking in my

Oh, the question for the ages… Somehow this felt to me as the most believable part of the whole scenario. If it happened in real life, smartphones would’ve been pulled before any help offered. What a Freudian and oddly prothetic sentence😂😂😂 Thank you, dear @Summerabbacat! As always, it was my pleasure to get a glimpse into your thoughts. 😍