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  1. PWS
    What a great story!
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  2. PWS
    Thank you for your work on this story, ChromedOutCortex. I really enjoyed it (though the Chapters starting with Jaime’s death were hard).
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    Encrypted

    PWS reviewed Jeff Burton's story in Fiction

    This was a such a wonderful story! The plot was gripping. But the characters were so interesting and well drawn—Josh, Adam, James, Claire, Rodney—that I think I would have loved the story even without the adventure and intrigue. I came to really love these characters and would have been happy had the story simply explored these relationships and Josh’s new life. The fact that we got both amazing characters and a suspenseful, action packed plot is an incredible testament to the author’s skill.
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    Chapter 31

    PWS commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 31

    This is the best chapter yet. And that’s saying a lot! I love this story and will miss it so much when it ends
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    Great Start!
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    Chapter 52: Rescue

    PWS commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 52: Rescue

    I worry Shawn has said too much to his friends. But it’s great to see how protective they are of him.
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    The different abilities did not come off as gimmicky. And I had no problem with the level of violence (which fit the story you are telling).
  8. PWS
    This chapter was so much fun to read!
  9. PWS
    This chapter had me in tears. An amazingly well written and moving chapter!
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    Chapter 26

    PWS commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 26

    I really liked the Gavin that showed up in this chapter!
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    Wow! What an incredible and incredibly sad chapter!
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    This chapter is beautifully written, but what a sad, sad chapter. I’m devastated by how this beautiful relationship came to an end. But we’ve known from the first chapter that tragedy would eventually strike.
  13. PWS
    I laughed so much as I was reading this chapter! I really love Adam, Jaime, and Jay!
  14. PWS
    I really love this story. Andrew is a great character, and it’s wonderful to see his growing dedication to (and love for) Connor. Any dom would be lucky to have such a conscientious and loving sub. But what I love most about the story is the remarkable—and believable—evolution of Connor, who moves from being Andrew’s selfish blackmailer to his appreciative and caring dom (though I am sure Connor would not consider himself a dom).
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    Chapter 11

    PWS commented on and9993's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I love this story and especially the evolution of Connor from selfish blackmailer to caring dom (and friend)! I look forward to more of Andrew, Connor, and Zack in Making of a Slave.
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    Chapter 19

    PWS commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 19

    It is really interesting that Trace and Celia are weekly churchgoers and that Joel’s parents go to church only three times a year. I tend to think that it makes perfect sense that weekly churchgoers goers would be more compassionate but the reverse is all too often true.
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    Chapter 10

    PWS commented on and9993's story chapter in Chapter 10

    I love the way this Chapter and Making of a Slave are intertwined! Connor is a remarkably good friend to Andrew. They are both lucky to have the other in their lives.
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    Chapter 18

    PWS commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 18

    Yay! The last paragraph made me so happy. I’m so rooting for Davin and Joel!
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    Chapter 8

    PWS commented on and9993's story chapter in Chapter 8

    It’s almost stunning to see how devoted Andrew is to Connor—how intensely focused Andrew is on Connor’s comfort, happiness, and wellbeing. I hope Connor recognizes how incredibly lucky he is to have such a devoted sub.
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    Another beautiful chapter!
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    Chapter 9 - TGIF

    PWS commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - TGIF

    Wow! Just Wow! All the characters, Adam, Jaime, Jay, even Cindy and Adam’s mom are so beautifully drawn.
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    Chapter 7

    PWS commented on and9993's story chapter in Chapter 7

    I love seeing how devoted Andrew is to Connor! Connor is a very lucky guy given how this relationship started.
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    What a great Chapter! I’m loving seeing Adam and Jamie connect! But to my surprise, my favorite character so far is Jay. He’s such a loving brother and hysterical too.
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    Chapter 6

    PWS commented on and9993's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Wow! This story gets better with each Chapter! I love both Andrew and Connor!
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    Chapter 4 - Pride

    PWS commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Pride

    What a great chapter!
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