JojoeMS

Oh, almost forgot. The chapters are still too short. 😁

Why didn't they call Caleb's lawyer? Doesn't make sense.

Great chapter, but wwwwwaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy too short!

This story was hard to read at first, but now I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. Great writing. Can't wait until the next chapter.

This novel is awesome! I couldn't stop reading it. When do you think you will get to start the next one? You are one of my favorite authors. I'm reading everything you wrote over again. just great.

This story has so much potential to be a great novel, and I hope that you consider adding either more chapters to this story, or continue with a second, and may I even say third one as well? This is such a departure to the stories you have written so far (at least the ones that I have read) that it's refreshing to see you branch out from the other ones. BTW, if you need an editor (from what I have seen you need at least a pre-reader) I am willing to do this for you. Quite a few typo's and spell check errors, that I am willing to get back into editing for you. I did it for quite a few authors and I know good editors are hard to find. If you are interested send me a private message. This goes for the other authors that are reading this and want some help polishing up their work. Give me a PM Joe in MS

This story takes on some new meaning in 2021. This could be happening now. With Covid-19 flu epidemic happening this could have really taken place. I have to admit that I have done some thinking and planning along the lines of this story more and more. Jojoe in Mississippi