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  1. James Matthews

    Chapter 14

    The chapter scheduling mistake has been corrected. I do apologise if this has interpreted your reading experiencing. Please see the large font message above. Apologies one again. James
  2. James Matthews

    Chapter 15

    A cold wind was blowing in Heidgate, making the windows of old man Fred's house whistle like a howling ghost. Brandon, sitting in the lounge, looked over at one of them and eyed the peeling paint on the frame. He wondered why the old man had not bothered to try and insulate the place and make it warmer as a shiver went through his body. "Here it is!" Fred announced as he came back into the lounge, holding a box. "What is it?" Brandon asked, raising a brow. "Proof," replied Fred, s
  3. James Matthews

    Chapter 14

    "Okay, I'm sitting down, now what's the big deal?" Sage asked, getting impatient with a sheepish looking Adam. "So uh, Christian took me to the birthing chambers, as you know, and I finally got to see what they were all about." "And?" "Well, and uh…." "Is this the place where you are gonna be dissected to help them?" "No, Sage, this has nothing to do with my thing. This is a place where they make people." "Like robots?" Adam huffed. "No, Sage, not like robots!"
  4. James Matthews

    Chapter 13

    Relshek had now been in the booth with Adam for a little over 2 hours, explaining how the various systems worked when designing his Puritan. At the centre of the workstation was a ball that was sunk into the unit. Relshek rested his palm on it and showed Adam how, when he moved it, different things would happen depending on which part of the body was being designed. Adam was excited and asked many questions, which Relshek was quick to answer. "I will now bring an exact replica of your Purit
  5. James Matthews

    Chapter 12

    Adam and Relshek stepped onto a metal platform containing some kind of computer station. Relshek pressed a few buttons and it started to descend down a barren shaft with a jolt. Adam attempted to look over the edge but there wasn't one such was the tight fit the platform seemed to have with the surrounding walls. It got dim for a moment as the light above faded but moments later the brightness returned, albeit an artificial kind. The platform came to a sudden halt confirming they had reache
  6. Joey After getting back from my pampering day with Mum, things seemed a little bit different. So different as in I felt like a weight bad been lifted from me. Things between Jack and me continued to settle down too. We talked a lot more and I became less paranoid when I saw him talk to other guys in the club. I felt like we had been on this long journey of discovery. Kind of like a new star that had now collected all its matter and was about to ignite. A star that was now ready to settle do
  7. James Matthews

    The Talk

    Apologies for the dialog issues in this chapter. I don't know what went wrong. I wasen't even drinking. Anyway all the little bugs have been fixed now thanks to Markb Beta reading and letting me know.
  8. James Matthews

    Chapter 1

    Great start, really love the strong character introduction. Looking forward to reading the next chapters.
  9. Joey's POV Walking into the Spa building revealed a large high ceiling reception room. A maritime-themed chandelier hung from the ceiling, and all around the large room, little water features were bringing an immediate calmness to the place. The sound of trickling water and ambient music seeped into your consciousness. I could feel my blood pressure edging downwards every minute. Mum led us over to a long walnut counter together with a very well presented assistant behind it. The room
  10. James Matthews

    Chapter 11

    It had been 3 days since arriving on Purity and Adam was feeling the extreme differences to Earth as each day went by. His moods were beginning to become slightly erratic as was his attitude to Relshek when asked a question. It was Relshek's opinion that Sage was compounding the problem by egging him on whenever Adam said anything negative about his new home. With his new furniture installed and dog like pet there as a companion Relshek hoped that Adam would finally begin to settle, but thi
  11. Joey's POV I stared at the letter in front of me. Jack was asking me what was written on it, and all I could say so far is that it was from the NHS. To me, it all seemed unreal, but a sense of relief that followed a few stray tears was finally coming out of me. "Well?" Asked Jack, causing me to snap my head up at him. "It's from my Doctor; he wants to refer me to a councillor." "Oh." "Yeah, oh!" I repeated as if this was all Jack's doing. "Well, uh… well, I think th
  12. You speak what is on everyone's mind Sir
  13. That chapter was appalling. I never make that many spelling mistakes. I know why. I take very strong painkillers for my back. I slipped a disc about 4 years ago boxing. I usually try not to write for a few hours, but as it was bank holiday I was bored and decided to anyway. Hence all the mistakes. I apologise if it ruined the reading experience. They have all been corrected now, I also paid £150 for a program that is supposed to zap out any errors I make but again, because I had taken my meds I forgot to turn it on. DOH!!! Probably why that car crash was published like it was. It was terrible. I am a little ashamed I let that go live in it's current state, James
  14. James Matthews

    Chapter 10

    Adam and Sage were brought by Magnacar to their apartments, and true to the word of the man at the Council of Living, it was clear they were a stone's throw away from each other with only 3 other houses separating them. They occupied a lovely green tropical oasis with moist flowerbeds and wild wingless birds that roamed the paved walkways. Adam stopped outside Sage's building and looked up and around him, seeing giant trees that towered above them. They had blue-green trunks, and their leav
  15. Thanks for all the comments on this chapter guys. This chapter was REALLY hard to write, but I think it needed to be done seeing as this sort of criminal behaviour does go on and it's shocking and very sad. By the way, I was abused by a 24 year old man when I was 14. I was never raped but still taken advantage of and I knew no different really. The more extreme stuff I write about? Well, this comes from the internet and it makes me angry and sad. However, Much of my content and the characters I write about have little bit of my life in there. Not much, but some. And I find writing about it does me good. I just hope you enjoyed the content I put out and I thank you so much for all the input you give. James
  16. I don't think he will. He'll go to Joey. I think if he goes to the police he is scared it will break up his family. I can see why that would be the case. As I said to another reader, over 80% male rape goes unreported due to the various factors of a man being raped. It's a sad state of affairs. Thanks for the comments Pvtguy
  17. I have a fee;ling it will. Nice possibility though. Thanks for the comments.
  18. Possible
  19. No, I think Dean is stronger than he thinks. Right now he needs Joey to give his friends 5 minutes of his time rather than being wrapped up in his love life.
  20. Indeed. 74% of male rape goes unreported because men believe either a) nothing will be done and they won't believed. and b) because they are too ashamed to admit as a man they were violated like that. The figures are truly shocking. I wanted to write that scene because it DOES go on and it's a sad fact of life!
  21. Dean's POV I could hear footsteps coming up the stairs into the landing. I was sure no one was home so thought nothing of it. I'd just finished sorting out my uniform for school and was bopping away to the latest number one on the radio when I felt a presence just outside my room. "What the fuck do you want?" "Deano, how long is this gonna go on for?" My fuck of an Uncle asked, rolling into my room unannounced. "Oh, I dunno James, until you are dead perhaps, and don't call me
  22. It does feel that wau sometimes, I admit! haha
  23. You might be on to something there!
  24. Roman's POV Having just woken up, my mind turned immediately to the night before. I had been down in the club with Olly having a drink when it all kicked off with Joey and Dean. To be honest, I could see it happening the minute Dean arrived as he looked in a bad mood. I had gone over to see what the issue was and quickly found out Joey had given Dean the riot act over the phone about his Uncle mainly the fact he had not said anything to his parents about it yet. I'm surprised Dean even t
  25. James Matthews

    Chapter 8

    There was a posting hiccup with the timing system. This has been corrected now. I do apologise of you missed a chapter. I have contacted Cia about it as it seems to be a system "thing". But all chapters should now show correct. James
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