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  1. Ooh that's even better. Vince is a lawyer after all.
  2. A picnic tea at the Reserve with Graham Philpott might be a nice experience to offer.
  3. Mattyboy

    Chapter 26

    Maybe? He hasn't done anything really awful yet, and he must have been told that Jack and Nick were at the center of the fuss that ousted his predecessor.
  4. Mattyboy

    Chapter 26

    Quote: "We were a lot more careful now – anything that even came close to “sexual” activity stayed in our room, behind a locked door, usually after lights out." Wait what? The Harrison West dorms have lockable doors? So so much of this story could have turned out very differently if Jack or Nick or Noah had ever known that. At the very least I feel Jonah may have obtained some sort of master key when he acquired his "dorm goblin" status.
  5. Mattyboy

    Chapter 14

    woo, maybe Joel and Colt will have an actual conversation in which they respond to each other's remarks and maybe even questions!
  6. Oh good. The comments section is like Brad and Mike, we love and we worry.
  7. Mattyboy

    Chapter 25

    Wow in that video shovel-guy waits at the door for dance-boy for quite a long time. Maps onto this story pretty well then.
  8. Mattyboy

    Chapter 25

    The weeks of Jack and Nick waffling about what they were to each other was not a "swing for the fences." In baseball, a swing "for the fences" is trying to hit a home run (over the fence, like a six in cricket). It's going for the maximum, while increasing the risk that you might miss (swinging "for contact" is a more controlled, lower-risk, lower-reward strategy). So the walkout fits; it raised the stakes both for the students, who could be expelled, and for admin, who might need to explain in a press conference why the expelled someone for holding an "equality is for everyone" sign.
  9. Mattyboy

    Chapter 25

    Yes, "pending administrative leave" seems to make Mr G into "Schrödinger's dorm parent" for now. I agree with Altimexis about the pics, it'd trigger consequences that can't be controlled or even fully understood, and it's not clear that this is an emergency right now.
  10. Mattyboy

    Chapter 25

    And some banger sentences as well: "The whole school felt hushed now, like the moments after a thunderstorm when everything is still and waiting." "Jonah, climbed right into my lap like a squirrel with zero self-awareness." "Equality means everyone. We belong here.”
  11. Mattyboy

    Chapter 25

    I didn't quite get why this story was titled "Swing for the Fences" as it hasn't had much baseball in it, but this is it, isn't it?
  12. Do Gray and Vince get to pick the charity? If so they could sell it to the Reserve for any amount and the Reserve could afford it as they'd be expecting a large donation for the same amount. There'd be some wastage on fees and stuff but feels like there's a deal there.
  13. Mattyboy

    30: Finley

    This was a lovely moment but, yeah, Finley didn't quite get to the "how'd you feel about being my hoard?" conversation.
  14. Mattyboy

    Chapter 24

    I agree completely. Yeah, I dunno about the wording of Michigan law on this either. I agree that usually it'd be hard to find a prosecutor for the Nick/Jack situation, especially since they could clam up and there were no reliable witnesses. But Dr Kincaid put Mr G into legal jeopardy when she told him that she had an expectation that serial statutory rapes were about to commence, and that he ought to reinforce her how-to-rape-safely counsel (but not prevent them). Before that, Mr G had a solid legal defense available to him - that he didn't listen to or believe every rumour that floated about the common room, and hadn't witnessed anything illegal - and he lost the use of that defense when a parent informed him to expect criminal behavior, and he acted on that information. Dr Kincaid thought it was the best way to parent the boys, but she does not know Jack's parents, and she does not know whether or not Karen goes to church with the DA (who could be a recently elected red-hatter out get themselves into the national news). Mr. G could wind up not just fired but listed on a sex offender registry for counselling and abetting statutory rape. That would be a moral and legal outrage, but not beyond the reach of the most malignant DA that could exist in Michigan.
  15. Mattyboy

    Chapter 24

    It's barely adequate. She didn't mention the potential threat to Jack, so neither she nor the school can legally stop Jack's parents from yanking him back to California.
  16. Mattyboy

    Chapter 24

    I understand why you'd say this, but I don't see Karen as a hypocrite. She knew what she was doing and her plan's worked pretty well so far. The cruelty was the point.
  17. Mattyboy

    Chapter 24

    I am 20% over being furious with Nick's Mom. She's supposed to be an expert and a board certified physician at all, and she could not goddamn imagine that anti-gay prejudice and violence exists. This was criminally stupid and arrogant of her. She's a mandatory reporter and medical authority, and she can't even conceive that being outed to school admin might be bad for the boys or that the school might then be legally obliged to out Jack to his parents, when she knew that he had a very bad home situation. It was fun for her - I guess - to make Jack and Nick squirm, though. However she got over herself and did a fraction of what might be required to repair the damage, and reduce the chance of the last ten chapters of this story being Jack's wake. Maybe it was a good idea to omit from the letter that Jack is in mortal danger from his violently abusive parents because of this, but I hope she speaks to the Dean about that. Christian's "starve them of ammunition" strategy is a very good one, I think.
  18. Mattyboy

    Chapter 13

    That's the feature that unites Joel's parents and Davin's - they're completely indifferent to whether their children are flourishing. Joel's mother is the most malignant, but it's neglect in each case. And again, all the cards are face up in front of Joel now, I hope he can start figuring it out soon. And he should call Cody.
  19. Mattyboy

    Chapter 13

    Yes, very bleak. Maybe Joel will see it as an opening though, Davin's shared with him and has his own stuff going on. And seems pretty clear Davin wants a friend and is prepared to accept some weirdness as it goes. Although Joel could barely relax in the hot tub; a lot of that seemed to have a "just barely started" feel to it. It's interesting, when we met the Keplers I kinda though they were at the Connley's because they needed the work, not because they needed friends and family.
  20. Mattyboy

    Chapter 23

    Yes about Mom, even if it's embarrassing. For Jack's parents, I don't think the big issue is that they might send him to a school-not-of-his-choosing, it's that they might beat him to death.
  21. Mattyboy

    Chapter 23

    I'm really glad I know about the 23 chapters. I didn't get it about Mr G until Christian explained, but yes, the worst case scenario (as @drsawzall outlines) is that Jack's parents pull him from school and destroy him offstage. I figured that G basically knew that. Maybe Jack and Nick can be separated but room with Mark and Emery or something. That would be bad for them emotionally but not complete disaster.
  22. Mattyboy

    Chapter 40

    That'd be cool. It's been fun for me to act up about Matt in the comments because of my forum-name, but I think there's something there. These were written before there was much public awareness (especially in places like South Carleton, but not just there) about identities like pan, or omni, or Achillean. In this story, Matt's bit of "I'm not gay, but I like my boyfriend's cock" is mostly comic, but there could be some nuanced exploring what that means for him in Edmonton. Matt as a character isn't trapped by too many obvious hang-ups and neuroses, but he hasn't fully matured and figured himself out, because he's still young.
  23. Mattyboy

    Chapter 10

    Yeah, that was a bad end, but it seemed that Hugo and Jimmy spent a while being good to each other, and good for each other, but it wasn't built to last.
  24. Mattyboy

    Chapter 10

    Well, if you're willing to risk a total protonic reversal, cross as you please.
  25. Mattyboy

    Chapter 10

    Don't cross the memes!
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