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  1. Dan South
    Your character development is so solid. Each and every one has walked with a unique voice. Then here comes Tasha. Mercy me. I’m reading this in a public space and I was shaking trying not to laugh out loud.
  2. Dan South
    “The lion shifter felt prideful…” I don’t think you did that on purpose, Author, but it made me snort. Lion. Pride. Good stuff. Great chapter!
  3. Dan South
    The whole emotional roller coaster in this chapter. You get my eyes all wet and then you make me laugh out loud. Wrap it up with absolute joy reading the reunion. I have seven and a half hours of travel to the west coast tomorrow and I will be binging hard. Thrilled to take Mace and Vincent on the trip with me!
  4. Dan South
    I did not see the Elaine twist coming. Brilliant! I half expected her to be a bad actor certainly not Mace’s mom and a badass to boot. And tea with evil in Venice. What a civilized introduction to a monster.
  5. Dan South
    That sex scene? Two frosty thumbs up. Paranormal trickery from that little hussy. Great chapter, start to finish!
  6. Dan South
    There’s definitely more to Elaine than meets the eye…or nose. Meryl is a fine choice but did you see Jessica Lange in AHS: Coven? I think she should get a chance to read for the role when you sell the movie rights, Author.
  7. Dan South
    I laughed out loud at “…feeling a bit like a floozy.” Excited to read on!
  8. Dan South
    Your Kentucky definitely shows in this one! We’ll done.
  9. Dan South
    Every Rocky Prompt has been a great read but I think (not finished) I now have a favorite! This one is just fantastic. Monty Python warned us about bunnies. This sealed the deal.
  10. Dan South
    Thank you for the A/N to read the story before the prompt story. That said, I’m deeply concerned about Jake’s home life. I mean, buncha griping on social media? Obviously he’s single, bum bumping has been ruled out as well. He doesn’t seem to miss anyone. Doesn’t anyone miss him? Sad. 😜
  11. Dan South
    I’m left here wondering what the correct spelling of “jinkies” is. Now I can head back to Rocky Prompts. Thoroughly enjoyed this and all of the comments too!
  12. Dan South
    Absolutely hooked me with the first one. Reading on!
  13. Dan South
    An absolute delight to read from the first word to the last. Bravo!
  14. Dan South

    Chapter 37

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 37

    My compliments on the service dog narrative. My niece spent many years training service dogs and their humans and you’re spot on. Liam’s donation to Ink Well is a beautiful touch!
  15. Dan South

    Chapter 31

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 31

    You write and evoke powerful emotions, kbois. Liam brought me to tears…again!!
  16. Dan South

    Chapter 21

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 21

    You made me cry again. Beautiful chapter.
  17. Dan South

    Chapter 10

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Whiplash! I am wrung out after these two chapters! I need a break. And a cigarette
  18. Dan South

    Chapter 9

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Wow. Wow wow wow wow. I was blown away by the Lex twist only to be hurricane force blown away by JuJu’s story. And I’ve got to throw an amen to the organized religion take down. Goosebumps and wet eyes. Wow!
  19. Dan South

    Chapter 3

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I’m late to the party as this story is long ago ‘complete’. I can’t think of any gay man, myself included, that didn’t, hasn’t, gone through a form of Jarren’s experience. No one wants to be ‘other’. I know he’ll find his way. I just have to keep reading, right?
  20. Dan South

    Chapter 35

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 35

    Several comments have included the word “magical” and it is a perfect description for this beautiful, thoughtful, detailed love story. Your imagination is a wonderful, wild thing, kbois. Thank you for sharing it with us.
  21. Dan South

    Chapter 34

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 34

    Way to make a grown man cry! The letter was beautiful.
  22. Dan South

    Chapter 21

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 21

    “…splork…” I absolutely heard that! Great detail throughout your storytelling. Day two of my binge reading and I’m in love with all of these characters.
  23. Dan South

    Chapter 12

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 12

    I’m in tears. Absolutely joyful tears and goosebumps. And, whew, I need a cigarette!
  24. Dan South

    Chapter 8

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I cried with the guys. Beautiful, amazing chapter.
  25. Dan South

    Chapter 2

    Dan South commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 2

    So pleased to have found this story!
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