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@Mark Arbour That was a great chapter. I don't think Buck is trying to kill Travis anymore. Because Travis is worth more alive than dead, what I mean by that is Buck knows that Travis is very close to Will, so he could have hired that Angel guy to kidnap Travis and hold him for ransom, and Brad and them would pay the ransom. oh crap I just thought about Jake and Travis being half-brothers, I wonder if Mark is going to do like they did with JP, at the very beginning, where JP finds out that the man that raised him isn't his biological father, and Jake finds out the man that he calls father was not his biological father.
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@CLJobe Thanks for such a quick update. This chapter seems like Armand, is not as depressed. I loved the story behind Pierre, sharing one of his peanuts.
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@CLJobe That was a sad chapter. I am a little worried about Armand's, mental state. if you write it that he does hurt himself please put a trigger warning at top of chapter. So I can skip it. Cause suicide is a big trigger for me. Because it takes me back to June 16, 2018. That was the day that I really thought about ending it. I was at my high school reunion and I was very depressed and I had a double shot of Makers Mark Kentucky Bourbon Whiskey. The reason why I was so depressed was because my best friend/Brother of 31 years had just passed two weeks before my mom was sick and we didn't know if she was going to make it. That was one of the darkest moments of my life.
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@Mark Arbour That was a good chapter. I can understand why Jake, had such a dramatic reaction, to seeing Travis, But I don't think that Jake is Travis father. Because time frame does not work since Jake said he turned 16 in 1986 and got the job by July of that year Fastforward nine months and it would have been April of 1987 which would put Travis being 17 not 18. so either Jake got the year mixed up or the year was a typo on Mark's side.
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I don't think that was the peak at all. If it was than that wasn't that dramatic. It was a good cliffhanger. What I want to know is who other than Curtis wants Travis dead? I don't think that it was Curtis that sent the guy who had the photo of Travis, Because who did Curtis know that Travis was back in California?
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@Mark Arbour That was a great chapter. I can see what Cody, was saying about if Travis wants to be a big actor in Hollywood, he has to be single. But I see a different way for Travis, to act and be out at the same time he could be a actor that does Broadway plays at first and once he has built up his credentials and then he can move on to acting in Hollywood.
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Chapter 1: Working the Night Shift 2
bjrh008 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Working the Night Shift 2
@Bill W That was a good chapter. I think that it would be cool if you write a new part every October. -
@Mark Arbour Great chapter. I really wonder if Zach, is telling the truth about the conversation that he supposedly overheard. And why couldn't Zach tell Will, about everything? I wonder if it's because Zach is the person that Curtis had hired to kill Travis. and he really didn't overhear a conversation he actually had a conversation with Curtis.
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@Mark Arbour That was a great chapter. I am glad that I decided to read this book first so I have something hopefully laugh to with Gap Year.
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Cause we all know that phrase the calm before the storm. and we still have to worry about Buck trying to off Travis.
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Even though you took it in a different direction, I so flashed back to Robbie with this. Brought a tear to my eye. I can just hear Robbie, saying I am not fat. I miss Robbie charter. But I think that Jake, is much better for Brad, than Robbie was. Because Brad has the challenge with Jake that he had with Robbie, yet he also has the faithfulness from Jake that he never could get from Robbie. @Mark Arbour That was a great chapter. Once again you get me excited for next chapter.
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@Mark ArbourThat was a great chapter. can't wait to for next chapter.
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Yes Will, does have anger issues, but you got to take into consideration, who Will's father is. And you also have to consider, this as well, Travis had accused Will's whole family which is one of Will's most important if not the most important things he cherishes. being pretty much nothing but thieves.
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I am glad that I did not get Covid-19 until after they came out with a vaccine, so my illness was milder than it would have been if I had got it before a vaccine for it was available.
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@Mark ArbourThat was a great chapter. But remember my, dire warning that if anything happens to Travis, we all will uprise with pitchforks and torches. And I do mean anything.
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I loved this story.
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That's great
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BTW Rusty is still MINE on another note @Laura S. Fox if you break them up we all will uprise with pitchforks and torches.
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I feel bad for Rusty, I know what's it like to think it's your fault. I think if the mom dies Rusty, will never be the same carefree person he is. But if the mom lives, I think Rusty will still lose his carefree mindset. So either way he's going to lose his carefree mindset. And I also think it's going to affect his relationship with Matt, but in a positive way in the long run. But in the short term it's going to hurt it maybe to the point of destroying it.
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you have me there.
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well, the cars that you say were destroyed they were only damaged and the only reason why he had done that was because the GUARD THAT BRAD, AND ROBBIE HAD HIRED ASSAULTED HIM not only physically, but he also had groped him as well. About the drugging of two people, he only intended to roofie the guard he did not intend to roofie Robbie. So, you're saying that if your parents/Guardian had hired a guard that had assaulted you not only physically but sexually as well you would have not of tried to strike out at the people that hired the goon?
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At the time he was not 6'2" and also at the time he was A MINOR so it's an assault on a minor. also it was unprovoked that left buries and fingernail marks on his wrist. If a cop had seen that take place, she would have been arrested. Besides Will is only 14 at the time of the assault so you have a lot of maturing to do so it is like he has one foot in childhood and the other foot in adulthood so of course he is going to have mood swings that's just normal.
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I will just take Jamie off Matty's hands since he's so googo gaga for Rusty.
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NO HE'S MINE I tell yah Mine! lol
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True, but I can understand, why Rusty doesn't want Matty to meet his mess of a mom.
