FrenchCanadian

He has a good point no one can't deny. Take any book, any story, if it's any good, you'll want and wonder to know what's going to happen next. If you retract yourself, I'll do the same. sacha

Yoouuuuupyyyy Happy Birthday!!!!!! I hope you have a really good day. All the best for the day and the upcoming year!

hehe,, That is a nice little story Steve!! Nice of you to post it for all to read. Happy Holidays CJ and to everyone whether your a caprican or part of the Herd. edit: I corrected myself, I blame it on being awake since 3 am for work,, off to bed now before I say more stupid stuff ,lol

That's it! I tried to be neutral on that business, but now,,, no can do, you are the queen of cliffhanger!!!! Actually, it doesn't prove much of your case,

It seems like I'm liberal also on that point of view. The girl is 16, I'm not talking about her maturity, she's old enough to consent. Also, she did the stuff with her, I'd assume, boyfriend. It would be stupid to think that, at those age, people don't have sex at all. Therefore it would be a little stupid to prosecute the boyfriend for that. It is also interesting the double standard when it's boy sex; for some reason, the age of consent for boys is older, I think.

Happy B-Day!!!!!!! I hope you have a good one and get all your wishes

I don't think I have any real, major, problem with keeping track of all the characters. They're all in their own setting, there's Helen (and barbra) on their own, The boys of Instinct, and those around dimitri. Altho, I wouldn't be able to tell you who were the 2 other girls with Charity (tho I do remember they were two others ), and the same goes with some others. Now that Graeme said it, I do agree with him (I find that I use those 5 words often btw), In a strange way Jon is the one major character that might be the weakest. He often lay low; when Chase has problem with his brother it's always 'cause of Eric's doing. Like Graeme said he haven't really had a big air time and therefore we don't know as much how he is. About the guys from The Shadow, without saying that mixing them up cause a big problem for me, I'd say it's still too early for me to define them clearly. But, I think it's perfectly normal as we still are getting to know them. sacha

making sure that the reader will keep on reading ain't using cliffhangers!! sacha

Steve's right on,, if someone were to tell me to buy some crips,, the only thing that would come in mind would be a "crispers" bag from Mr Christie

Ya, but poutine that's an entire different things than fries. But ya, if you ever come to Quebec you just have to try poutines. it's simple they have some in every fast food franchise (A&W, burger king, McDo,,, and so on)

I don't see why that is a better quote, I did say that the end of chapter 4 wasn't a cliffhanger. that it was just enough to make people wanting to read some more, just like CJ does. Now how is that cliffhangers?? Sacha

we call them, at least in quebec, respectively fries and chips. In french here, you'd call them "frites" (sometimes "patates frites") and "Chips" (tho the right term would be "croustilles") Also as a quebecois slang, you could call fries "une graisseuse" but that really, really show a lack of education. Calling "Chips" here "crips", I certainly wouldn't understand that.

ya, sometimes it wins, in all this, the BBC lost a little of its credibility and "The Pogues" won some free publicity

Or maybe we ticked him off good enough and doesn't wanna talk to us anymore. ok maybe not. But now he can say that he's only a shy lurker goat it's time for other people to step up if we wanna keep the post count

thx, graeme, it's a fun e-card. nice song too. I do like the aussie accent too

I don't think the banning of words do any good. Yes, sometimes word can be offensive. but one can use offensive words like "fag" in kind setting. As long as you don't use them to insult someone it's alright. also it does get against the creativity or authors.

ya sadly that's true, I don't know why they do,, there's quicker way to kill yourself, maybe those that really are looking to get HIV want to get some attention.

edit: well graeme went faster than me and got it right Here, brandon is wearing here shorts with nothing under them, and is shirtless. sacha

Oh seeing Greame signature made me remember,, you gotta keep in mind that C James is a lurkers and that he uses cliffhangers but they aren't evil.

You are officially welcomed to the club! you'll see, all the guys (and gals) here are all great. I did tell you that you should post in the forums

yay, I'll be in the first ones to actually give comments this time around,, It was a good chapter, just like we've been use to really. The party was nice, and Brandon finally been able to give his b-day gift to Chase. I was looking forward to that. A book on Interior decorating ideas!!! really?, geez, I know it was really last minute and that it was at the hotel gift shop, but at least they coulda given him some fiction. or a kama sutra guide, LOL Yes, at the end of the party, Zeke and Steve were acting much more cool but not Wilde. He's up to something that might be wild, and I think that Wilde will pressure his band mates into whatever he's up to. For sure there's a little something there. If Eric knows he does so much stupid stuff on tequila why in god's name he still drink some. and why Jon let him too, eventually one of his stunt will get him injured. Actually when he jumped off the roof's edge I woulda bet that he had broken somehing. sacha

ya, That's right, I remember reading that it would be up on Saturday. Maybe he decided that he should already get back on his regular schedule track. maybe someone get to our beloved goat and told him that he wouldn't be posting a new chapter until he changed the cliff hanging part of it. Sacha

yup and when you've tasted automatic, you don't want to go back to driving on a stick. tho, Frosty is right, if I ever wanna live in europe I'll have to learn to drive on a stick or else I'll have to pay much much more for the car

I can relate to that, when I drove in Trinidad (they also drive on the wrong side just like in England), everytime I wanted to start the flasher, I'd go for the wipers instead Technology made human capable of making automatic cars, why turning our back to great inventions.

gaydar ain't good for everyone. one of my best always said that he has a good gaydar. Tho somehow he managed to miss that his cousin is gay and he was seeing him at least everyweek. as for me, well can't say I have one. You'd really have to be "girly" acting for me to guess. I'm guessing that even if 2 guys were to kiss on the street I'd wonder if they're gay, LOL